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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 › » ] | Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 15:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is so f*cked up... but I just love where its heading hehehe This is so interesting (and horny), I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next, kagome's secret, Inuyasha's solving his situation... everything..
| Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 15:57 PDT
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Ahh, I didn't get to be the first one to review this time... Oh well :D I LOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEDDDDDDDD this chapter, it was totally the best you've written yet :) I can't wait to see Kikyo's reaction. Does that make me a horrible disgusting person? Lmao. I really cannot wait for the whole freaking out thing that's going to happen :D ... and Bank... I'm still worried about him :S
| Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 05:08 PDT
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Well I guess the hard part comes next huh? Now that they have decided to be together Inuyasha won't take her brush off answers anymore. All though I do wonder if she is completely out from under Ban's thumb now (mentally). I hope so. I can't figure out what Inuyasha has in mind for Kikyo. Even if he breaks up with her and holds Kagome hostage in his house, Kikyo will still try to get back with him so she will see them together at some point. Oddly enough I haven't really been bugged by anything Kikyo has done until now. Sure calling Kagome out by comparing her to her mother was wrong but as Inu' says she is a product of situation. But telling Kagome that she and Inuyasha have agreed to be more serious about their relationship when all she did was mention that this was what she wanted while he with held comment is not a full affirmative conversation in my mind. And I know you have done this for a reason but it bothers me that neither Rin nor Inuyasha said the "brother's" name. I will just sit and patiently wait for the horrific-humorous moment when Rin walks into his house to find Sesshomaru sitting there. That is one of my "gotta see" moments that I'm still waiting for. Oh before I forget there are a few typos in the love scene. Usually I don't point fingers but my poor mind had red alert sirens flashing but my mental video just kept running the very wrong images in my head! Just re-read that paragraph where Kagome takes off his boxers and you'll see what I mean. I think I saw another one about him being deeply in her body but I can't remember exactly what it was. Also I like how you make them unconsciously fall into the dom/sub roles. They have just been doing it so long they don't realize it has popped up.(Makes one wonder what hoops he had Kikyo jump through…) Still waiting for the moment they realize who the other really is. That's on my "gotta see" list too. I wonder if Kagome will be able to look at Kikyo's bed without flaming into a permanent blush. Loved the part where you talk about Rin's height being a problem to get in the car. It was a nice little extra.
| Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: May 14, 2007 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know...I just couldn't get the whole 'Bank coming up to the school' outta my head. Oh well...time will tell ne? Great job with the chapter by the way. Though you completely blind sided me with the lemon. To tell you the truth I wasn't expecting it at all. Can't wait to read more.
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: May 14, 2007 15:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
after that little interlude... i suspect that things will become increasingly complicated. not just with inu/kag, but everyone. and, was kikyo setting kagome up somehow by leaving? just wondering. she seems to be every bit as sneaky as kags has been. i'm still trying to figure her out. ah, and now with yash confused about which brother is kenrens father, i am really eager for the next chap. btw- i'm glad you finished up with school and that's awesome that you got all B's. *high 5's you like a huge ass dork*
| Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 12:41 PDT
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I can't believe I haven't reviewed for so long! Bad me... I read every chapter, though, and most of them more than thrice! Interesting dialogue between Rin and Inu-chan, I was half laughing and half tearing my hair out! Does Rin know Inu has another brother? Oh, I can't find it Kikyo is going to come back while Inu and Kag are napping! Think what kind of 'fireworks' that would make! Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 11:11 PDT
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*screams with indignation* ahhhhh how could inuyasha get 'jiro and sesshomaru mixed up. he should have been more inquisitive. Rin should have said sesshomaru instead of just saying him or your brother, god they are so dense. why would inuyasha assume it was kagejiro instead of sesshomaru?! aaaaaaack... *yes i can rant about this even after reading that hot steamy lemon* and Kagome and kikyou.. oooh where do i even start about that? Kikyou is soooo dense. She even dated Bankotsu?! and didnt experience ANY of what kagome went through? Great guy my ass. I swear, this is like an addicting SOAP OPERA. daaaaaaaaaaaaaamn. Now onto Inuyasha and Kagome.. Holy shit. *I believe that was the best lemon you have ever written.* I can't believe that they got into a MORE complicated position. I was sooooo waiting for Kikyou to come home and witness the end of it. Do you think that Kikyou will ever catch them in the throes of passion?! oooh i cant wait to find out. This chapter was worth the wait, and oh so long. Keep up the good work, and i eagerly await the next chapter. Oh, and read your email, girly.
| Title: chappie 22 again
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 10:44 PDT
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BTW, re-read it, and HAH! Fucking on Kikyo's bed, now that's funny AND kinky! Luv it!
| Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 09:35 PDT
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Awesome, awesome, awsome! Loved it! It's funny and a little frustrating that none of them know the truth about each other. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 09:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa, someone below me wrote a huge long review O_O haha. yay for another chapter! all done exams? i gotta ask whens are we gonna see more of fluffy? and this other older brother?! YAY for mysterious characters!!!!! is he gonna be as likeable as ryen? (not to mention hot, haha) can't wait to read more!!!
| Title: Grateful for the little and Oh! so large gifts!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 07:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gods! I must say that while I was reading this chapter, I kept thinking how much more I love Rin each and every time time she is around. Then, for some dumb ass reason I began to feel like I was actually beginning to somehow like Kikyo just a tiny bit. Damn!! I mean, she was being nice, caring, and I actually felt a small ping of compassion for her... Gee, the girl was actually trying to make an effort to build an honest relationship with Inu, and was willing to work on it!!! And then your genius shines through like a lightning bolt in the middle of the night and she is back to that place where I like her much more!! She actually lied to Kag and went out for another tryst on this very night!! GENIUS!! Just GENIUS!! ***Bows low, deeply, and worships the amazing mind of the talented writer*** Then, just as things began to turn interesting for Inu & Kag, I kept looking to the right of my screen, and a small fear began to crawl through my brain: "-Darn! That little scroll bar is almost to the bottom!! Which only means one thing and one thing only: End of Chapter! DAMN, DAMN, DAMN!! No... She wouldn't, she COULDN'T be so mean as to leave us hanging here, hoping, wishing, praying, and at the last minute have something interrupt them, or worse yet, even prevent them from even beginning!! She cannot do this!!! But darn! The scroll bar is just way too low!! Shit!! This is ending and Inu is not even naked yet!! OH man!! I am starting to finally understand Blue Balls!!! I was actually feeling like trowing a tantrum!! And then things began to look good! FINALLY! Inu is making a move and Kags is not running away!! -mind you that darn little scroll bar is looking awfully low, which at this point in the story is REALLY SCARY!!- Then, paranoia begins to crawl all over! SHIT, SHIT, SHIT! Did they even lock the door?? Was it Friday today?? Could Banks be outside the door at this very minute?? Could Kikyo return early? OH MAN!! I need a drink!! This stuff cannot be good to my heart!! And that darn scroll bar is running out of space at the bottom!! I am seriously going to be pissed off if they get interrupted!!-" But then, things just began to fall into place and FINALLY!! I mean, IT WAS ABOUT TIME!!! ....................HURRAY!! **Runs around room throwing confetti and doing the happy dance!** Gee!! they manage to do it and complete the deed before the end of the chapter!! Now if you don't mind, I am going to go and have a well deserved drink and a cigarette!! This story is among the best I have read this year!! I have to admit that the way you created the setting the way you developed the characters and how all the angst and emotions go, make this a really special fanfiction!! I have several stories from different writers on my NOTIFY LIST, and I look forward to each and every update, but I must admit, yours is the only one that really has my panties in a knot!! I suffer waiting so long for every update!! I really feel so addicted to this story that it makes it a true punishment to be so much into it!! You make me suffer!! All I can do is hope you will update soon again and bless me with more of your magnificent writing!! Thank you for sharing your incredible talent with us!!
| Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 04:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, i got up to print an essay i have due today at school and this nagging voice kept tellin me to check my mails! I am so happy i did, and i had 2hrs to spare bfore i get ready for shool ^_^ So i saw u updated and went all out! They FINALLY fucked! Tho i wish it was me and not kagome, *sigh* but hey! I can still dream. lolz When kikyo n kags were tlking and kikyo kept saying how she loved inu i could not blv it! It would of jus messed up EVERYTHING! Then kinky-ho jus had to b cheating, tho i dont hold her against it..inu actually got his release and on Kikyo's bed no less!! *grins* I love your style of writing so so SOOOOOOO MUCH! Cant wait for YET another update...Especially with sesshy in the fic more! Mayb he would get his lil release by rin! Cuz in every angel lies a naughty bitch jus ready to take it the Inu style!! LOL...now am jus being nasty =p Thanx for this update!!! Oh and plz check out my fic! pweety pwease! *puppy eys* I only have 2 diff story, so it's not that bad, plus the chapters arent long...Anyhoo of to jail...err...i mean school! =D Or mayb i'd jus continue your other fic...Curse Of The Dragon!!! Ja!
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 02:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!! Heh, was wondering if the cousin was gonna come strollin in... now that wouldve been awkward, ne? Lol. Great chap to a great story. Update when ya can! ;)
| Title: HAVE THEY LOST THEIR MINDS?!?!!!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 01:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pulls finger nails out of chair* Weehooooooo, I was sure that Kikyo was going to walk in at any moment (I still think she'll catch them before Inuyasha wakes up)....Man I just love this to pieces. So many question, so many issues, so much lovely lovely drama. I can't wait for Inuyasha to find out about bankotsu and Kagome...Am I bad for wanting the ball to drop so soon...AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! I can wait for more, but I don't want to, but I will...but I don't want to. I just want to keep reading forever and ever and ever...(I hope (I didn't scare you)
| Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 23:13 PDT
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yikes. what if SHE walks in the door? and where the hell did she go? she said she was going w/ inuyasha, but she never counted on him showing up to screw her cousin's brains out. yeah, what to do? what's going to happen? please have more soon. and i also want to know about the confusion inuyasha and rin just had. what the hell is she going to say when she shows up for lunch and it's the wrong brother? more soon please!
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