| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 04:57 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. Most of all your language. I love the style. Acually I have a couple of your quotes in my diary (the 'piss' talk for instance) Your characters seem very real and I enjoy the absolute lack of 'cheesy-ness'. Great work! Oh, and I'm a bit sad that Bank is bad in this fic. They seemed to work so well with Inu in the Curse)) Oh well^__^ Anyway keep it up! and update soon!
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Title: Paper Doll
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 21:51 PST
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Oooo, angsty. I like how you've managed to twist this AU into the same Inu-Ki-Kag dillema as the original, nicely done. Of course, to borrow Kagome''s "lovely" tact, I don't think you can have someone suck you off and then forget about them. Lol. Great chapter, but like I need to tell you that.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: February 02, 2007 21:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Gosh. I was literally screaming when the realization of Bankotsu actually in the house hit. And that the dream wasn't in fact a dream. lol. Wow. Talk about dark and ominous. Bankotsu is a really scary bastard in this fic. I love it. lol. Great story, chapter, everything. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: firesjdfklsjk On: February 02, 2007 16:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely fabulous! I loved Curse of the Dragon and now I am loving this! IT IS SO GOOD! I am dying to find out what is going to happen once3 inuyasha and kagome learn more about each other! I CAN'T WAIT! UPDATE! I LOVE IT!! FABULOUS STORY! Ur a great writer! the plot is original and the storyline is fabulous! just be sure to check for grammatical errors. other than that everything is marvelous! I LOVED IT! UPDATE!
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Title: Best Suspense Scene EVER!!!
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 16:16 PST
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Wow! I never literally been on the edge of my seat like that without watching an actual movie or something. That last scene was by far the best suspense scene I EVER read. My heart was thumping hard against my chest. It was sooo good. It was better than a movie and it didn't even have the scary suspense music because everybody knows suspense and thriller movies aren't all that scary without any music. Plus, the whole plot unraveled so well with the story about Bank and 'Sha's past relationship. It's funny because Inu_Grrl wrote a chapter to her new story that had me wailing and then you bang this one out. I have stand and applaud for this. I wish you luck and prosperity with this one.
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Reviewed By: yasha21 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 09:41 PST
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i have to say, i am a lazy reviewe and i should be better about it- unfortunately i am still working on it. I still love the story your writing style and your story line are amazing and each twist and turn are at times expected but still amazing to read- they never cease to suprise me! i am so glad that you are update pretty frequently. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 07:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh good chapter good chapter! I wonder how Inuyasha is going to act once he finds out what happend, also he doesn't know Kagome is THE GIRL u know? or does he? Confuse :P Anyway keep up the great work! Ja ne, ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 06:01 PST
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Poor Kagome. I'm so glad that the part with Bankostu was a dream. It's got to be a horrible feeling knowing that someone who almost killed you was in the house where you thought you were safe. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 01:31 PST
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man poor kagome and the end was terrifying. so inuyasha is warming up to kagome, but where do sha and titania fit into that equation?
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 13:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, read the latest, and it's great, as usual ^.^ Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, TMI? I would think Kagome essencially belonging to a character that was braught back from the dead and hung out with an obviously gay man would be TMI... ROFL.... Kidding, lol.
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 06:53 PST
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Bankotsu is a fucking ass and his brother isn't any better. Poor Kags. At least their was silver lining of hope throughtout of the chapter. Kagome just might make it, but she still has some explaining to do for her absence. Plus, I'm happy that it ended with Yash and Miro making up. Anyways, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 16:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jackie just got 100 respect points! Bank got shoved off miles back... So, glad someone is going to take care of Kagome because god knows she needs somebody. Inuyasha and Miroku, awww i love the fact that they have such a strong bond like that. :) great job, and a really good way to lighten the mood. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 08:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, you deleted a chapter.... that makes me sad....
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 23:08 PST
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poor kags. at least she has jackie on her side, i can't wait till she's better and kicking bankotsu's ass (she's gonna kick his ass right?... right?!) yay for yasha and miroku being all buddy buddy again (are the pants miroku's now? lmao) can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great writing! i love this story!!!!
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