| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: bluerose3514 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2012 20:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Epic. Enough said. .... No... not enough. Lol. This chapter was amazing. I was just about to go to bed when I saw you had updated. I almost cried, because it has been so dead lately of good fics to read. Wonderful job. It's really sad to see Jiro go. He was honestly one of my favorite OC of all time... such a bad ass. Lol. Glad you haven't given up, this story is awesome. Can't wait to see what comes next. |
Reviewed By: CityOfFallenAshes On: August 09, 2012 23:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitely one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. I just wanted to say that one, Bankotsu needs to go die in a hole and two, you've completely changed my outlook on Jakotsu. If Jakotsu hadn't been a bad guy in the manga/anime, I seriously believe that the way you showed him would have happened. You've made me fall in love with Jakotsu's character, compared to five minutes ago before I read this chapter that I wanted to strangle him. If you think about it...he really could be this caring and stuff, and I wanted to thank you for changing my outlook on him. :) When I see Jakotsu in the anime when I rewatch it, I'm gonna ignore the Band of Seven attitude and cheer for him, thanks to you. Now, I must read just ONE more chapter before bed...okay, ten more. XD |
Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2012 23:33 PDT
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I cried. I loved Kagejiro so much... He had really grown on me! I'm so saddened that he had to die, but I'm glad that Kagome us okay.. I totally didn't expect for that to happen! I am so attached to this story!! I've been here from the very beginning of it and it's amazing how far it's progressed. Thank you so mych for the update, it is very much appreciated!! |
Title: Holy shit.
Reviewed By: Immoral On: August 08, 2012 23:20 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy fuck. Despite the long intercession you STILL have me hooked on this blasted fic! JIRO?! Whyyyyyyyyy?????? And how? What I really, reeeaally, want to know now is what Miroku wanted to tell Inuyasha before he left for the hospital. Kagome's dad is a fucking jerk. I can't believe he STILL won't see her. Well at least Kik grew a heart. Anyways, I am glad to know you're alive and hope that you are doing well. Thank's for posting (offers fresh cyber cookies), I look forward to the next!! :) |
Reviewed By: smcforlife On: August 08, 2012 21:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, you're worth the wait. Straight out of the ballpark. |
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 (not signed in) On: August 08, 2012 21:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. This story is amazing. It makes my whole day when it's update and the wait is always worth it... so freaking worth it because your writing and your unique plot twists are always amazing. With how bleak this chapter began and how little hope everyone had on Kagome's recovery.. I really thought she was a goner. I even contemplated not reading the story any further because I wouldn't have been able to handle it - after all she's gone through and after all she's overcome... she doesn't recover. That would have just killed me. I'd probably be crying for days. I'm so invested in these characters and in your story. I've loved this story for years and it would have been absolute torture to have everything end so horribly for everyone. Jiro was definitely a favorite character of mine and and he's definitely one of the most memorable original characters in the IY fanfiction fandom. I can't believe what a huge sacrifice he made.. and while I'll miss him, I'm just so relieved that kagome is completely healed. I was completely throw off with the whole revelation of Jiro and Midoriko. I was not expecting that plot twist but it definitely makes everything even more interesting. I'm going to have to re-read some of jiros scenes to look for any clues I missed.. I have to admit, sometimes with my rush to get to Kagome's and Inuyasha's scenes I skimmed over Jiro's parts. I hope Bankotsu is killed slowly. I want him to suffer, and indefinitely wouldn't mind if Kagome's father is thrown in there with him. I hate that man just as much as I hate Bankotsu. They deserve to die painful deaths together. Thank you so much for this chapter. It was such an exciting treat.. it really really made my whole day! Thank you! I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2012 22:39 PDT
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Hey, I hope you're still around! I'm looking forward to seeing how everything works out! |
Title: Loved
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2012 11:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your story and hope there is more added soon to your creativity. I'd love to see how your stories progress and can't wait to see more entries. |
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 13:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh oh, it just crossed my mind! The trouble is far from over aint it? I mean if Onigumo had a pic of Inuyasha as Sha, and Bankutso has no idea that Inuyasha and Sha are one in the same (simply theories) then that means Inuyasha assumptions were wrong! And what my sexy ass Irish sex on legs was saying about Inuyasha reading too much into it was right!! So yh... PLUS - what did Kikyou want out from the guy she was shacking up with - also since the theory was that Onigumo was in liege with Oberon, then Kikyou would have known about that underground world... and she doesnt. So, the there's more shit to hit the fan - and am wondering if Naraku has something to do with it as well. Becuz u said his father died and he made piece with his cousins; and Kikyou proves that she worries for Kags - family is family (well not for sexy pyscho Bank) and Naraku is alone, therefore Onigumo and his older bro and other relatives are all Naraku has - so... wanting to hand him over to the Taisho is... unrealistic? ... Am just rambling here, but yh... fucking love your fic *cheeky grins* And I'm hungry for answers - Update when you can!! =D |
Title: Spamming is the last thing I'd wanna do -_- Gomen
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 13:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So...I've finished the latest chapter =D I am so..soooooooo much lust and love with Kagejiro! He is simply fucking gorgeous!!! When he came at the club at first i just kept repeating "omg omg omg omg" over and over - fucking hyperventilating over here!!! He is amazing, seriously HE IS FUCKING AWESOME!!!! The way he handled Bankutso (who is.. *clears throat* sexy *cough*... so domineeringly sexy *shifty eyes*...) um yh!! He handled him good - scared the shit out of him! The images forming in my twisted mind was so vivid and it had me giggling like an idiot! And i just KNEW their dad helped out and it made me love that bloke lol.. That's how the fuck Kag's dad need to be acting; like an ass but turning into the warrior when it comes to his own flesh and blood. AND I LOVE SESSHOMARU!!!! Damn what he did to Bankotsu was so bad but so good!! lol, Sesshomaru is a sadist with fucking CLASS yo!!! I just love him, especially when he does think for the benefit of not only Inuyasha but his girl Kags. Really - you fuckin' amazing =D I can't wait for your next update! The reality that you have - stating that Kags may possibly never walk, the emotional turmoil Inuyasha is going thru - the realistic ways of this fic is what's making my heart clench up; I love stories like this one. Keepin' it real. Those 2 been thru so much - they need to get away from all these shades of gray and enter some fucking sunlight!... And I have hope for them. :) Oh btw, I like Jakotsu now. LOL. I'm never saying that line again though :P |
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 10:35 PDT
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I wished Kags had kicked him in the nuts, prevent him from giving it and let he be a broken bitch while getting his sausage |
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 10:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW IT WAS GONNA CUT OFF... I copied ma review lmao. SECOND PART: I wished Kags had kicked him in the nuts, prevent him from giving it and let he be a broken bitch while getting his sausage |
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 10:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so i had ALOT of catching up to do! O_O I had no idea was was 9 chapters behind!!!! OMG... and (reading them right after the other isn't bad - it's fucking amazing). I don't kno if u remember me, and how i use to go on and on about 'Jiro. He's fucking sexy. I love Miroku too! He's so observant; and because I'm now in college and studying sociology (really wanna move on to psychology) I can so relate to his observation and it's just fucking cool. Your characters are so realistic and fun to read. The scene when the 3 bro's went to confront their Dad and Inuyasha just started sputtering about death and knife - LOL that shit had me cracking up! I also love how they curse. Your story is dripping with alot of curse words but it's not overdone; they come in at the right time. Kagome's ordeal is so tragic - though when she turned against everyone, it was real fucked up of her but at the same time I could understand and that was what made it that much more heart-breaking. She feels so trapped in a world that she doesnt feel like she belong and her way out is through deviance, and who could blame her. Her dad is fucked up to the fullest - i so wanted her mom to pull a 9mm on his ass - along with Kikyou's parents! UGH... Those people feed of of fame so much that they're willing to send their own family to the wolves and it's fucking ridiculous! I love how she stood up to her dad though! I was so happy, and angry that she didnt get to give him the last word lmao. I just hope they get what's coming to them - especially her dad... ARGH - HE MAKES ME SO ANGRY!!! Then I HATE Jakutso. I know he's just being a friend, and he meant well, but... I just hate him. He did more wrong than what was intended. Everything would have come to light, yes, since they always do, but he practically took the fucking flashlight and aimed it on Inuyasha and Kagome with Kikyou as the audience. I wished Kags had kicked him in the nuts, prevent him from giving it and let he be a broken bitch while getting his sausage |
Title: Now THAT'S How it's Done.
Reviewed By: DaGrrrl On: October 26, 2011 16:29 PDT
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As usual, you beat the shit outta this thing, Wen. Can't wait to see you published and sharing your stuff with the world! |
Reviewed By: Scriptix(nsi) On: October 26, 2011 05:20 PDT
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*bounce**bounce**bounce* When I saw this in my inbox I got all excited. Thanks for the very action-packed, disturbing update! It was Sesshoumaru that called the cops though, right? Not their shitty dad? :x |
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