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 Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 17, 2007 00:41 PDT
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I reviewed this story ages ago when I first started reading it but I just wanted you to know that I still love it. While waiting for your next update I decided to go back to the beginning and it's still as fantastic as I remembered it. You have such talent I'm really, truly impressed. I've come to the conclusion that your cafeteria scenes are by far my favourite. Every one has my laughing out loud so please keep them coming. On a random side note, if you get the chance to you should watch this live-action Taiwanese drama called MARS. There are cafeteria scenes in that show that are a lot like the ones in your fic with similar characters too (the cocky, sexually aggressive guy, the shy girl, the lecherous friend, etc). That series was part of what made me want to go back and reread Shades of Gray. Anyhoo...I'm blabbing now but please please please update again soon? Please? and Thank you :)
 Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 03, 2007 10:55 PDT
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I want more!! please please pleaseee uptade soon! I absolutely love this story:)
 Title: Money making!!
Reviewed By: bored person  On: September 24, 2007 18:26 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
If you could change a few bits and peices about the demons and names you could have yourself a story there, I know you like to write fan fiction but you could have this published. Just change the demon style and names, just an idea. Otherwise brilliant story, best of luck finding a new place.
 Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 20, 2007 17:07 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Wats the songs name in this chapter??
 Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 20, 2007 17:06 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Wats the songs name in this chapter??
 Reviewed By: Memei  On: August 15, 2007 06:35 PDT
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i like the story, but hate the SessRin :( I've never been able to see them as a couple.. mostly because in canon she grew up with him.. and he's like a father/mentor to her. And in this story i get the feeling that she's your Mary Sue.. sorry
 Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 12, 2007 00:48 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, I can honestly say that I LOVED it... a whole lot lot.Hopefully life won't be TOO hard on you...your fans want more more more! lol. Well, still confused on the brother thing, who's kid is Kenren?! Grrr! lol. PLEASE say it's Sesshomaru... oh please please please. Well keep up the super fantastic work ^_^
 Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~  On: August 08, 2007 14:12 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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wow, that was hot in the fitting room. *_* i so love this story. and miro as always, cracks me up!! i hope things work out for you in the next month. good luck and take care. *hugs*
 Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2007 00:11 PDT
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wow!!! O_O loved the chapter! lucky kags, lmao. dammit though i really wanted yash to bring up the Titania issue!!! but i guess thats being saved for next chapter, darn. i downloaded the dropkick murphy song, very nice! as always, can't wait to read whats coming next! keep up the fantastic writing!
 Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 07, 2007 03:37 PDT
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*gapes like a fish* Holy... holy... cheese.. What an awesome chapter.!. it's got the angst, pissiness, raunchy sex, akward conversation, sibling disagreement, alienated friend.. Damn, I should have popped popcorn! OH DEAR GOD, he almost got the full connection of Kagome and Titiana. He was sooooooo close to making it, why did he have to deny it?! He is on the right track!! He almost made the Oberon/Bankotsu connection too. I'm so excited! Anyways, I'm sorry you have to find another place to live. If you were in Michigan, you could have stayed with me and my houseful of ruffians. Anything happen with that boy toy of yours? If you have that dratted myspace, look me up. myspace.com/Anyah_no_Baka thats me. Oh, and I lost your last email before i had a chance to reply to it, my email is been on the fritz lately. talk at you later :)
 Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2007 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
heh... um i'm jus gonna keep talking nonsense =p Mostly cuz i guess this will mean am the 300th review? this is like a once in a life time eh =) Am uping on the sex scene... *sigh* In a dressing room no less, that's gotta be so hawt. I mean including how he spoke to her... dammit, it's like watching everything five feet away, or better yet, me being kagome *giggles* LOLZ seriously gotta get some deliverance from this hentai mind of me... >.> Are hell am kidding, i live for this stuff XD Again, update when u can!!! ~*~bubbles ^_~
 Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2007 15:14 PDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I havent reviewed the chapters or anything, but wasnt there some jiro that kagome tlked to or sumn? And if so, does that mean that that jiro is probably Kagejiro, older brother of both inu n sesshy? Well well, the sex part was amazing! I loved it all. I really like your way of writing and the whole background for the Oberon thing it's brilliant... tho everything i read this fic i think of my english class(which i hate) XD lolz... Oh oh, i really thought inu was and will always be the dumb one in fics... but how he put everything about kagome n her night gothic freak ways... amazing! He should stick with it... it could be her, and bet when he finds out their sex would jus go up a notch eh? I'm a hentai for lemons... anything 'tween our fav hanyou and miko =p I kno how the summer is and all too, i mean my school re opens the 3rd of next month and i am not looking forward to that at all >.> Update when you can!!! ^__^
 Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2007 13:21 PDT
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Wow what a hot sex scene :) I'm glad Inu is finally starting to piece things together to make the whole Kagome/Titania connection. I still really love this story. It's one of the only ones out there that I actually get excited for when I see an update. I think it might just be my current favourite. Thank you for continuing this awesome fic. I can't wait to see where you take it :) Cheers! -Langus
 Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2007 09:24 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So it's monday morning, I wake up early to get tready for my class because this is the last week of classes for the summer semester and I am behind at least 2 assignments. All is well until I decide to go and check my e-mail and find that you have updated my favorite story!!!*********** I can't tell you how excited I was!! So I threw caution to the wind and began to read eagerly! ARRGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!! No way!!! All 3?? What kind of fucked up thing to do to poor Kags!!! I would just have died!! But then once again you shine!! and they are all alone and OH JOY!!! LEMON!!! So juicy and HOT that I was moaning while rubbing my thighs together!!! (NO MORE READING THIS STUFF IN BED!!! THIS LAPTOP IS FORBIDDEN IN THE BEDROOM, WHILE ON BED,FROM NOW ON!!) OMG!!! SO HOT!! I nearly passed out!!! UFFF!! So now thanks to you I am over 2 hours late!!! I had to cool down, take long cold shower, compose myself, and finally get ready for class!!! Then I read your note and almost cried!! Noooooooooooooooooooo! You are serious aren't you?? You left me here wondering when the new update would be and then you drop the bomb?? I am soooo sad!! I really love this story!! I am currently following several from some really good writers, but as of lately everyone seems to be growing away from fan-fiction, especially the talented writers like yourself!! And I am wondering if IY Fan fiction is dying?? This is my favorite story of all of the ones I have read (well over 300) and it just breaks my heart to hear that it's going to slow down!! SNIFFF!!!! I don't know if it means anything, but there will always be a place here at my home, and if you ever want to just take a few days, weeks or even months off and visit Arizona, just let me know!! I will be happy to open my house to you!! (We have several computers, fast internet connection, and your # 1 fan!! What else can you ask for?? Hehehehe!!)*******I hope things will get better on your side of the road, I would really hate to see this story updated only a few times a year as is the case of some now a days! But seriously, if you need anything, including a nice warm place, feel free to drop me a note! My family and I are not rich by any means, but we have more than enough to share! Best wishes and all my love to my fav writer: Me.
 Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2007 06:40 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I'm so happy to get another chapter! OMG I thought you were going to expose the whole thing! You are soooo playing with fire. I love it! I hope that you find a new place soon. I know what it's like not to know where you'll be from month to month. Good luck!
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