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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Twix2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 07:25 PDT
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I'm probably so late to read this but damn...i'm hooked and i really want to get to the end. You're writing, the way you've spun this tale- i'm beginning to feel a bit like Kagome described to Sango about needing Inuyasha- I need the next chapters. Could you please end my torture and update if you can then..? Pretty please XD
| Reviewed By: Ikusa No Kuari [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god i hate you!!! x] i'm just kidding haha, I've been reading this fanfic on my phone and it ROCKS. And since I'm on a comp now I can review it hehe ^^ Well... here's my review x] I love it lots!!
| Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: Ikichira [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 17:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I shouldn't have even wasted the time it took to rate this story, because by the time I'm done with this review, you're going to know in full detail exactly how phenomenal this story is. I came across this story a mere three or so days ago, and I liked it from the very beginning. I have been taken on a roller coaster of emotions, so much so that I feel as though I have actually BEEN in this story. This is no exaggeration; I mean that completely literally. It has taken me quite some time to get to this point, where I spill my soul to you in the form of this inadequate review, but here we are--me the writer and you the reader, ironically enough. I feel that since you have more than successfully enraptured me with this story, literally dragged me from my world and placed me in the world of Shades of Gray, I as your humble reader and reviewer can do nothing but lavish these dazed compliments upon you. Before I read this story, I rarely felt such tremulous fear, anger, awe, and a slew of other emotions I can never hope to describe, but when I got into it...my characters blended into my mind. I thought of this story so often, I could barely wait to return home from school and hop on the Internet. I forewent my academic duties just to, for lack of a more suitable phrase, "get my fix" of Shades of Gray, and that's saying quite a lot. I realize that other reviewers have left reviews similar to this, and I understand if you think I'm being repetitive to the point of annoyance, but please, understand my viewpoint as a reader. I read a review reply in, I think, chapter 32, which said that you had just gotten done with the Twilight series. I am being completely and utterly honest when I say that I too have read the series, and it was like a Dr. Seuss book compared to this masterpiece. But I digress. I'd like to get into more specific reasons...I hope you don't mind the extremely long review, but if I don't say these things, they might, quote, "burst out of me like an alien". Bankoutsu/Oberon: The most wonderfully executed example of dual personality and domination I have ever read. Kagome: An awe-inspiring girl, whose past experiences in life fully justify her present actions, though not so much her occasional empty-headedness. ^_^ Inuyasha/Sha: Romantic, yet...his sense of honor leaves much to be desired. Stringing along two women at once whilst your heart is only devoted to one? Shame, shame, Inu-chan. Kikyou: One of the most sympathy-inducing and totally understandable versions of Kikyou I have ever read. Most usually write her off as just a bitch, with no further explanation than that, but this fic has so much more detail. Rin/Catherine: Usually, I don't like Sesshoumaru/Rin pairings, being more partial to Kagura/Sesshoumaru. But I made an exception for this story, and I'm glad I did; their relationship makes so much more sense here. Sango: I really do believe she only has Kagome's best interests in mind, but she can be such a busybody sometimes. (I almost hate to agree with Inuyasha on that point.) Miroku: As always, I love the lecher. What more can I say? Kagejiro: His temperament is both humorous and chilling at the same time...bravo on his creation. Hmm. It seems I'm close to exceeding the 4000-character limit...I blush. I've never written such a long review! But this story truly deserved it, as well as the IYFanguild nominations. Congrats on that! Here is where I end my review. I humbly await your next update, and pray that it shall come soon.
| Title: OMFG!
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG THAT WAS INTENSE!!!! I was shocked! that was really good! why dose Kagome have to be hardheaded that isnt good! lol Update soon! :)
| Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 09:22 PST
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This last chapter was amazing! I can understand why Kagome acted the way she did but I wish she didnt though. And I love the scene between Rin and Inuyasha and her son. Cant wait to read more.
| Title: Conspiracy Theories
Reviewed By: madjax36 On: January 26, 2009 14:26 PST
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Wow, you commented! Awesome! And you posted this on my birthday. BEAUTIFUL! Best birthday present by far. Eh, whatever. My birthday general sucks. It's what happens when your a January baby, and your birthday is just three weeks after Christmas and the rest. And I'm really glad to see the steps you're taking with the character transitions in this chapter. Nice job. Damn it was EMO! And very convincing. I liked how you described Kagome's thought process as she starts to become delusional regarding her personal involvement between Inuyasha and Bankotsu. Especially when you have "wonder woman", aka Sango, say the right thing at the wrong time. Obviously, she might be from a demon slaying family, but personal psychology isn't her strong suit. ;p However, great plot device and wonderful, pivotal transition point to lead into the great blowout btw Kagome and Inuyasha. Fucking amazing. Really. Because you nailed it. Shit. It was like I was back at the County Mental Hospital getting my eval. and meeting kids with the same background as those portrayed in this lovely story. The only difference, they're broke - mentally. Might as well have been partially labotemized, or just heavily medicated, whereas the shining light in this story is that Kagome's conscious keeps pounding away at her. Well, except this chapter. Hehe. Nice cliffy. Okay, I think I've rambled enough here. Peace. Madjax36
| Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 07:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I'm sooo happy today! All my long neglated and yet favorite fics have all been updated in the last week! This is better than Christmas! :D
| Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 19:19 PST
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Thank you. My birthday turned out pretty decent this year. I couldn't figure out how you were gonna get all that out in the open with Inu and Kags, but I'm impressed. It was darker than I thought it'd be too. Props on that. Totally captured the emotions she would feel after all of that. The paranoia was the perfect touch. On another note; I agree about the Twilight movie. It was extremely choppy. The more I think about it the more it bothers me. It was good as far as movies go, but for following the book it was shit. Idk. Maybe I just expected too much from it. Hopefully New Moon will be better. Chris Weitz will do well, I think. Well, here's to hoping, right? Haha. At least you never disappoint, eh? Well, maybe you do a few of those optomistic bastards out there. Lol. But the worse the affliction the sweeter the cure in my opinion. Maybe that's a little dark. Idk... Eh. Good luck on the next chapter anyways.
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 08:42 PST
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Congratulations fallenangel7583 - your story Shades of Grey has been nominated for Best Darkfic/Horror and Best Original Character (Kagejiro) at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! CatLover260
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: January 16, 2009 08:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i did expect the cliffy, lol ...and really, it's not out of character at ALL for kagome to be so angry. there's been way too much deceit going on for her to feel a 100% trusting towards him. things are far from solved, i can see. after the pile of mess that was going on between kikyo/yash/kagome, anyone would be outraged in kag's place. i'm right there with her. what a cluster! but, an interesting one. as for yash going to see rin and kenren, that was awesome, and my pissed 'offness' at him went down a notch. XD what a stand up guy... rin could really use the help right now!! i hope you post just as quickly next time. your fics are always epic and i luv it!
| Reviewed By: blackr0s3 (logged out) On: January 14, 2009 18:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this chapter! Thank you for updating! It's always a nice day when one of your favorite fanfictions is updated right?(X Lol. I'm hoping things turn out well for Kagome and Inuyasha.
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 03:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Gushing* I so love you!!!!!!! you are fantastic, your cliff-hangers are going to kill me!!!! every word is *squeal* (ok enough with the creepy stalker like talk....) I absolutely love it when you update.... great chapter... I heart Rin and her CUTE little baby boy... Kagejiro is still my favourite... ever planing on doing a back story on him??? Angry Kagome is VERY GOOD!!!! Also like the guitar hero thing (Its nothing like a real guitar....) I guess this is going to be the latest chapter for a while... (So I am VERY glad that you probably wont be updating on my birthday (20th of Jan) cause it would be a while until I could read it(going out on the 22 with my friend tot eh city and seeing Wicked... and staying in the city over night... hell know where as so far we haven't booked anything as far as I know...)...
| Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 01:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so she's just going to alienate everyone? this course of action she's chosen does not seem right. can't wait to see what happens next. man, how r they going to get together? how are they going to fix things? and more importantly, is sesshoumaru as big an asshole as everyone says he is? more soon!
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 22:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy...I really don't have words to express anything at the moment, but I'll try. Poor Kagome. She's under so much stress she doesn't even know who her enemies are anymore. I'll get back to Kagome. Rin...ah, Rin. I still want to clean Sesshy's clock. He is one of my all time fav characters and I am having so many mixed feelings about him. I'm a little sad that we didn't see him this chapter, but I'll get over it. ^^ Anywho, Kagome. I just don't know what to say about that girl. She really needs to listen to her inner voices, but I know she's a little messed up at the moment. Poor Inu...poor baby. I just wanna cuddle him and tell him that it will be alright. I hope so anyway. And, I'm sorry, but Sango still gets on my nerves. She's just so...imposing. But, thank you sooooooooo much for the chapter. I nearly cried with joy when I seen it in my inbox. Keep up the wonderful work. This is still my fav story.
| Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 20:07 PST
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Thank you so much for updating. Well worth the wait. Kagome's a moron though and I'm pretty sure Inuyasha needs a hug now...Can't wait for the next chapter hun!
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