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Reviewed By: future author On: December 09, 2006 17:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely loved this chapter. I'd say it was my favorite chapter out of all. I thought it was hilariously funny. I can't wait to see what happens next between those two. i can see things are about to get even more interesting. Untill the next chapter keep up the good writing.
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Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: LyghtChyld [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 06:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: December 08, 2006 00:15 PST
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Wendy!!! I had a BALL with this chappy. Yasha is so sexy and the way he & kags play off each other is gold! I also loved the bar scene, Miroku's thought process was awesome. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Starfire277 On: December 07, 2006 22:09 PST
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This story is great. And I can't believe Kagome had to kill the mood by throwing up. Hahahaha the smell of it, especially when you're drunk, is disturbing. I should know. Thanks and hope you update soon!
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Title: Sick!!!
Reviewed By: Corr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 19:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy... dayum.. it roxx... i really liked it.. damn you for sooo endin this then.. im sooo arghhh... dayum,... i so wana read more. . update man. update soon... dayum the suspense.. great work... lolz.. lmao.. she puked.. ahan.. so wasn't he behind her? or did i miss something? cuz she dint puke on him otherwise.. or were they facin each otha? buh yea.. reply plz.. need to know this..aite .. keep it up.. out.. EZ.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 15:49 PST
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Ah, that was so sweet... until she had to vomit. Then if was just hilarious. Great chappie, you've no idea how idea this update has made me... Miroku, miroku, finally getting what he deserves, so he's probably scarred for life... Sesshoumaru and Bankotsu getting into wars... THE PLOT THICKENS!!! Well, Kouga defintiely had better taste than Inu-chan *shudders* first Ayame and then Kikyo? Man, someone needs to inject that guy with a healthy dose of common sense *tehee*. The suspense is just perfect, and I have a myraid of questions I'd like to know the answers to, but unfortunately, I'm going have to find out... Certainly glad that you write faster than I do, or I'd die waiting. I can't wait for Inuyasha finding out who Kagome really is and her little job on the side. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 12:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the sly wit and humor in this chapter! Not to mention inuyasha and kagome... steamy! Although i'm waiting for the moment that the real half demon comes out from hiding again... Also i'm silenty waiting for Sesshomaru to make an appearance, with Rin in the picture! Great job and keep writing, please!
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: angelicdis0rder On: December 07, 2006 10:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waited a lo0o0o0o0ng tyme 4 dis chappie..but hell wasnt it w0rth the wait... hes fallin 4 her~ lol.. d0 update s0on
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 08:25 PST
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Great chapter! I loved it! I can't beleive Kagome puked. What a way to ruin the moment. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 06:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol a surprizing comedy twist! ^_^ The chapter was wicked! Keep up the great work! ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 01:53 PST
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oh man did kagome seriously puke, ruining that very hot moment? and eddie izzard rocks! don't worry your updates are worth the wait, but please for the love of bob don't make us wait tooo long
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 19:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh, this story rules! can't wait for an update! ( i think i already reviewed on ffnet... but w/e the more reviews the better!!!!)
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Reviewed By: leilachan nsi On: December 01, 2006 09:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm, interesting. it does seem as though kikyo is hiding something. same for inu, like his feelings for kags. ha. i love miroku. makes me laugh to tears. so funneh. pee color? lol i really can't wait to see how this fic unfolds. i still have so many unanwered questions about rin and her background. i luv it. take care.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 07:31 PST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ms. Grrrl On: November 20, 2006 00:02 PST
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Glad to see another chappie up. Kikyou is sooo lying & Miroku said it himself: Everybody cheats. Now chop-chop, young lady! ^_^
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