| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
| Pages (45): [ « ‹ 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 › » ] |
Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 22:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Chapter twelve and I are goign to need a moment together... Seriously, get out of here, we need to fuck. I cannot beleive who Oberon turned out to be, but hot damn girl you nailed it didn't you? You picked the best possible character and I salute you as a fellow and superior writer. Well I'm off to mastrubate a little. Ciao.
|
Title: HOLY SHIT!
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!! That has to be the darkest scene I've ever read... Nothing even compares to that... (i kinda already guessed that oberon was bank) but christ, it's like having someone squeeze lemon juice in an open bullet wound! My jaw is still touching the floor, how could Kag ever be the same after having lived through that? Even worse, how is she going to hide it? As for the Miroku/Inuyasha thing it was bound to happen but if Miroku is the lovable guy we all know he'll bounce back by Inu's side in no time. Anyways I only gave the nine because technically it was not that fun to read about someone getting raped, even though it makes good drama! Still love your writing though... Please update soon I have to know what happens next!
|
Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 21:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I didn't even thank of banky lol. I suck but damn he really fucked her up in this chapter. What's going to happen in the next chapter I gatta know!!! Oh and plus Miroku in leather pants?!?!!?!? *Drools* Great chapter. Man I would never want to experiance what kagome went through with Bank. Though, I say we kill him off soon Lol. Great chapter update soon! ^_^ ~Sadie~
|
Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay this review has to be broken into two parts 1st - inuyasha and miroku part: LOVED when miroku found the leather pants (and i had a feeling that he was gonna put them on the minute he found them.... will he encounter sango while wearing them???) and are we gonna be seeing miroku in leather pants more often? lol! when he burst into the room, and pulled a line from the princess bride i was laughing so hard i couldn't read for almost 5 minutes! poor yash, wonder what its going to take for miroku to forgive him (a pair of leather pants as a present?) loved this part! 2nd- kagome and oberon OMG! I SO KNEW IT (bank being oberon that is)! thats SO good, but dammit, i feel bad for her, i understand why it happened and the violence of the scene being a part of who oberon/bankotsu is. LOVED the chapter, but PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE don't leave us all hanging for too long! i'm dyin to find out how kag is!!!!!!!!!
|
Title: HOORAY 4 11 page lime
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 23:55 PST
Comment/Review:
That was so freaking hot, but kind of weird after an ALMOST rape scene, but nonetheless, hot. It tickles me that Kagome gave InuYasha a blow job and even under the facade of Titania and Sha. I wonder what she would do if she found out it was actaully her cousin's boyfriend she let finger fuck her in an alleyway. The drama is incredibly genius. Anyway,s great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
|
Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze (nli) On: January 08, 2007 15:11 PST
Comment/Review:
Wow, someone needs to open the window in here! What a hot scene! You have an absolutely amazing way with words - I'm completely awed! Sucking a guy off in a alley... I just love the dirty talk. Great dialogue and descriptiong, just right for an enjoyable read. Oh, so Sha is Inuyasha... my, that will complicate the situation. And you've revealed some of Oberon and Kagome's relationship. Wonderfully detailed, you've managed to keep me on the edge fo my seat. Hope to read more soon!
|
Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 20:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo I cannot wait until Inuyasha finds out tht it was actually Kags tht gave him tht...well moment of pleasure =) Are they gonna find out soon?
|
Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 19:55 PST
Comment/Review:
yay another chapter...a really hot chapter ha. Man they're both getting close to really seeing and understanding the hidden identities, but you're gonna keep us hanging aren't you? Can't wait for the next chapter and really glad you're still writing after the awesome and huge success that COTD was. oh I love a crude Yash!
|
Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 16:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo that was a very good chapter mmm Lol. Keep up that great job, I can't wait till they find out it's each other, and what is oberon going to do about kagome? ^_^ Ja Ne.
|
Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 09:19 PST
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I'm so glad that Inuyasha, I mean 'Sha', showed up. Kagome's a lucky girl. And that scene in the alley, wow! Great job! Please update soon!
|
Title: amhor56
Reviewed By: amhor56 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 01:43 PST
Comment/Review:
Love that lime scene! I guess they got more aquainted. Man oh man, I want more.
|
Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 23:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... WHOA! awesome chapter (know where i can order my very own inuyasha?!?!) and who is OBERON?!?!?! its killin me! how many chapters before we find out???? can't wait for more! keep up the great writing!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 21:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if that wasn't crude yash, i don't know what is. dayum. it's like *_* ! ha, this chap was awesome and i guess i was just expecting naraku to be evil, but if you say he wont be 'that' bad, then i shall believe you. i swear, i must know what happens with oberon. it's fun as hell following a fic as it's written, especially yours, but i am so impatient. i hafta see how things end up. ahhh, the torture. ttyl.
|
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally they're starting to notice the similarities between each other... I wonder if that bite Inu gave to Kag will play a bigger role later on perhaps? Only time will tell, that was a very quick update, I was so proud of you! Thanks for the new chap, please update soon!
|
Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 11:12 PST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I loved the part in the dorm room. And when Rin said you're stealing the lead, great line! I saw that you reviewed my story. Thank you for reading it. I'm kinda stuck on chapter seven. I know where I want to take the story but I'm not sure how to get the characters where I want them. Does that make sense? Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. This story is turning out to be as good as 'curse' and it's only chapter 10! Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
|
| Pages (45): [ « ‹ 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 › » ] |
