| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 23:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man. and here i thought that they would know all about her mystery man and get it on (again, hahaha). anyway, so what's gonna happen now? are they going to continue on w/ a illicit affair? will they even talk to each other the proverbial "morning after"? more soon please!
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 18:08 PST
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Wow, that was hot! How sweet of Inuyasha to not take her but still give her pleasure. 'We invented dirty!' I love that line. LOL You have a special talent with dialogue, and the characterization has left me open-mouthed in awe. I totally adored how you turned cliches into an entirely unearthly setting, like the line 'the silence that could have sunk the Titanic.' I was both laughing and crying through the chapter! Oh, and I love how fast to update! Wisth I could do that! Well, I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter! Shizuka Kaze
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 17:59 PST
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Wonderful and sexy chapter. I like how Sango looses her self so much in the need to protect that she actually harms her ward with her words. I also like how Miroku is still a perv and she keeps him in line. The comment about the leather pants cracked me up. I wonder what Inu would say if he had heard it. The interaction between Inu and Kagome was sweet and hot. He fights with himself to see what he really feels for her. Their scene of mutual masturbation was intense. One question though: I know that Inu is wearing an "inhibitor", but wouldn't he recognize Kagome at least a little bit? He met her as Tatiana in chapter 11 and was rather intimate. When he is more intimate here, why doesn't he realize that they are the same? Also why doesn't Kagome recognize Inu as Puck, or at least wonder what Bankotsu has done to Puck since he beat her so badly? Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!
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Title: WOWZA
Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 13:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to be one of the best lemons i've read in quite a while. Keep it up, I mean with Inuyasha... KEEP IT UP! When is our sex scene coming?!?!
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: March 06, 2007 11:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sango Was going a little overboard on the ranting and stuff, huh. lol poor kagome, she is suffering through all of this practically alone and can't tell anyone the truth. i'm glad yash stayed and now he's realized his feelings. but, what now? and with kikyou around the corner waiting to remind them of reality, gah... i just feel so bad for them both! damn, this is one hell of a situation they are in. this keeps getting better each chap! i look forward to miro and sango's journey to discover their 'feelings' as well. heh, miro cracks me up so bad. XD
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 07:54 PST
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Great chapter! I love how Inuyasha and Sango argue everytime they talk and with Miroku there to add in a little comedy, hilarious! Please update soon!
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Title: Do dat shyt! ^-^
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: March 05, 2007 22:29 PST
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Wen, that was eye-popping to say the least. Congrats on the IYFG wins, and wow, woman! I read this while listening to Radiohead's "The Pyramid Song" @_@ suuuuch a trippy experience -particularly the lime. Well-fuckin-done!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 22:24 PST
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oh man poor inuyasha and kagome. why can't he break up with kikyo? it's gonna suck when they get out of that bed and have to start dealing with the real and underworld isn't it?
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Reviewed By: Sammy22 On: March 05, 2007 22:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story and probably one of the best I have ever read.The characters are well developed along with the plot. The story flows well and is very descriptive which is is important. Anyways wonderful job and can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Sammy22 On: March 05, 2007 22:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story and probably one of the best I have ever read.The characters are well developed along with the plot. The story flows well and is very descriptive which is is important. Anyways wonderful job and can't wait to read more.
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 20:52 PST
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Plot development, character development, and hot lemon. Awesome! Congrats on the IYFG. I almost won 3rd for Songifc, but lost by one vote. Shades deserved best lemon too, but what can you do?
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 20:48 PST
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YAY! *does happy dance* I guess it was nice fluff... at the beginning. the rest was just 100% smut... not that I didn't love it :D Sango was a real bitch in this chapter, I find. How can she judge Kagome like that?? But Kagome wasn't exactly sweet either.. Anyway, loved it! Can't wait for the next!! (And I AM wondering about the lemon award... Do people ENJOY reading rape? Wow O.o But I guess the Sha x Kagome action was pretty hawt...) Some more fluff coming any time soon? :) But hey, this seems like the calm before the storm, we haven't heard anything about Bankotsu in a while... and Kikyo... Where is she again? Ah, well. Love, IK Obsession
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: March 05, 2007 10:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sango and miro are on a roll now. they may figure shit out before anyone else. lol damn, things could get so very strange if they figure out the truth without hearing it from kag or yash. but then, if kag and yash find out the truth about eachother as well, dammmmn. i love it. and wtf is kikyo gonna do when she figures stuff out? oh hoho. scary. or, maybe she won't care too much *shrugs* still don't know so many things. as for for naraku, maybe he's not that bad, but still not 100%. your gonna have to spell it all out for me before i can really know. ha! sorry it took so dang long for me to get to this chap. *scratches life's eyes out* O.o ttyl
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't notice any spelling and grammar errors, which is really good since normally if I see any they really bother me (took an entire grammar course last year) This fic is really dark, and yea that one chapter was a bit disturbing but it seemed to need to be there for the story to have a turning point in the plot line. It wouldn't have been as interesting if Bankotsu just was like go away. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm wondering what will happen when Kagome and Inuyasha realize the he's Sha and she's "mystery girl" lol
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 23:14 PST
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i love miroku in this chapter, silly little monk that he is. poor guy getting left out of the conversations, hahah. i liked his attempt at getting kagome to reveal something about her attacker and failing miserably. his surprise was hilarious! can't wait for an update! .... any chance kikyo jumps off a cliff in the next chapter? or pushed by a mysterious character ^_^ teehee
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