| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! That chaper ruled! And when Gohan sucked her fingers...I just melted away! You could at least let them have a quickie, for goodness sake! Please hurry with the next chpater, your updates are right on time! |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: May 12, 2002 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so great! I really want to see what the guys are going to do! Anyone else feel the tension? Write more! |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2002 11:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHH! SO GOOD!! NEED . . . MORE . . . NOW! This is SO good . . . i love how you don't just jump into them all having sex . . . it is so, tasteful, i guess? Keep up the REALLY GOOD work! |
Reviewed By: priss On: May 10, 2002 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS TO FREAKING SHORT! I WANT MORE GIMME MORE i mean very nice uh could you please make another? longer this time? thanks |
Reviewed By: Usagi-Chan On: May 10, 2002 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nani!! how in the world culd O of missed you before now?? I hope to see the next chapter soon!! |
Reviewed By: Brie-chan On: May 10, 2002 00:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O WHERE'S THIS FIC BEEN HIDING? OR MAYBE I WAS TO SLOW TO SEE IT. HOLY CRAP THIS IS SO COOL. YOU GOTTA AND I MEAN GOTTA CONTINUE THIS! WHAT SUFFERING WILL THE SAIYA-JIN MEN PUT THEIR MATES THROUGH? DAMMIT I MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: shadow On: May 09, 2002 23:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
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NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! (vegeta-like smirk.) no new chapter and i blast you with the kamehameha.
;P sorry, i need more of fanfic! fanfic good for shadow. so me need more, k?
*shadow* |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2002 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
i luuuuurve ths story! It's s cool! Keep it up^_~ |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: May 09, 2002 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
(gives JB a patented Vegeta smirk) Wow! Look at that response! Interesting....
Krillin's pulling a Vegeta! And Vegeta blasting trees is funny.... SS4 Vegeta--tail--red--hair--eep! Stop! Jeez, don't do that to me! My dry-season has been going on for 21 years and I'm ready for it to end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oiy! To see one guy...one guy...you see there was one time when me and a guy who smelled really good 'accidently' brushed up against each other...wow...
(shakes head) Ok, make em pay now, JB! I want Bulma to suffer for putting such agony on Vegeta.... Poor wittle Veggie. He can come over to my house if he wants....I don't mind.... lol
See ya next chater! (hey, "when you least expect" update? Please!) |
Reviewed By: person On: May 09, 2002 00:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sweatdrop* don't you have enough reviews already?
me still likes, but, jeez....
anywz, more? |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best quote in this chapter:
“Or I'll remind you who the real number one Saiyan is.”
Loved it! You can be so cruel Goku when you're not getting none...
So now they know! I xan't imagine what tou have in store for the girls...make em' suffer! |
Reviewed By: storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story line! I can just hear Vegeta growling now! And I knew Goku had a breaking point! No one is that nice ALL the time! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man this is getting good lol |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 08, 2002 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! You are one sick puppy! So I wonder what the guys are gonna make the girls do?? Dammit, I need to know asap!! |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAHAHA! I love the whole thing bout Veggie losing it on a bunch of trees ;) See what you've done, Bulma?! Leveled a WHOLE FOREST! Egad. :) I wonder what maniacal plan the boys are going to come up with.. *taps fingers together* excellent.. I think they should come up with a bet of their own. |
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