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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: July 26, 2011 11:02 PDT
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Omg so goooooood. You need to update. This is the second time I have read through it and I need the cinclusion desperately. Please dont leave me hanging!!!!! | Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2011 14:12 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-association.deviantart.com/blog/40025885/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/FanFic%20March%2 02011/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.animara.org/pickup_site.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Title: RE: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2011 17:47 PDT
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Correction... It has been nominated for the March 2011 Term. Sorry about the confusion. This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanfiction (Fiction) http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanart (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2011 16:43 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the December 2010 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-association.deviantart.com/blog/37672581/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.animara.org/pickup_site.php First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal.animara.org/gallery.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 10:42 PST
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THIS STORY IS AMAZING. Waiting for an updaaaate heart heart. | Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 05:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story non-stop you have me completely hooked in the world you have created. This story is absolutely amazing, gripping, exciting and entertaining. I love the way you depict the characters, you really make them feel like real people, showing their positive traits and flaws as well. And your dialogue is incredible, I can't tell the amount of times I have laughed at the banter, word play and double entendre. You are truly talented. The way you have show the double personalities and alter egos has been very fascinating as you have shown a true grasp of the characters inner psychosis and the impulses that drive them. You really know how to capture the atmosphere of a scene, from the electric intimacy between Kagome and inuyasha to the horror with Bank, I can feel kagome's fear and terror when he is near. I also like the subplots with the other characters and how it fits in with the main plot, I really look forward to your next update, I am just sad that this incredible story will be coming to an end soon. | Reviewed By: Scriptix(nsi) On: January 25, 2011 22:49 PST
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Kagome will be avenged, or get revenge, I have not yet decided ~*~ Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. Revenge. | Title: Ch. 39
Reviewed By: Katlady13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2011 16:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. First, let me say Merry Christmas to myself for your awesome update! I hope your holidays were wonderful! Also, yes this was my first child and now she's almost six months. She had a great first christmas and good visits with family all over. A baby does make for some stressful traveling when you're trying to see everyone though. Now, wow. You have some seriously strong female characters in this story. First Kaui goes back and confronts her ass of an ex to try and save her little girl, I love it. Any mother would do anything to save their child and you captured that perfectly. I'm so glad she told all of them about Souta. Next, you have Kikyou who, not only already tried to call InuYasha, but flat out left her family with one hell of a one liner! I love how you built up the suspense of what is going on with Kags right now through everyone she is connected to. Also, I love that Seshy is back in action, and was caught cuddling with Rin and Kenren. That was a much needed dose of cute. More than anything, I love that even after everything all of the people that Kags has connected with are coming together to save her. I really truly hope that you can finish this story, I've been hooked on it for years and can't believe it's almost over. If there is anything I can do to help, please let me know! You are truly a gifted writer and it's been such a privilege to read your work. | Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: December 27, 2010 21:06 PST
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:) how good it feels to be able to leave you a review! fucking fantastic! your ability to ensnare my full attention is remarkable. you have a serious skill, and yet you leave me with yet another cliff :P lol but then again there is at least one more to come if you have 2 more chapters to go. I think it would be cool to have a spin off story about Kagejiro :P see his life. Considering he may be my all time favorite OC | Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2010 11:26 PST
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oh and i forgot i loved Kikyou's line “As for shameful indiscretions, I lost my virginity on the back of a school bus in seventh grade to a high school dropout. Sit on that and rotate!” that was great gave me a good laugh i could picture her saying it and her parents reaction perfectly halarious! | Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2010 11:23 PST
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Happy Holidays to you and yours and a Happy New Year as well. I hope you dont leave us hanging too long before you update but i know life can be very hectic i can only hope that you are able to finish the story, ive stuck with you and this fic for too long for it to be left unfinished lol. | Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 15:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh Merry Christmas/happy holidays or what ever to you and all those who read this story. | Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 15:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure know how to keep some one hanging on. I love what Kikyo told her parents “As for shameful indiscretions, I lost my virginity on the back of a school bus in seventh grade to a high school dropout. Sit on that and rotate!” Fantastic line. And Yura's line “When a gorgeous guy parks a million dollar car in the parking lot of this scummy place, you take notice to the comings and goings. Trust me; you’d know if they were back.” the whole thing with Yura was Awesome, very funny, right where you needed it. | Reviewed By: New Fan On: December 23, 2010 15:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very deep chapter I just read. I can not wait to see/read what Inu's brothers involvment will be like when they saving Kagome. Will daddy dearest know what has happen? If he does, will he get involve? Update really soon!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 10:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. Is Inuyasha's theory about Onigumo and Bankotsu right? Doesn't sound so bad to me. Clearly, it's soap opera-ish, but who doesn't like that stuff when it's so well written? Anyway, Kagejiro is still amazing. He says what everyone thinks out loud and makes every other character look moronic in comparison to him, lol. I also loved the first part with Kikyo and Kagome's family. Nice insight. And now that everybody is up to date, I can't wait for this major ass kicking we're talking about! It sure is sad to hear about this story coming to an end, but it's only normal and thank goodness you never gave up! So excited. :) Thanks for the update, you amazing you, haha. | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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