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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: Spamming is the last thing I'd wanna do -_- Gomen
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 13:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So...I've finished the latest chapter =D I am so..soooooooo much lust and love with Kagejiro! He is simply fucking gorgeous!!! When he came at the club at first i just kept repeating "omg omg omg omg" over and over - fucking hyperventilating over here!!! He is amazing, seriously HE IS FUCKING AWESOME!!!! The way he handled Bankutso (who is.. *clears throat* sexy *cough*... so domineeringly sexy *shifty eyes*...) um yh!! He handled him good - scared the shit out of him! The images forming in my twisted mind was so vivid and it had me giggling like an idiot! And i just KNEW their dad helped out and it made me love that bloke lol.. That's how the fuck Kag's dad need to be acting; like an ass but turning into the warrior when it comes to his own flesh and blood. AND I LOVE SESSHOMARU!!!! Damn what he did to Bankotsu was so bad but so good!! lol, Sesshomaru is a sadist with fucking CLASS yo!!! I just love him, especially when he does think for the benefit of not only Inuyasha but his girl Kags. Really - you fuckin' amazing =D I can't wait for your next update! The reality that you have - stating that Kags may possibly never walk, the emotional turmoil Inuyasha is going thru - the realistic ways of this fic is what's making my heart clench up; I love stories like this one. Keepin' it real. Those 2 been thru so much - they need to get away from all these shades of gray and enter some fucking sunlight!... And I have hope for them. :) Oh btw, I like Jakotsu now. LOL. I'm never saying that line again though :P | Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 10:35 PDT
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I wished Kags had kicked him in the nuts, prevent him from giving it and let he be a broken bitch while getting his sausage | Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 10:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW IT WAS GONNA CUT OFF... I copied ma review lmao. SECOND PART: I wished Kags had kicked him in the nuts, prevent him from giving it and let he be a broken bitch while getting his sausage | Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 10:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so i had ALOT of catching up to do! O_O I had no idea was was 9 chapters behind!!!! OMG... and (reading them right after the other isn't bad - it's fucking amazing). I don't kno if u remember me, and how i use to go on and on about 'Jiro. He's fucking sexy. I love Miroku too! He's so observant; and because I'm now in college and studying sociology (really wanna move on to psychology) I can so relate to his observation and it's just fucking cool. Your characters are so realistic and fun to read. The scene when the 3 bro's went to confront their Dad and Inuyasha just started sputtering about death and knife - LOL that shit had me cracking up! I also love how they curse. Your story is dripping with alot of curse words but it's not overdone; they come in at the right time. Kagome's ordeal is so tragic - though when she turned against everyone, it was real fucked up of her but at the same time I could understand and that was what made it that much more heart-breaking. She feels so trapped in a world that she doesnt feel like she belong and her way out is through deviance, and who could blame her. Her dad is fucked up to the fullest - i so wanted her mom to pull a 9mm on his ass - along with Kikyou's parents! UGH... Those people feed of of fame so much that they're willing to send their own family to the wolves and it's fucking ridiculous! I love how she stood up to her dad though! I was so happy, and angry that she didnt get to give him the last word lmao. I just hope they get what's coming to them - especially her dad... ARGH - HE MAKES ME SO ANGRY!!! Then I HATE Jakutso. I know he's just being a friend, and he meant well, but... I just hate him. He did more wrong than what was intended. Everything would have come to light, yes, since they always do, but he practically took the fucking flashlight and aimed it on Inuyasha and Kagome with Kikyou as the audience. I wished Kags had kicked him in the nuts, prevent him from giving it and let he be a broken bitch while getting his sausage | Title: Now THAT'S How it's Done.
Reviewed By: DaGrrrl On: October 26, 2011 16:29 PDT
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As usual, you beat the shit outta this thing, Wen. Can't wait to see you published and sharing your stuff with the world! | Reviewed By: Scriptix(nsi) On: October 26, 2011 05:20 PDT
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*bounce**bounce**bounce* When I saw this in my inbox I got all excited. Thanks for the very action-packed, disturbing update! It was Sesshoumaru that called the cops though, right? Not their shitty dad? :x | Title: Chappy Four Zero
Reviewed By: ~too lazy to sign in~ On: October 24, 2011 18:35 PDT
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OH EM GEE!! Wow...soo much to take in right now!! Poor Kags. I am so friggin sad right now. And pissed like friggin Bank is completely mad! Send him to a psych ward yo!! And it`s about time his family said no to his crazy! Oh man, will Kaggers ever walk again? Realistically speaking she really shouldn't I guess, but Inu will love her anyways...:) I think Bank should suffer eternally!!!! ARGGGGG!! BTW awesome chappy! | Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko((OFLINE)) On: October 24, 2011 09:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well fuck me sideways and send me home to mom..... I honestly thought I would never know how this would end ;) But I am so happy to see a new chapter from you! It was beautiful! Glad to see that scum sucking pig finally get some just deserts! :) Love Kagejiro soooo much btw | Reviewed By: say0mi saki On: October 21, 2011 20:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. That warning was definitely needed in the beginning. I was near tears by the time Kagome's injuries were described. I would be heartbroken if she never fully heals. After everything she's had to go through, she'd have to live the rest of her life unable to walk? Of course, I was glad she lived through it, but it's just... so unfair. When I realized you updated, my squeal was so loud , people around me gave me the stink eye. LOL. It was so, so, so exciting to receive an alert that this story was updated. My day always gets so much better everytime this story is updated. It's like the treat a kid gets after a week of being on their best behavior. I have my fingers crossed for Kagome to fully recover. I love this story to death. I don't care how long I have to wait for an update because it's always worth it in the end. Thank you so much for this new chapter! No matter how depressing and disturbingly graphic it was - it was the cherry of my day. | Title: Missed you tons!!
Reviewed By: Midnight Cat (MidCat) On: October 21, 2011 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Daaaaaahhhhling!! I have missed you so much! I kept thinking about you all this months and wondering if you were ok... +-+-+- +-+-+- God woman! Only you could drop a bomb like this one!! Totally unexpected! I am so glad to see that you are still around the hood crafting incredible suspense and drama for us all!! Welcome back baby!! I know life gets in between and life outside internet takes usually a big toll on us, but I am so very grateful that you have not given up on us! I was a bit sad thinking that perhaps you were permanently MIA, but to see you back does my heart so much good! As usual, I have to tell you that this was another amazing chapter! I just have to whine and bitch a little because I don't want Bank to get out so easily after everything he has done! Jail and loosing his fortune is not enough! I was hoping for some sick and twisted fate to make everything he has done up to now seem like a walk in the park compared to what he should suffer! I know, I'm sick, but believe me when I tell you that I am not alone in this!! Please, pretty please, make him suffer!! I am just dying to see what happens next! Obviously you have been super busy, so I will not ride your butt into the sunset by telling you to update soon, but I will tell you that I will be here, days, weeks, and months even, waiting for you to come back!! Don't ever think that we will forget about you! We might not know you personally, but that does not mean that we don't give a damn about the person behind the keyboard who has give so much to us with this story! Chill out and remember that the love is still here just waiting for you, and will always be here, even after the end!! Love you tons! Take care and remember that you are loved for what you give to the world at large! Hugzzies from your # 1 fan: MidCat | Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2011 10:58 PDT
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A brilliant chapter, absolutely brilliant. Bankotsu is gone, Sesshomaru is on top, and hopefully Kagome pulls through. Awesome that Jak got to help take him down. I hope this isn't the end though. | Reviewed By: cheryr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2011 18:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome. I too am hooked, please update. I am dying to read more. | Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: July 26, 2011 11:02 PDT
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Omg so goooooood. You need to update. This is the second time I have read through it and I need the cinclusion desperately. Please dont leave me hanging!!!!! | Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2011 14:12 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-association.deviantart.com/blog/40025885/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/FanFic%20March%2 02011/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.animara.org/pickup_site.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Title: RE: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2011 17:47 PDT
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Correction... It has been nominated for the March 2011 Term. Sorry about the confusion. This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanfiction (Fiction) http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanart (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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