| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: hahahahaha On: February 12, 2008 17:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i actually screamed when i saw you updated. its really good. i have like an idea whats'going to happen, but im in like anticipation of the next chapter. thanks bud.
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 16:44 PST
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OO i totally forgot that she doesn't knw that Sha is Inuyasha! this might mean troublee
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: February 12, 2008 13:33 PST
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Ooooh, Kagome my dear it not the end. Its just the beginning for all hell to break loose. I hope that the next chapter will involve Sess,Inu, their older brother, Kags and and Rin. Can not leave out Banks. I hope that you will update the story really soon.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: February 12, 2008 13:33 PST
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Ooooh, Kagome my dear it not the end. Its just the beginning for all hell to break loose. I hope that the next chapter will involve Sess,Inu, their older brother, Kags and and Rin. Can not leave out Banks. I hope that you will update the story really soon.
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: February 12, 2008 11:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad to see a new chap from you... and it was THE chap. man, bank had me going there for a minute. what a bastard. i hope he keeps his end of things. he is the type with too much pride, though, so i'm still worried. and yay, more on jiro and sess coming soon??? i am so ready. when he finds things out, sess will sh*t himself and that will be well worth waiting for. ^_^ lol
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123 On: February 12, 2008 11:16 PST
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thanks 4 the update.The d/s world is really deep.U explain it very well.I'm lookin forward to the next chapter and really hopin it has Jiro in it.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 10:28 PST
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excellent. I hope Bank gets in trouble though. I wonder what's going to go on with Rin...
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 02:14 PST
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Well you didn't quite read my mind but you updated at the worst possible time - had to pull an all nighter just to read this and get my assignment done. But...it was TOTALLY worth it! God what an amazing chapter. It was so wonderfully intense and just perfectly paced. I felt like cheering rounds of YOU GO GIRL! the entire time. And that line about Miroku standing out like a straight guy in the village...hahaha I actually laughed out loud. Perfect comedic relief just when it was needed. You are a fantastic writer and I look forward to the next chapter. This story is really turning into an incredible piece. You should be proud of it :) Good luck on the IYFG awards! I know who's getting my vote ;)
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Reviewed By: Tender Ardor* On: February 12, 2008 01:28 PST
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Amazing. Simply Amazing. Always was and always has been. I've been with this story for ages, it seems, and each time I notice an up-date my heart beats so fast I can't breathe, that's how much I anticipate every miniscule piece of this fic. Just to let you know...this is definately my absolute favorite...hands down! Keep up the good work! The parts I most anticipate include Sesshoumaru meeting up with Rin and realizing he has a son, and Kagome and Inuyasha's further development. Good job. Even now, you still cease to amaze.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the chapter. You left it on a really good note(a little dash of humor after all of "that" was a good touch). I Love the image of Miroku in the leather... (a cute, young man, dressed up in such an outfit screams odd and potentially queer, and kinky.)
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Title: Rage Against The Dying Light
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:18 PST
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I'd like to think it was so easy, but I know your stories too well. Part of me kept thinking you were gonna have Inuyasha slip on his power limiter in the club and shock 'em all in a cliffie ending, so glad you didn't. Now Kagome and Bankotsu have a mexican standoff, and I know that's not gonna last long, not to mention how close they all came to discovering the real truth...well, the real, half-dozen truths. Great chapter, I loved it, my favorite non-lemon chappie that far. I really enjoyed seeing that little bastard squirm. PS: If you ever have time, I was wondering if you would mind checking out my "Displacement" story and telling me what you think. It' getting pretty popular. Again, awesome chapter.
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 21:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG What a Chapter! I was so on edge read it Kagome was soo awesome man how she stud up to bank like that whoa!and i totally thought Inuyasha was going to get caught When he yelled out Kagome's name In the ally there close call lol And the line where kagome said "Miroku in leather pants,that would never happen" LMAO! I Loved it I really CAN'T wait for the next chapter. after a Chapter like this you can't leave us, me suspense So Update Soo Really Soon =)
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Reviewed By: time for a change [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 21:46 PST
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love it love it love it.. i cant wait to read more.. Kagejiro coming in to the picture.. im so excited..
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Title: hi!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 14:58 PST
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hi!! i just want to say that i love your fics and i think you're bloody brilliant. i just finished curse of the dragon in like 16 hours straight reading. i am such a loser. but it was a weekend a week ago. >< i love your fic and i wish you all the best with it!!
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Title: waaaaa1
Reviewed By: iunyashas_dreams On: February 04, 2008 23:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok so i need you to update because mediaminer is nothing without this fic sooooooooooo please (with a cherry on top) update. PS. you are my hero
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