| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: Masume On: May 08, 2002 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter!
sounds to me like their loosing the will to go through with it. but i think 18 is right. bulma is the weakest physically, so she tries to compensate for it by being strong headed!
update soon! |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: May 06, 2002 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bawhahaha poor Vegeta ^.^ |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: July 10, 2002 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I found this fic here. I was just surfing cuz ff.net is down & followed links here because of the fanart. I am so happy *does the happy dance* I can read this updated chapter. Too bad ChiChi lost, but I think Goku feels like he was the ultimate winner!! (& so does ChiChi). But what will happen when ChiChi finds out she was "helped". |
Reviewed By: priss On: May 06, 2002 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP GOING WE WANT MORE I WANT TO SEE WHO WILL LOSE! and why did you have to be so mean to goku? |
Reviewed By: Jay On: May 06, 2002 19:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. You are right though, we don't have enough confidence in Bulma but who would? Have you taken a good look at Vegeta lately? ^_~
After reading this chapter, I have to change my vote. I vote for Bulma! The reason? Well, after you explained how she needed to prove her strength, I have to agree. Although she doesn't have physical strength, she isn't weak. Not by a long shot!
So go Bulma! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2002 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pour Videl. I have some, close to non, faith in Bulma. I mean she is married to Vegeta, right? I can't wait till you update. :) |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2002 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My favorite quote in this chapter is:
'...the idea of a sexually frustrated Vegeta running amuck was just plain…scary.'
Perdictions:
The first one to break will have to be Videl. It just has to be! I do think Bulma is going to be strong enough to keep Vegeta off him...and Chichi? She'll jsut harp poor Goku until he flies off. Go fig.
He Haw! So funny! This is such a great way to start a Monday morning! Thanks so much!
Now get to typing on that next update! I can't breathe without it! ~_^ |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2002 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving it! Please update again soon, and thanks for the wonderful welcome back to Mediaminer! |
Reviewed By: Patrick On: May 06, 2002 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This some great piece of writing!
Wite quickly and hurry- i can't wait for the
next part of the Saga of the Bet. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 06, 2002 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawww, thanks JB, but I beg to differ. If it weren't for your fics I'd be goin nuts at 3am (man it sux to be a nightowl). So pardon me if I think you're the best. Anywho, great chap. Leave it to you to get me interested in a little lemon between K and 18. So now that a day has gone by how long will it be before one of these ladies finally gives in? You know, I keep thinking about poor Veggie...probably out in the woods... somewhere... making time with a fallen log...O_o, ok forget I said that. Too much ice cream and getting brain freeze. Well, you know I can't wait for the next chap, right? Something tells me I'll be in for a big laugh. C ya |
Reviewed By: shadow On: May 06, 2002 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would say...
GREAT!!!!!
ehheheh, sorry, i get a bit strange at times... so, you gonna wright more? come on, i need it!
k, so i say it's good, and...uhh... it's good! |
Reviewed By: person On: May 06, 2002 01:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
ok, did i Review yet? no? k. anywz damn, this is FUNNY!!! please wright more? it's better then i can do, and it's good to! hey, that almost rymed... |
Reviewed By: Vegeta's True Love On: May 02, 2002 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story!!! It's awesome!!Very original! Keep up the good work, and update SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 02, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee hee! That was cute! She scooted right off the bed! Ha! That's what she gets. I love this, it's just getting better and better. I love the crack Trunks made about what Bulma wouldn't do. Write more soon! |
Reviewed By: SsjGoten On: May 02, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I CANT STOP LAUGHING. THIS IS A GREAT FIC...POOR VEGETA,GOHAN AND GOKU. LOL ILL SAY..CHI-CHI IS GOING TO WIN. |
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