| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: Queen Noriko On: July 01, 2002 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now we're getting somewhere. For your first G/CC fic you out did yourself. I think I'm going to make a prediction for the next chapter. I see you writing about Videl and gohen because you want to keep the best for last (the B/V chapter) Anyeay, prove me right or prove me wrong, but just get the next chapter out soon PLEASE!! Can't wait until next time. |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 01, 2002 00:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
(this is for Ch 11, since I couldn't submit on FF.net) Those girls better watch themselves! It looks like they have three ticked-off and frustrated Saiyans on their hands. And a brooding Vegeta is never good! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
ARGH! It cut off my last review! Damn those arrows! >) *smirks* That would be cool, but it's up to you. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 19:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT!!! So, Chi-Chi's out of the bet now, and Bulma and Videl hate each other more than anything else> |
Reviewed By: L.F.Snape On: June 30, 2002 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lemme try this again:
You go Jadedbest!!!
lil >)I'm perpetualgreenness@comcast.net |
Reviewed By: L.F.Snape On: June 30, 2002 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
,font color="grey">You go Jadedbest!!!
lil >)I'm perpetualgreenness@comcast.net |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: June 30, 2002 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hah, so Chichi did end up with the right glass! ^_^ Whoo! That was great! I thought it was funny how Vegeta and Gohan let Videl and Bulma keep fighting! Really good! Can't wait for the next chap! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOO! THIS STORY IS THE BEST! YOU MUST UPDATE! you must i tell you!
Peace ^_^ |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow! This was so cool! It did make up for the last chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You gotta update soon, oh please, who loses next! Please Videl! >. |
Reviewed By: Iceis [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew deep down that the little harpy was going to loose that bet first! And the fight between Videl and Bulma was priceless! Update really soon! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderfull love this ficcy |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 30, 2002 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT!! CAT FIGHT! CAT FIGHT! Man they really went at it didn't they! I guess that something snapped after not getting any for awhile. Anyway, the G/CC lemon was awesome, considering that it's your first. So who's gonna fold next? Can't wait to find out! Great job JB!! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter! Anyone up for a fuck on Yamcha's truck? Okay, I know that was corny, but I couldn't help it. I say the damnedest things late at night when I'm tired. I guess that's why I wait until after midnight to write my comedies and my bio. Once again, I beat your email. I feel so proud! I wonder who will break next. Hmm...A V/B is always good, but then again, I'd like to see you take a stab at a G/V. Decisions, decisions. When you asked about Mikomi and Videl having a cat fight, was this what you were talking about? Honestly, I'd have to feel sorry for Videl if she picked a fight with Mikomi, especially if she does so after another few chapters. Who knows, I may take your suggestion. Well, I've said enought, I think. Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I read this earlier and ff.net and I had a good round, but in the end, the site won and I couldn't review. Well, I think you know how much I love this story. It is so awesome! I love to see people get tortured, and that's exactly what every chapter is all about. I love this one so much. I can't wait for you to update! Peace and Out. |
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