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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 17:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, so miroku's figured it out... almost. ooh. and what will he do with this information? and what about kikyo? and her mystery man? or whatever. hehe. please have more soon.
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 14:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The bedroom scene kind of made me laugh a little... The whole am-i-suppose-to-put-my-arm-around-her? awkwardness was just too cute! lol! I now see how Sesshomaru is going to be in the picture...(patiently waiting for his arrival) Great job! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: February 24, 2007 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bank is going to get even more creepier? Wow... I wonder how that'll turn out. Probably f-in scary. lol. GREAT chapter! Inuyasha is so protective in this chapter, I love it. I thought he was going to admit his true feeling to Kagome in this chapter, but he didn't. Nor verbally anyway, heh. I can't wait for the next chapter, girl! Update soon! ;-)
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Reviewed By: Malice_Babe On: February 24, 2007 15:53 PST
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EXCELLENT!! (Laughing at the "Kikyo can't get past her nose comment") Update as soon as humanely possible, Yes? *smirk*
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 15:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I loved this chapter, Inu's not being a dick lol ^_^ hmmmm I wonder what the sub-plot is I think I know but keeping it hush hush for now :D Oh and one question, is Shippo gonna be in this? ^_^ Keep up the great work!! ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:17 PST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 08:47 PST
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Awesomee :) I absolutely LOVED it! So much fluff!! And WOW I can't believe Sango and Miroku figured so much out so quickly O.O smart... lol. Love, IK
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: dion On: February 24, 2007 04:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm really glad that miroku is on the right tracc.I'm anxious to find out what happens when inuyasha an kagome realize how much they have a common. -Blaccwolf123
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Title: Chapie 16
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 21:54 PST
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Thanks for using my quote, it was a pleasure to donate it. I loved the couple interaction. Miroku's a regular Holmes. The brain of a detective and the libido of a stripper, what a combo. But Sango is still being a little bitchy, someone has to take her down a peg. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 20:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I love Naraku in this fic, he's so SWEET!!! Hopefully he stays that way though! I'm also glad that Kagome at least told Sango what the hell is going on, no doubt Inuyasha is going to find out VERY soon! Though I predict he'll figure out Kagome's Titania but he won't tell her that he's Sha! Just a guess though.... I also sense some Miroku/Sango time creeping in... or maybe it's just my imagination! I'm sad that Rin wasn't in here, but hopefully we'll see her soon! Awesome chap. please update soon!
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Dion On: February 18, 2007 20:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really surprised to see that Naraku isn't a bad guy. I cant believe Bankotsu is a crazy,abusive bastard, he is one of my favorite characters in the show. I hope Inuyasha rips his dick off. great chapter and update soon. -Blaccwolf123
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Reviewed By: Anninat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 12:10 PST
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Thanks so much for another great chapter, I mean, whoa - You've got me officially hooked on this story, god, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 16:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is utterly awesome. i started reading it on ff.net but i thought that it would be better here, since it wasn't censored. i can't wait to see what happens. please have the next chapter out soon. this is way good.
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: February 16, 2007 12:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, this really seems hopeless. i am so afraid that someone is gonna get hurt even worse than kagome. bank is so bad. when yash finds out who did this to kagome, he will be outta control. oh, this is so horrible for kagome. her emotional wounds are definitely more serious than her physical. bank, that bastard! and about naraku, he just seems like he can't stand yash and his family more than being evil. after the insight, i can understand. damn. well, this chap was really sad and i would have probably reacted in much the same way as sango if my friend were in that situation. lol t.c
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 09:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT, Chapter 15 rocks the house. I love it, love it love it love it. Update soon, PRETTY PLEASE!
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