| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: EvilGotenks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2002 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE the newest installment of your story! I did notice, however, that your spelling slipped up a little, but nothing major. I was wondering, are you going to make 18 and Krilin keep the money? That would be sooooooooo wrong! I also think you should get Goten into this more, but that's my personal opinon since Gotne's my favorite character! All in all, this is an AWESOME!!!!!! I'm looking forward to the next installment!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2002 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY! Heh heh, ooo! Can't wait too see what happens! Post another chap soon ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2002 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
roflmbo! OHMIGOSH! That was hilarious! Poor Veggie! I tell you, if it were me and him.... I'd be giving the others the money! One night away from him is one too much! lol
`I swear that man's voice alone could drive me to a climax…' Man, you are naughty! And hey, don't blame me for Vegeta not getting any. And really, if she had given in, it would've been ooc. She's too stubborn. I think Vegeta should find out and tell the others.... Then they can tease the women! Just a thought. ;) |
Reviewed By: Jay On: May 02, 2002 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i couldn't stop myself from laughing. i love it. oh, and that remark about his voice, oooohhhhh. keep up the great work and hurry up and update.
chichi's abstinence is realistic to her character (in my mind anyway) but bulma??? bulma without vegeta and sex? yeah right.
anybody out there want to bet me $50 that chichi wins the bet?
oh, and i found the link to this fic on Gokugirl's site. thanks GG for the link, it _is_ worthy of being 'fic of the week.'
jadedbest, iI can't wait to read more of your work. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 02, 2002 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO!!! Poor Veggie, He's gonna go nuts soon unless you stop this madness. |
Reviewed By: SSJ3GOTENKS On: May 01, 2002 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I REALLY LIKE THIS...POOR VEGETA LOL. PLEASE RITE MORE!!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2002 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it i really love it keep it coming like to see who caves in frist |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2002 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
NEXT CHAPTER NEXT CHAPTER *urges* Come on!!!! That whole scene with B/V... OMG. I almost died I was laughing so hard. It's a cruel, cruel world.. I agree. HELL WITH WILLPOWER! Vegeta, nekked, wanting ME?! I would just explode.
Gimme a pillow! XD |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 01, 2002 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really cute! I can't wait to see what Vegeta's reaction will be! Update soon please! |
Reviewed By: Evil Gotenks On: April 30, 2002 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this fanfic has a good begining and a thoughtful, humourous, storyline |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2002 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just plain torture! It's inhumane for crying out loud!! How can someone be so cruel!!! Probably because...it's pretty damn funny! Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 29, 2002 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Must be the dry season all over! lol Don't you hate it when a 'close friend' asks you if you have a friend in school you'd like to get closer to and you open your mouth and out pops the most stupid thing ever, "Yeah, but that was in elementary school" (Slaps self on head) STUPID STUPUD STUPID! Oh, well, sometimes you win...sometimes you really suck!
But he did mention a notebook! Now, I have to know what's in the notebook!!!!
I like this. Poor Veg-head. Heck, you know I don't care about the Son's. They can handle it... But Vegeta and Bulma? If I were Bulma, heck with pride and money! Give me the man!!!! lol |
Reviewed By: kiarene On: April 29, 2002 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*LOL* this fic really cracked me up! more please!!! |
Reviewed By: The almigthy God of Cheese, Crackers and Communism On: April 29, 2002 01:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well done great fic. Write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 29, 2002 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLLOL!! Goku and Gohan are in store for a major case of "blue balls". You're such a meany. Great chap!! |
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