| "A Saiyan For All Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 209 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: May 01, 2004 11:53 EDT
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DAMN! This was a hot chapter. And they didn't even have any sex yet! That's incredible. I've said it before, and I'll say it again: You write the best B/V fanfics ever! Keep up the VERY good work =D P.S. Those people at ff.net are just fools. They must've never read your fics!!
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Reviewed By: hinagiku On: May 01, 2004 09:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ijust love this fic^^ O:O and I want to give you a review to keep you writing^^ I'm selfish after all. Yeah, funny conversaton^^ I'm sure Vegetas warning was about sex, since he said he just listens to his body.. yeah, I hope for a lemon actually... but your chapters are all good anyway...
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Title: E'llo
Reviewed By: Krysis Cura Tyranny On: May 01, 2004 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am deeply sorry for what FF.net has done to you. ::Sigh:: I know what Reviews mean trust me I do. PhantomScribe E-mailed me and I am sure hundreds of others about what they did to you. I have never read a fic from you but now that I have had a chance to I am in awe. You have as much skill as PhantomScribe told me of. I wish for the best, and hope for and update. IF you could put me on a mailing list if you have one, if not my lazy arse will have to check up on this fic. Thank you for your wonderful peace of art. I two am on FF.net and losing 2 good friends over it. I am waiting for myself. ::Laughs:: Krysis Cura Tyranny
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Reviewed By: amck On: April 30, 2004 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to here that ffnet deleted your account. You are a very talented writer, and I have read ALL of you works and I do not understand there reasoning.... even if I don't review as much as I should. Glad that you have decide to continue on dispite this set back. I am enjoying this fic and I like the style of this fic very much. I too am from England and it is nice to read fics that have some home phrases in them... (ie calling someone an wanker or an arse... such good phases that are seldom used in fics... I suppose thats because most writers are from the US). Execellent story so far and keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: oh my freaking--WOW!
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: April 30, 2004 06:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one just keeps getting better and better! I'm sitting here stunned with how you've compacted so much B/V sexual tension into one chapter and managed to keep both in vivid character--Bulma saying "Duh-uh" and doing that lilting tease thing, and Veggie being still so menacing. The Bulma being able to read ki is a wonderful development! Your explanation makes it seem like the most natural thing in the world (I was just reading Tsunami's When Worlds Collide and her mystic Bulma is thrilling but by no means as easy& authentic as yours--your Bulma has the gift all sensitive females have!) I can honestly say that what I read tonight is the most primo B/V sexual tension scene ever!!! (and here I thought that the chapter "Beautiful" was hot and promising!) He's actually touched her now, grazed her face with surprising gentleness only to sock her with some freaky pain and threats a moment later--I can not believe you are writing a get-together fic that has me wondering what is going to happen next! debbiechan (and yes, ffnet can do what it wants--so can you!!!!)
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Reviewed By: Diablos42069 (not signed in) On: April 30, 2004 04:45 EDT
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dude, i know exacally what you mean about you losing all those reviews when ff.net deleted your account. they deleted one of my stories that had nearly 400 reviews. I was soooooooo bumbed out. anyways, this chapter was fuckin great dude! I loved it, update soon! I'll be checking daily^.~ Arianna
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Title: You're the best!!!!
Reviewed By: leonie/freaky-grl On: April 30, 2004 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're fics are just great!!!. You're one of the best writers around!!! I hope you update soon!!:D
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Reviewed By: leonie On: April 30, 2004 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're fics are just great!!!. You're one of the best writers around!!! I hope you update soon!!:D
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: April 30, 2004 02:25 EDT
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well the move has not put a damper in your great writing, wonderfull chapter. and ff can kiss butt they are destroying far too many good authors. much love I'm out. I'm not signed in but eh, oh well
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Title: More, please, More!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: April 29, 2004 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This last chapter was excellent!! I'm so sorry your accound on fanfiction.net was closed down. I know a lot of great writers whose accounts were shut down because of a little bit of lime or lemon content that was necessary for the progression of their story. But don't worry, you can always post here or on adultfanfiction.net. Either way I'll continue reading and my greatest hope is the next time you update there will be two or three chapters (hint, hint)!! Keep up the good work and tell your friend congrats on the new baby!
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover 1 On: April 29, 2004 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to hear about your trouble with ff.net. I always enjoy reading your stories, even if I don't review as often as I should. I'm just not that good with words. I loved the line: I'm Bulma Brief. And Bulma Brief always gets what she wants. You go, girl! nts.
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 21:24 EDT
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Couldn't help but peek and those few words you added after Vegeta's bombshell were absolutely perfect! totally captured the embarassement but showed how her fascination drove her forward. Such an awsome story, Ember! It's a pleasure to "buff" your genius!
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Title: The Insane Reviewer
Reviewed By: Guan Long, The Insane Fan of Bardock On: April 24, 2004 13:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! It me Zhang Zhen from ff.net. Your Fanfics Rules!
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Reviewed By: Reya On: April 22, 2004 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
writers block uh? are you kidding me!!! These first three chapters are GREAT!!!! I can't wait for another one. Gods, your talent is down right unreal...in a very, very, very good way.
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Reviewed By: me On: April 22, 2004 19:49 EDT
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wow....that was a weird morning. bulma hasn't ever worked on the GR at all? what does she do at work if she doesn't invent? all that "running the business" crap? hehe.
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