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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 › » ] | Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: June 12, 2007 11:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chap had me going a few times. i was sure kikyou would catch them. then, sess giving his 'lil bro advice, wow! i love your way with words and your metaphors. your writing has me wondering how you can be so damn good. it's the little things like, ex: 'cry herself into a water-filled grave'. man, that's so awesome. it tells me how much thought you're putting into everything you write. not just the 'facts' of the story. miro as usual, had me lmao. he's such a nut, and i can totally relate to him... i am a serious spazz! he put yash in his place for sure! i am so ready for the next chap. keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 22:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a really great story it took me a while to finally get to this point in the story but i really like it and cant wait to see what happens next....
| Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 00:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, so she wants to make it work with inuyasha but she "feels" with this other guy. confusion, confusion, confusion! she makes no sense, but hey, kagome is a hypocrite. nice! i liked how she told her to break up with him. but kikyo is not dumb. she just sucks. don't like her. and i can't wait for rin's reaction. and sess... oooh, i can't wait for him to find out about his son. and inuyasha will make fun of him won't he? he'll have fun at his expense? i also love miroku. can we have more miroku/sango moments? pretty please? with sugar and a cherry on top? just what have you planned for those two crazy kids? huh? huh? can we know? hahaha. i don't know why i'm laughin, but have more soon please. and wear padding when you write. that way it won't hurt so much!
| Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 14:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm too lazy to write a review ya kno XD But i'll b cruel not to^^ So yes...my dear inu had...just had to go baq to kags! I love the way he handle her...and to think he never did that to kikyo, ne? I want inu to SHARE his probs with sesshy for some strange reason! *sigh* But thats not gonna happen or it hasnt yet huh? I so thought inu was gonna fuck her raw in the shower!! XD XD XD I wanted him to! *grins* Miroku...he's the stupid one eh, he should of knock himself unconscious when he was teasing inu, i mean so wat if he's in love. I'm only mad that inuyasha isnt in love with me! lolz. Now kikyo-ho? Well, i like her, that much i can say. I understand what she's going through...i mean who wants a father to write their life without them having any say?? I wonder who the mystery guy is tho...care to tell me?^^ UPDATE when you can chica! More more inu n kags! Will you pitch in some lemon? Mayb he can take her in one of the empty classrooms! =3
| Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 12:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes!!!! Oh yes baby!!! THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!!! Inu leaving Kags just like that?? HELL NO!!! And then he comes back with the strength of a hurricane and makes everything all right!!! OH YES!! You my dear, have once again done it!!! This soap opera is just too juicy for me!!! I think you had me the moment he came rushing back in, but after reading "Inuyasha didn't give a flying fuck if Kikyo walked in at the current moment, or his father, or hell, a fucking news broadcasting team!" you had me REALLY going!! Yep, yep, yep!! This is the shit!! (Darn!! I'm becoming VERY potty mouthed lately!!) If this stuff was on TV, I SWEAR I would never leave the house!! I would TIVO every little episode to watch it over, and over again!!! As it is, I read, and re-read this story over and over again, and I always feel the adrenaline just bursting out of the seams!!! +++++++++++++++++Moving on...I just love Seshie!! He is the uttermost cool and he just has that perfectly carved cold demeanor and yet he still manages to have a heart, a warm beating heart that holds feelings and care for others! This character has so much hold in the story because it leads itself to dig deep into it's mind and heart!! The fact that he cares enough to warn Inu not to make the same mistakes he made and end up feeling the way he does just makes my heart strings tingle with warmth!! I just love the way you write him!! He is not being a pussy! He is being Sesshomaru, however, he has enough inner strength to fight his cold demeanor and without sounding as someone else, he manages to make his point across!! GENIUS!! I'm telling you! You are a Master of Words!! +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++Miroku is just such a joy to read!!! He is probably after I & K my favorite one!!! His wit, sense of humor, insight, and that utterly cool smarty pants (not the leather ones) brain of his, makes him just adorable!! I love reading him!! His interactions with Inu are just way too much!! And not to mention the way he HATES Kikyo!! LORD! I love him!!!+++++++++++++++++++++++Moving on, THANK YOU!!! OH, THANK YOU SO MUCH!! For the Shout Out!! I read and review so many things and you are the first to acknowledge the review!!! ***Blushes*** And to tell you the truth, to answer your question about how the drink was, I have to be honest with you, I THINK it was really good! I say THINK because I used your chapter as excuse to drink not one or two, but half a bottle of my FAVORITE Liqueur!!(X-RATED FUSION LIQUEUR, the hands down BEST thing to drink after reading one of your chapters!!! RECOMMENDED and certified!! Just think: A pink fusion of French ultra premium vodka, Provence blood oranges, Brazilian mangos and passion fruit. YUMMM! It's premium, pink and delicious! GUARANTEED!) And I was VERY HAPPY afterwards!! so I say it was Really good!! However, now I am sad because I am all out of it and at almost $30.00 a bottle (well worth it!) it only comes around once in a while!!! ***SNIF!!*** Before X-Rated, Hpnotiq was the drink of choice, but once I discovered X-Rated, there was no turning around!! Look it up or Google it and you will see it even looks beautiful!! ;)++++++++++++ On another note: I know I am supposed to feel bad that your hours R being cut, however, I can't help to feel a bit giddy about the shorter ammts of time between updates!! I know, I should be ashamed!! But in a way it is your fault for writing such a good stories!!! So there!! It's your fault!! Yes!! If I beg nicely, and put my best puppy eyes forward, can you please update soon??? I will love you forever more if you do!!! Hugs and all the best: Your # 1 Fan!!!
| Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 22:02 PDT
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nah, im over with kikyou catching kags and inu in the horizontal tango.. what i want to see is bank kidnapping kikyou, as a way of revenge. *evil grin*... I have been racking my brain on ways for his revenge, and the whole kagome meeting sha... but it tickled me when miroku thought that kags was the mystery girl. Titania should make an appearence on campus, maybe as a way to avoid her cousin or something... i honestly can't wait to see what happens next. I hope the mental block evaporates and you get a wicked idea for the story. Hurry up and update, even if you have to make your chapters shorter lol. :)
| Title: YAY
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 21:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You welcome this is getting more funny is inuyasha going to leave kikyo I hope so but the part where inuyasha said Get off my dick, damn. Are you people in love with me or something? That's both you and Sesshiles who are watching what I'm wearing. and miroku said "Oh yes. I love you, I need you, oh baby, oh baby." that was funny.
| Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 19:56 PDT
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That was an amazing chapter. I've neen waiting for this since your story started and it's nice to see everything finally falling into place. So is that mystery dude #1 Inuyasha's Dad? That woudl be interesting indeed...well anyhoo thanks for an amazing post and I can't wait till the next chapter comes out. -Langus
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! A new chappie! I replied to your e-mail. In my reply is my theroy. I can't wait to see if I was right! If you wish to tell me that is. I really liked this chapter. Poor Kagome. Torn between love and family duty. I wonder what will happen to her on Friday.
| Title: chappie 23
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 15:55 PDT
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NP on the quute, hell, you have my email, I have a bottomless bag of quotes, gimme a ring sometime if you need one. Anyway, great chapter; drama, character development, secrets, mental image of Sessy-sama in an apron with a mop and sponge...a good time was had by all!
| Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 15:29 PDT
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I didn't get to leave a comment last time I read, so here's pretty much my comment for the whole fic so far LOL I LOVED the sex scene b/w I/Ka. That was pretty hot *fans self* Whoo. But now I want to go kill him for saying that to Kagome LOL!! Curse you for being such an addicting writer!!!
| Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 15:28 PDT
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I didn't get to leave a comment last time I read, so here's pretty much my comment for the whole fic so far LOL I LOVED the sex scene b/w I/Ka. That was pretty hot *fans self* Whoo. But now I want to go kill him for saying that to Kagome LOL!! Curse you for being such an addicting writer!!!
| Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 17:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. That was amazing. I think I need a cigarette. I cant wait for the next chapter. I wonder what sessy will do when he sees Rin. Oh, I wanted to let you know that I figured out the little secret Kags is keeping from everyone. You haven't hinted at it much but last night I was laying down and it hit me. It's the only reason why her dad would leave. Don't worry though. Your secrets safe with me.
| Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 19:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....wow..... i wasn't expecting THAT scene so soon...interesting... So inu's going to get one helluva wake up call when he realizes he's got the wrong brother!!! teehee!!! Rin will definitely be confused as hell... i have one word for kikyo -bitch- that was a shitty thing to do to Kag... as you like to say, 'when the shit hits the fan' there's still a lot more to come... great chapter, please update soon!!!
| Title: Funny
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 19:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This as Funny AS Hall you did a great job even the drama is funny Keeep up the good work.
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