| "Diplomatic Relations" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] |
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Title: Reluctant Reader
Reviewed By: RazZadig [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I admit I read this story just b/c I got weary of waiting for more "Freeport". Never got much into Naruto before but, of course, this is so well-written I can't help getting involved with Lee and Gaara. Sweet and appears in character (tho I'm not an expert in Naruto). Am also looking forward to how you are going to do the NC-17. Also like the integration of plots with the character development. Very well done! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: eden's chaos On: November 29, 2005 19:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did a great job with the emotional scenes!! damn i love this fic. i check the updates on mediaminer everyday just to see if you've updated!! you are the coolest authoress on this site!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagedtiger (not logged in) On: November 28, 2005 23:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never would have read this myself, not being into the Naruto fandom anymore, but a friend of mine insisted. I must admit, it was a little tough getting through the first couple of chapters. But once I hit chapter 7 or so, I was eager to continue. ^_^ Good job! I'm really looking forward to reading more of this.
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Reviewed By: H On: November 28, 2005 01:40 EST
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Awww!! i love this chapter! hey pixie,me too...cant wait for the NC-17...tee-hee!XD hurry up and update it!
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Reviewed By: pixie (nsi) On: November 27, 2005 23:17 EST
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Beautiful as always. I look forward to the NC-17 chapter. Mmmm...
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Reviewed By: trinity helix On: November 27, 2005 22:53 EST
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i've said this before but i'll say it again: this is what i look forward to every week. :) likewise, it's the best lee/gaara fics i've ever read, if not the best naruto one. keep up the fantastic work. :D
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Reviewed By: Inarae On: November 23, 2005 21:53 EST
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>>I distinctly recall saying this would be a 'short series of small drabbles' when I started this insanity. *evil smirk* I'm SOOOOO glad you're in such a terrible predicament I don't even have the words. I love the way you mix plot and romance. It's so rare to find someone who can do that I can hardly beleive it. Thankees for the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: V On: November 20, 2005 18:16 EST
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can't wait till the next weekend for your next update...*happy dance* I like how the story is going. Good to see the konoha characters like Gai, Kakashi and Tsunade. Hopefully the leegaara part will come soon. But its worth the wait. I like long stories anyway. Its good to build up the relationship before anything happens too fast. Oh, its great that Lee realises his true feelings for Gaara. Really admire your writing skills
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Reviewed By: Vitaralastla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 05:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay... I found this fic on AFF.net at first, and I fell in love with it instantly! Your portrayal of Lee and Gaara's personalities... well, everyone's personalities is excellent! Go forth and write more! I love long fan-fics/novels/movies/manga/whatever, as long as it's good! And you're doing very good! ... Doing very well... I need more sleep, I think... >_
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Reviewed By: Meanderingwhoisnotloggedin On: November 19, 2005 19:32 EST
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There's not much to comment on, this chapter, since it's mostly setting out the plot, like chess pieces. I wait eagerly for the next installment. *pokes* And update that Kakashi/Iruka fic, will you?
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Reviewed By: pixiesmith nsi On: November 19, 2005 19:22 EST
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Lovely as always. I am very excited about the next chapter as always. I adore the way you write Gai. He's rather smarter than you'd believe, no?
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Reviewed By: Meanderingwhoisnotloggedin On: November 16, 2005 22:55 EST
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Excellent writing - as usual. I really, really hope you update soon, because everytime I read a fic of yours that is NOT a oneshot, I seem to come in at the precise psychological cliffie. Damn you. I feel sorry for Lee. I know that we're looking at it entirely from his POV, but the seeming one-sidedness of his... affection can be really frustrating. I love your stories thugh. *sighs* I'll be back...
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Reviewed By: Inarae On: November 14, 2005 00:11 EST
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See previous comment, up the awwww factor, and toss in a bucket of gratitude for the nice action sub-plot. Blood and romance, what could be better? Thanks yet again for writing and sharing.
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Reviewed By: Inarae On: November 14, 2005 00:03 EST
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Ok, I haven't finished reading all the updates since the last time I was here, but I just have to say: Awwwwwwww...... (melts into little puddle of warm fuzzies)
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Reviewed By: trinity helix On: November 06, 2005 15:01 EST
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oh my sweet, sweet lord. it was a long wait for this one, but so. bloody. worth it. lovely chapter...
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