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Title: OMFG!
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG THAT WAS INTENSE!!!! I was shocked! that was really good! why dose Kagome have to be hardheaded that isnt good! lol Update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 09:22 PST
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This last chapter was amazing! I can understand why Kagome acted the way she did but I wish she didnt though. And I love the scene between Rin and Inuyasha and her son. Cant wait to read more.
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Title: Conspiracy Theories
Reviewed By: madjax36 On: January 26, 2009 14:26 PST
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Wow, you commented! Awesome! And you posted this on my birthday. BEAUTIFUL! Best birthday present by far. Eh, whatever. My birthday general sucks. It's what happens when your a January baby, and your birthday is just three weeks after Christmas and the rest. And I'm really glad to see the steps you're taking with the character transitions in this chapter. Nice job. Damn it was EMO! And very convincing. I liked how you described Kagome's thought process as she starts to become delusional regarding her personal involvement between Inuyasha and Bankotsu. Especially when you have "wonder woman", aka Sango, say the right thing at the wrong time. Obviously, she might be from a demon slaying family, but personal psychology isn't her strong suit. ;p However, great plot device and wonderful, pivotal transition point to lead into the great blowout btw Kagome and Inuyasha. Fucking amazing. Really. Because you nailed it. Shit. It was like I was back at the County Mental Hospital getting my eval. and meeting kids with the same background as those portrayed in this lovely story. The only difference, they're broke - mentally. Might as well have been partially labotemized, or just heavily medicated, whereas the shining light in this story is that Kagome's conscious keeps pounding away at her. Well, except this chapter. Hehe. Nice cliffy. Okay, I think I've rambled enough here. Peace. Madjax36
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 07:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I'm sooo happy today! All my long neglated and yet favorite fics have all been updated in the last week! This is better than Christmas! :D
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 19:19 PST
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Thank you. My birthday turned out pretty decent this year. I couldn't figure out how you were gonna get all that out in the open with Inu and Kags, but I'm impressed. It was darker than I thought it'd be too. Props on that. Totally captured the emotions she would feel after all of that. The paranoia was the perfect touch. On another note; I agree about the Twilight movie. It was extremely choppy. The more I think about it the more it bothers me. It was good as far as movies go, but for following the book it was shit. Idk. Maybe I just expected too much from it. Hopefully New Moon will be better. Chris Weitz will do well, I think. Well, here's to hoping, right? Haha. At least you never disappoint, eh? Well, maybe you do a few of those optomistic bastards out there. Lol. But the worse the affliction the sweeter the cure in my opinion. Maybe that's a little dark. Idk... Eh. Good luck on the next chapter anyways.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 08:42 PST
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Congratulations fallenangel7583 - your story Shades of Grey has been nominated for Best Darkfic/Horror and Best Original Character (Kagejiro) at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! CatLover260
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: January 16, 2009 08:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i did expect the cliffy, lol ...and really, it's not out of character at ALL for kagome to be so angry. there's been way too much deceit going on for her to feel a 100% trusting towards him. things are far from solved, i can see. after the pile of mess that was going on between kikyo/yash/kagome, anyone would be outraged in kag's place. i'm right there with her. what a cluster! but, an interesting one. as for yash going to see rin and kenren, that was awesome, and my pissed 'offness' at him went down a notch. XD what a stand up guy... rin could really use the help right now!! i hope you post just as quickly next time. your fics are always epic and i luv it!
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Reviewed By: blackr0s3 (logged out) On: January 14, 2009 18:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this chapter! Thank you for updating! It's always a nice day when one of your favorite fanfictions is updated right?(X Lol. I'm hoping things turn out well for Kagome and Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 03:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Gushing* I so love you!!!!!!! you are fantastic, your cliff-hangers are going to kill me!!!! every word is *squeal* (ok enough with the creepy stalker like talk....) I absolutely love it when you update.... great chapter... I heart Rin and her CUTE little baby boy... Kagejiro is still my favourite... ever planing on doing a back story on him??? Angry Kagome is VERY GOOD!!!! Also like the guitar hero thing (Its nothing like a real guitar....) I guess this is going to be the latest chapter for a while... (So I am VERY glad that you probably wont be updating on my birthday (20th of Jan) cause it would be a while until I could read it(going out on the 22 with my friend tot eh city and seeing Wicked... and staying in the city over night... hell know where as so far we haven't booked anything as far as I know...)...
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 01:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so she's just going to alienate everyone? this course of action she's chosen does not seem right. can't wait to see what happens next. man, how r they going to get together? how are they going to fix things? and more importantly, is sesshoumaru as big an asshole as everyone says he is? more soon!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 22:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy...I really don't have words to express anything at the moment, but I'll try. Poor Kagome. She's under so much stress she doesn't even know who her enemies are anymore. I'll get back to Kagome. Rin...ah, Rin. I still want to clean Sesshy's clock. He is one of my all time fav characters and I am having so many mixed feelings about him. I'm a little sad that we didn't see him this chapter, but I'll get over it. ^^ Anywho, Kagome. I just don't know what to say about that girl. She really needs to listen to her inner voices, but I know she's a little messed up at the moment. Poor Inu...poor baby. I just wanna cuddle him and tell him that it will be alright. I hope so anyway. And, I'm sorry, but Sango still gets on my nerves. She's just so...imposing. But, thank you sooooooooo much for the chapter. I nearly cried with joy when I seen it in my inbox. Keep up the wonderful work. This is still my fav story.
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Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 20:07 PST
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Thank you so much for updating. Well worth the wait. Kagome's a moron though and I'm pretty sure Inuyasha needs a hug now...Can't wait for the next chapter hun!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 20:00 PST
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Tsk tsk tsk...how can Kagome be so smart and so stupid at the same time? I liked the first bit with Rin, a good bit of development for her. Really, Kagome has to stop and think for a second. But she was so busy focused on being pissed off and making herself more pissed off, she couldn't figure out the truth. Well, hopefully she'll wise up soon.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 19:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...I know she kinda went psycho and was irrational and so many other things, but you're Kagome is my friggin' hero right now. If that isn't a woman scorned then I don't know what is! Amazing chapter...has me teetering on the edge of my seat wanting to know what will happen next! Until next update! And thank you so much again for answering my questions on Monmouth! ~Amber :D
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 18:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was deep i am flabbergased. BUT THAT WAS VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Kagome and Inuyasha get together and Kikyo Leaves town.......
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