| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 15:46 PDT
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i was practically fucked XD I had to read the last three chapters since i found out i never read them O.o But i dont care - i had laughs n all that shit! It was amazing... i dont kno where to start cuz am no amma jus ramble like an idiot. but Jiro is so damn hot!! *drools* no no, he puts a new meaning to hot *sighs* honestly, and the accent was so delicious OMG!! more thant delicious - dang... i think u jus made me infatuated with him.. like i give a hell... i'd strip naked for him lmao. Sesshomaru - lawd, i feel for him but at the same time i wanna hit him... first off, i think its so cute how jiro can handle him... he's like the version of inuyasha when hes the one "controlling" inuyasha... he's like a pup! - a hot pup! lol... though how he called his son a mud blood >.> I hated him for that... i mean, he got his head so far up his ass to be calling his SON that?? And i kno inuyasha feel it/ understands it more since he's the same as his nephew - which i wished that you'd let Inuyasha punch his lights out!! >:{ I'm eager to see how sesshie story will turn out.. and rin is going through a hard time as it is, n the kid needs a father figure too! Then... there's the comedian aka Miroku.. god i love him! lol he can take any tough situation and make a joke out of it! The comedy in this is awesome, something that i will forever love! I'm starting to feel even more sorry for kags too.. and kikyo jus had to catch them when they decided to ends thing huh?? stupid jak.. i hope that hit that kags gave him broke some part of his pansy body - i mean i kno he meant well, but in some cases its not needed... sob sob... its so sad... n they're lil moment behind the bar was so cute... JIRO IS SO HOT!! OOT OOT!! ((random)) lmao .... i love this fic, i love jiro, i love u for writing this fic and i love jiro!! ^_^ until next time... take care and JA!! =)
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 15:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That was such a good chapter!!! I can't believe that Kikyo finally found out! And *yay* that was REALLY good!!!!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 13:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! "One of these days I'm gonna' ram a parking cone up his ass!" That was from InuYasha Parody! Lol...it would've been funnier if Yash said it though..but he was rightly pissed at the moment. As for Jakotsu..what the hell? He does everything in his power to keep Kaggie away from Yash but waits for his hell-spawned cousin to almost KILL her before taking action? That's not right! Kags and Yash should've punched him for that. Despite everything though...I kind of feel bad for Kikyou having to catch them like that. You've actually made her character...Dare I say it? Likeable. Lol...ANYWAY, loved the chapter! Till your next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 12:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap ola with fries on the side! I'm laughing my ass off at Kage, then I'm fanning myself because, dear Jesus!, Inuyasha has a mouth on him. :shutters: Then, in the middle of crying my eyes out because they've given up, I just about have a heart attack. I never saw Kikyo coming! If I were Kagome, I'd knock the crap out of Jac, too! He and Sango need to join the meddlers anomoyous together. And Sesshoumaru, I really wish Inuyasha would have punched him. Maybe Kage will when he goes outside...Anyway! Thankyou so much for the update. I will wait with baited breath for the next update. THANKYOU! Ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 31
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 12:28 PDT
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Ah, a long-awaited revelation. The fallout from this will reverberate for chapters to come. I'm glad Inuyasha realizes what he's doing to Kagome, but that's something he needs to sort out on his own, not fuck her around switching back and forth between Inuyasha and Sha - pun certainly intended. I can't recall, does Jakotsu know the truth behind Inuyasha and Sha?
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Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 12:07 PDT
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o my gosh. and yet even more shit goes down. amazing chapter hun, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 11:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG - you updated! *hyperventilates* -- ok ok... am going to read now n then give u a killer review xD
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 13:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC AND I LOVE U 4 WRITING IT AND BEING SO GOOD.... WOW I LOVE IT (I KNO U'VR HEARD THIS LIKE 109099430949557 TIMES B4 BUT...)UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 13:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC AND I LOVE U 4 WRITING IT AND BEING SO GOOD.... WOW I LOVE IT (I KNO U'VR HEARD THIS LIKE 109099430949557 TIMES B4 BUT...)UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 03:35 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20June08 /bestauarfiction2nd.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123 On: July 01, 2008 02:24 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey dont feel bad.I'm glad your still writing this story, you've been writing it for 2 years that is really amazing.You have a life to live.Taking time out of your day to write a story for strangers is really cool.Thats why you remain my favorite author.Your stories are the main reason I still read fanfics.Great chapter and Sessh is an asshole, LOL calling his own kid a mudblood. unbelievable. your loyal fan, -Blaccwolf123-
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Reviewed By: peachzykeen On: June 24, 2008 17:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah ur back from the dead! well i guess i can't really complain about the long bouts between updates I'm not really that current with my own..hehe...anyways tho OMG HOW COULD SESSHY SAY THAT?!...yet again not like i didn't see it comming...sesshy needs to find rin and make up....and how could Kagome not see what is so painfully right in her face? and that goes for Kikyo as well...her more even...anyways amazing story update soon i can't wait and please...give kikyo a few iq points..this is just painful.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 11:04 PDT
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I know I've said this before but I really do love Kagejiro. But as I have mentioned smartass is my achilles heel. (Although I don't think I could handle...maybe in doses...) I must say even with all the serious issues/points in this chapter 'Jiro makes the stuff we have all known for chapters seem hilarious. I'm still trying to decide which is funnier, the beginning of the chapter or the end. (I think I'm leaning to toward the latter but it's still a big tie.) And I didn't foresee Kagome's attack. Guess they look more alike than I thought. I figured he looked similar to Sess and Yash but still different enough to realise they were not the same (like InuYasha and Sesshomaru are). Either I'm wrong in my assumption or I have to dock Kagome points for not remembering a guy she had mind blowing sex with. Which is it?
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: June 24, 2008 09:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, kagejiro is so awesome... and scary. i luv his dark humor and his adoration of all things alcoholic!! lol so great. and damn, if kagome finds out everything.. O.o well, i'll just say i bet it'll be quite an explosion. congrats on your nominations. i hope you win, and i look forward to the next chap. good luck with finding a place to settle. take care and thanks for writing when you can. *hugs*
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Title: home home in the rain, where the beer makes the mariners ok (lol back to seattle for me)
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 00:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Understandably life happens, not to mention that a good story takes time. If anyone's complainging at your (other then yourself) then send this new hunky sounding bad ass to what was it "knock in their skulls". He's quiet an interesting fellow.
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