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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: Chappy Four Zero
Reviewed By: ~too lazy to sign in~ On: October 24, 2011 18:35 PDT
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OH EM GEE!! Wow...soo much to take in right now!! Poor Kags. I am so friggin sad right now. And pissed like friggin Bank is completely mad! Send him to a psych ward yo!! And it`s about time his family said no to his crazy! Oh man, will Kaggers ever walk again? Realistically speaking she really shouldn't I guess, but Inu will love her anyways...:) I think Bank should suffer eternally!!!! ARGGGGG!! BTW awesome chappy! | Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko((OFLINE)) On: October 24, 2011 09:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well fuck me sideways and send me home to mom..... I honestly thought I would never know how this would end ;) But I am so happy to see a new chapter from you! It was beautiful! Glad to see that scum sucking pig finally get some just deserts! :) Love Kagejiro soooo much btw | Reviewed By: say0mi saki On: October 21, 2011 20:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. That warning was definitely needed in the beginning. I was near tears by the time Kagome's injuries were described. I would be heartbroken if she never fully heals. After everything she's had to go through, she'd have to live the rest of her life unable to walk? Of course, I was glad she lived through it, but it's just... so unfair. When I realized you updated, my squeal was so loud , people around me gave me the stink eye. LOL. It was so, so, so exciting to receive an alert that this story was updated. My day always gets so much better everytime this story is updated. It's like the treat a kid gets after a week of being on their best behavior. I have my fingers crossed for Kagome to fully recover. I love this story to death. I don't care how long I have to wait for an update because it's always worth it in the end. Thank you so much for this new chapter! No matter how depressing and disturbingly graphic it was - it was the cherry of my day. | Title: Missed you tons!!
Reviewed By: Midnight Cat (MidCat) On: October 21, 2011 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Daaaaaahhhhling!! I have missed you so much! I kept thinking about you all this months and wondering if you were ok... +-+-+- +-+-+- God woman! Only you could drop a bomb like this one!! Totally unexpected! I am so glad to see that you are still around the hood crafting incredible suspense and drama for us all!! Welcome back baby!! I know life gets in between and life outside internet takes usually a big toll on us, but I am so very grateful that you have not given up on us! I was a bit sad thinking that perhaps you were permanently MIA, but to see you back does my heart so much good! As usual, I have to tell you that this was another amazing chapter! I just have to whine and bitch a little because I don't want Bank to get out so easily after everything he has done! Jail and loosing his fortune is not enough! I was hoping for some sick and twisted fate to make everything he has done up to now seem like a walk in the park compared to what he should suffer! I know, I'm sick, but believe me when I tell you that I am not alone in this!! Please, pretty please, make him suffer!! I am just dying to see what happens next! Obviously you have been super busy, so I will not ride your butt into the sunset by telling you to update soon, but I will tell you that I will be here, days, weeks, and months even, waiting for you to come back!! Don't ever think that we will forget about you! We might not know you personally, but that does not mean that we don't give a damn about the person behind the keyboard who has give so much to us with this story! Chill out and remember that the love is still here just waiting for you, and will always be here, even after the end!! Love you tons! Take care and remember that you are loved for what you give to the world at large! Hugzzies from your # 1 fan: MidCat | Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2011 10:58 PDT
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A brilliant chapter, absolutely brilliant. Bankotsu is gone, Sesshomaru is on top, and hopefully Kagome pulls through. Awesome that Jak got to help take him down. I hope this isn't the end though. | Reviewed By: cheryr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2011 18:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome. I too am hooked, please update. I am dying to read more. | Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: July 26, 2011 11:02 PDT
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Omg so goooooood. You need to update. This is the second time I have read through it and I need the cinclusion desperately. Please dont leave me hanging!!!!! | Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2011 14:12 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-association.deviantart.com/blog/40025885/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/FanFic%20March%2 02011/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.animara.org/pickup_site.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Title: RE: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2011 17:47 PDT
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Correction... It has been nominated for the March 2011 Term. Sorry about the confusion. This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanfiction (Fiction) http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanart (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2011 16:43 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the December 2010 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-association.deviantart.com/blog/37672581/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.animara.org/pickup_site.php First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal.animara.org/gallery.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 10:42 PST
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THIS STORY IS AMAZING. Waiting for an updaaaate heart heart. | Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 05:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story non-stop you have me completely hooked in the world you have created. This story is absolutely amazing, gripping, exciting and entertaining. I love the way you depict the characters, you really make them feel like real people, showing their positive traits and flaws as well. And your dialogue is incredible, I can't tell the amount of times I have laughed at the banter, word play and double entendre. You are truly talented. The way you have show the double personalities and alter egos has been very fascinating as you have shown a true grasp of the characters inner psychosis and the impulses that drive them. You really know how to capture the atmosphere of a scene, from the electric intimacy between Kagome and inuyasha to the horror with Bank, I can feel kagome's fear and terror when he is near. I also like the subplots with the other characters and how it fits in with the main plot, I really look forward to your next update, I am just sad that this incredible story will be coming to an end soon. | Reviewed By: Scriptix(nsi) On: January 25, 2011 22:49 PST
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Kagome will be avenged, or get revenge, I have not yet decided ~*~ Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. | Title: Ch. 39
Reviewed By: Katlady13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2011 16:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. First, let me say Merry Christmas to myself for your awesome update! I hope your holidays were wonderful! Also, yes this was my first child and now she's almost six months. She had a great first christmas and good visits with family all over. A baby does make for some stressful traveling when you're trying to see everyone though. Now, wow. You have some seriously strong female characters in this story. First Kaui goes back and confronts her ass of an ex to try and save her little girl, I love it. Any mother would do anything to save their child and you captured that perfectly. I'm so glad she told all of them about Souta. Next, you have Kikyou who, not only already tried to call InuYasha, but flat out left her family with one hell of a one liner! I love how you built up the suspense of what is going on with Kags right now through everyone she is connected to. Also, I love that Seshy is back in action, and was caught cuddling with Rin and Kenren. That was a much needed dose of cute. More than anything, I love that even after everything all of the people that Kags has connected with are coming together to save her. I really truly hope that you can finish this story, I've been hooked on it for years and can't believe it's almost over. If there is anything I can do to help, please let me know! You are truly a gifted writer and it's been such a privilege to read your work. | Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: December 27, 2010 21:06 PST
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:) how good it feels to be able to leave you a review! fucking fantastic! your ability to ensnare my full attention is remarkable. you have a serious skill, and yet you leave me with yet another cliff :P lol but then again there is at least one more to come if you have 2 more chapters to go. I think it would be cool to have a spin off story about Kagejiro :P see his life. Considering he may be my all time favorite OC | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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