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Title: Chapter 37
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 23:07 PST
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Awesome chapter, and one of the hottest lemons yet. I'm glad they're talking again, and yet I still don't trust Naraku. Obviously he's nicer than I expected, but he acted a bit too oblivious with the hints to Inuyasha's true nature. If he doesn't figure it out on his own, he'll probably find out from his cousin.
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 13:37 PST
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alright so we all know that was kikyo right? anybody else think she has photoshop? hehehe. can't wait to see what happens!!! the confrontation is about to begin. more soon please!
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 13:37 PST
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alright so we all know that was kikyo right? anybody else think she has photoshop? hehehe. can't wait to see what happens!!! the confrontation is about to begin. more soon please!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 14:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) took me a couple nights to catch up with you but hot damn! I love it. Cant wait to see more for this one :)
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: TiffanyM [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 10:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... that was awesome =D well worth the wait but hopefully the next update wont take as long... update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Leilachan ~nsi~ On: November 30, 2009 11:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! Is it true? Was she really doing naraku? Crazy. Either way, the mere possibility is enough to set yash off like a bomb. One sh*tty thing after the other. Poor kids. Hope real life takes a turn for the better for you. Hang in there, chica. *hugs* write when you can. We'll be here. : )
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Reviewed By: ohtarie On: November 29, 2009 23:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much! I can't wait for the next chapter, are we going to find out who photo shopped the pictures?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty(not loged in) On: November 29, 2009 07:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! really make you want to rattle some ones heads... I can't wait until a good thing happens in the story line... they have been down in the dumps for a while... though Rin "looks" better. I bet Sesshy and Rin get back together before Kagome is InuYasha!
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Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2009 05:45 PST
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truly amazing chapter, with cracked out miroku and everything. oh the angst!!! you're doing amazing, hope life is going better, and can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2009 05:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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... I didn't expect that at all! Are those pictures fake ones sent by Naraku or... are they real? It couldn't be! And here I thought Inuyasha and Kagome would be reunited. I guess more yelling is coming around first. Well, oddly, I can't wait for some Inu/Kag spat. So far, Jiro and Miroku have been great. :D Hope you'll update soon. P.S. -- What's really creepy is that at some point, I'd wanted Miroku to end up with Kikyo, since he hated her so much. I don't know if I already told you that. It's just been on my mind a lot while reading this story. Ah.
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2009 23:18 PST
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Oh no you didn't! I didn't see that coming at all. When you introduced the bit about Naraku and Kikyou I'd wondered where you were going to take it but this is SO MUCH juicier than anything my mind cooked up. I really enjoyed the read. Thanks for posting and take all the time you need to for the next chapter. It's always worth the wait!
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Title: Ouch, My Bad
Reviewed By: Sutlesarcasm, Not Sign In On: November 28, 2009 23:03 PST
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Sorry, I put in the wrong name, I meant Mistakes, not Sacriface. I am so glad to see your voice again. I am no author, but I know that RL has a tendency to f*&k with people worse than Murphy. I am VERY glad you were able to post again. I look forward to the next update, whenever Life lets you do so.
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Title: Chapter 36
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2009 21:38 PST
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Now we all *know* someone is pulling something here, the question is how and why. Kikyo seems a bit too obvious, but.....hm. Also, the segment in the cafeteria has some whacked-out formatting problems.
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 18:22 PST
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I love this story so much! I just spent the past weekend reading through it all. I've been reading Inu-fanfics for so many years, I'm shocked when I come across a gem like this. You had such a cool and interesting approach to the characters and I can't wait to see how the problems are finally resolved. Please, please, PLEASE update soon. It'd kill me if I had to wait months on end for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 22:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story, more than COTD. Really like the dom/sub relationship between IY/Kag, so hot!!! I can really see it. I also like Jiro. Such a cool character, although the Irish accent kind of messes with my mind. I love your Miroku(s), they always are either hilarious or really insightful. And those One-liners... so good!! I almost explode in laughter... LOL can't describe it accurately. Oh, when Bank came to see Kag at her dorm, I was scared shitless, I could hardly breathe... O.O That usually happens if I'm reading a really suspenseful novel or something. I understand where Kag is coming from but when she started that whole conspiracy nonsense, I just wanted to hit her with a 2x4. I know you like happy endings so I can't wait for it. Oh, by the way your french sentences aren't correct. I know french quite well being that it is my first language and I had some difficulty understanding it. If you want I could correct them for you. Just send me an email with the sentences. It will be my pleasure. ^^ Before I forget, you said at the beginning of the story that there was going to be a lot of smut and what not and that it was going to be worse than COTD. But I find that this story is much more tamed in the amount of smut. Mind you, I enjoyed the limes and lemons tremendously (dressing-room, oh yeah), but I wouldn't have minded having a little more (although that might be just because I'm some kind of pervert...) Please update soon! I get kind of scared seeing how much time passed between updates... Not very encouraging. Anyway, please continue this story, I read this instead of working or sleeping and I think you're a great writer. I hope you update soon and until then have fun!
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