| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: December 13, 2007 09:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just made my day sweetie! :) Loved it...though it was a bit on the short side coming from you. I guess I'm spoiled when it comes to your story. But it was nicely done may I add. I can't wait to see how the showdown is gonna happen.
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 01:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for the action. and for kikyo and inuyasha to break up! more soon!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 20:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though it was short, it was wonderful. So Kagome's gonna show up as a 'normal girl'. That should make spotting her all that much easier. I seriously doubt you would let her not see Bank' though. I love your twisted mind. It makes me happy that I'm not the only one who thinks that way. I don't write too much angst, but I sure do love it to peices! Keep um comming!
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Title: Absolution
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 19:32 PST
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Ah, the joys of being the only one to have figured it out...I cannot wait, Kagejiro being mistaken for Kenren's daddy, and the Kik/Inu break up...and all the while the fuse on the powder keg of the whole "Koizumo/Higurashi/Taisho" business world set-up grows ever shorter...it'll be interesting to see who and how the three families survive the blow-out when their reputations are shattered overnight. Awesome chapter, congrats on winning the IYFG award, despite what I've been told is happening now. I heard I was nommed too, but no winning notification. Eh, so it goes. Awesome chapter and I eagerly await the next one.
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Title: Part Deux
Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 19:15 PST
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Tres fantastique! You've set this all up quite nicely for the scenes to follow. I can't wait to read them :) I like that this has sort of gone full circle - it's going to climax at the club, right where it all started. I appreciated your shout out to Canada too...even though it was sort of in a timbuktoo-esque reference. Poor Canada always getting dissed on hahaha Well I look forward to the next chapter. Happy holidays and happy writing!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 18:49 PST
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Haven't read the chapter yet...just wanted to say YAY!!! I was seriously just sitting at my computer surfing the net and thought "I wonder when she's gonna update Shades of Gray?" then BOOM! Email in my inbox. It's like you were reading my mind :) Fantastic...okay now off to read. I'm sure I'll have many good things to say.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 12:44 PST
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Oi, took me long enough to finally read these last two chapters. And they are awesome chapters! I'm glad that we finally know the secret about Kagome's family. Please update soon!
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123 On: November 28, 2007 05:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god, your a mastermind.Jiro is already my favorite character.I love the way he talks, u really are amazing.He is exactly how I thought he would be.A older and crazier Inuyasha.And souta is Kagomes kid?I did not expect that at all.Big suprise that was.Keep up the good work. your loyal fan, -Blaccwolf123
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123 On: November 28, 2007 05:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god, your a mastermind.Jiro is already my favorite character.I love the way he talks, u really are amazing.He is exactly how I thought he would be.A older and crazier Inuyasha.And souta is Kagomes kid?I did not expect that at all.Big suprise that was.Keep up the good work. your loyal fan, -Blaccwolf123
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Title: inu_miko
Reviewed By: inu_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 19:27 PST
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omg you have to update, im on the edge of my seat waiting for what happens next. love it by the way. please please update soon for me >inu_miko
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 18:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaiiiii-yaaaa! Took you long enough! I thought maybe you had slipped into a coma or something! Anyways, chapter 25 was AMAZING... as always.. and 26 I will most assurely read tomorrow! Thank you for updating ^_^
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: November 13, 2007 14:12 PST
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Is is bad that I love Jiro? He fits right in. And wow, why does Kikyo have to get complicated right now? Oh well, great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 20:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I Cant wait for kagome to finally be free of that guy and go with inuyasha this is too much for my little heart to take this story is too good it's self how do you come up with things like this?
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 18:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I'm so glad you finally let the cat outta the bag. It was so hard to know what was going on and not just say it! J/K I would have kept your little twist forever. I can't wait to see the fallout when 'Jiro comes to town. Rin's gonna be like "Huh?" and 'Jiro's gonna be like "What!?". I'm really excited if you can't tell. Anywho, you made my week with that chapter. It's getting better and better. How the hell do you come up with this stuff. You have so many twists and the best I can come up with in my story is one. Wahhhhhh!!! :sniff: Okay, I'm better now. I hope we get to hear from you soon! Take care!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 14:29 PST
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I can't believe I haven't reviewed in such a long time! But I have been following every single chapter you've posted and am completely thrilled with this quick update... though I do hope you get well soon. It's no fun being sick, so I hope you're feeling better. Another marvolous chapter. Everything is coming to an closure, and it looks like life it spinning out of control. I didn't quite understand Inuyasha's reasoning why he wouldn't reveal that he is, in fact, Sha - since she already knows that Sha is hanyou and obviously not repulsed by him - but it adds another dimension of supsense and intrigue. And it seems as though Kagome isn't the only one hiding things; Kikyou appears to have some secrets fo her own. You've managed to add a very human side to Kikyou while still keeping her in character, and I applaud you for that. And you've done a wonderful job with Kagome's past - I was literally sick to my stomach after I read it, and seized by an urge to tear this Kagawaki limb from limb. How dare that asshole do that to a 14 year-old girl! And she didn't have to get to all the details to make the reader sympathize with her! It's a completely beautiful portrait of how a somewhat ordinary girl was mized up in a life pf debauchry and just when she thinks she can't get out of it, slavation and grace come from the most unusual places. I can't begin to describe how realistic thia story it, and I hope everyone out there who thinks that life can't get any worse, will realize that there is always help... all you need is the courage to step out of the comfort zone. Thank you again for the quick update. Shizu-chan P.S. Don't let anyone tell you what to write! Do it at your own pace; you aren't here to please the readers, we're the ones who are blessed to read this!
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