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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 16:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, ahha, great chapter. I'm glad Inuyasha's finally figuring some of it out...Or getting there, anyway :D I'm just confused about something. Aren't there scars on Kagome's back? And, if so, wouldn't Inuyasha have seen them? Or has he just not seen her bare back?
| Reviewed By: inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 11:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite seriously one of the best fics I've ever read. I've been reading it for the past three days and I LOVE it. I can't wait until the next update. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: July 24, 2009 09:37 PDT
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So I have just read your entire story in the past three days! I've laughed, sobbed, gotten extremely angry, and in the end I absolutely love it!!! It is amazing and the only reason I haven't read it until now is that I'm such a slow reader and when I originally found it, it was already so long. I'm so happy I read it. It's amazing!! Truly!!! I can't wait to see what happens. Life can be like your story though. It can have awful fathers and cheating cousins and covered-up pregnancies!! Thank you for writing something so raw. It's a risk to write something so powerfully painful, because most people love the fairytale. I'm happy that you're letting us, as the readers, go through this horrible journey with your characters. This way when they find true happiness, we'll realize how much it was worth it. Thanks again for an awesome story!!!
| Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 05:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay :D I got it. I love Greg House and his smart-assism.
| Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2009 21:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter. I loved it. And the only place I've heard that phrase is off of House (Which is an amazing series. Couldn't live without it). I hope I'm right XD
| Reviewed By: Katlady13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2009 11:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated!!!! Thank you!!! It always makes my day when you've updated. This chapter did a good job outlining how all parties involved have decided on a course of action and are sticking to it. It's good Kags finally came clean to her mother, about damn time. I really loved InuYasha this time. He was freaking hilarious! I want to be a ninja too. OMG that got me. It's fantastic he's finally decided what he wants vs. what he doesn't want and is doing something about it. Props to sesh too. I think it was probably hardest for him. The only thing I missed out on was of course Inu/Kags interaction, but they are both really hurting right now. Meaning when they do meet back up it's gonna be that much more intense. OH! Did you hear they've decided that they are going to finish the anime after all? Gonna pick up where they left off and finish, starting this fall in Japan. Anyway, good stuff, can't wait for your next update, as usual!
| Reviewed By: Leilachan nsi On: July 22, 2009 12:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are forgiven for the long wait. ~.• just glad that u are still writing. I was feeling the anxiety right along side those guys in the car! I am suprised sess got off so lightly for his f-up... But i guess since toga already knew about it, it was less shocking. And no dead kagejiro. Phew! Now it just leaves yash. And kagome. *scratches head* can't wait!!!
| Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2009 10:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I don't know how some authors can be so good. Besides a few grammer mistakes, which I even find in published books but well known authors, this story is spotless. I love it. For some reason, I think that Souta is Kagome's son...But I don't know why I think that, because I really have no reason to. It's weird. Anyway, thanks for another wonderful chapter.
| Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2009 22:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I'm really curious as to what really happened in Japan. I hope it reveals it soon :/ Not likely though, I'm sure. >,< Dangit
| Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2009 19:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing so far. I've been amused through the whole thing, and it's not one of those fanfictions that you read and right off feel as if they just need to get to the point. I have enjoyed everything I've read so far, and I can't wait o read the next chapter. I have a feeling Sesshoumaru is the father of Rin's baby...But I could always be wrong. I've found it weird lately how I'll read a book and know exactly what's going to happen involving a certain situation. I'm glad I found this, it's quite intertaining. When I'm done with this- which seems will be awhile- I hope to read more of your work, and see if they are as intertaining.
| Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2009 12:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, so she went home and he went home. they explained themselves and for inuyasha it seems that things seemed to have worked out. why didn't he stand up to his father before? afraid of losing his money? i guess he just wanted to make his old man proud. their father already knew everything, they were just scared of him. what's going to happen in both those relationships i wonder? can't wait for more. please have more soon!
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Reviewed By: blackr0s3 (logged out) On: July 21, 2009 06:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy to have read a new chapter. I can't believe how many evil people there are in this story. I wonder how everything will end, will it be depressing or a "&they lived happily ever after" type thing? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2009 00:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WICKED is the best!!! I saw it in Melbourne, (Australia) for my friends birthday and the end of mid year exams! I was so upset when I heard the last song start... Fantastic Chapter! I was reading it threw out the day, during my lecture and tutorial... (NNNNOOOOOO I DON'T WANNA GO BACK!!! start of second term sucks!) you kept me wide awake during the boring repetitive things I heard (and will hear again in my next lecture)
| Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to state again AWSOME STORY...YOU ARE A GREAT AUTHOR...PLEASE CONTINUE DON'T LEAVE ME HAGING........
| Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 17:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"We are losing both the Fukimori and the Higurashi families because of you and your brother's inability to keep it in your pants." Great Toga! Two thumbs-up for that line. It's just so true. It was also a great ending to this chapter, to have him completely alone in his office while he thought he still had to deal with Kagejiro (who is, by the way, amazing with his sarcasm). You've done a great work, again! I'm Maggy by the way. I'm just using my MM account, now that I have one. You're welcome, about the corrections :). When you'll be editing your chapters, just send me the French lines you might want me to check (I believe there's a PM thing here at MM? Oh, well, I still have the same pen name at FF.Net) and it will be done quickly, since I always check my emails/messages once a day. Oh and, if it can help with your editing... Inuyasha's mother's name is actually spelled Izayoi, not Izayio. You're not the only author who did the mistake, anyway. But hey, I think I'll stop talking about corrections and mistakes, because I feel like bitching around. ^^ I really, really want to see how Inuyasha will try to get Kagome back. At least he's through with Kikyo for good. And Sesshomaru (Sissy-maru, damn xD) seems to have it all figured out about his business, Rin and Kenren. But I'm sure you still have some drama planned... don't you? I can't wait for your next update! But so far, I'm satisfied with this one. See ya!
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