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| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] | | Pages (21): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOO HOO A LEMON!! YEAH!! WHOO HOO!! *ahem*
so Videl really won didn't she?? =)
Hee hee, poor Gohan and Videl.....
lucky Vegeta and Bulma!! ^^
Everyone should be getting sex now!! ^^
HAha
CONTINUE!! | Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! *dies* poor gohan and videl!! *dances* cool, she came out in sexy underwear, whoohooo! ^.^ the great saiya-man....they should have turned off the tv, and just used the dragonballs to wish everyone back. ^.^ nah, where's the hero-ism in that? Anyways, awesome chapter! I can't wait to read the next one, I feel so bad for poor gohan-chan. lol. being a hero really sucks sometimes. great work! | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 02:42 CDT
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OMG!!! Poor Gohan!!! I guess that's the curse of being a super hero. I wonder if Saiyaman can even funcion properly without getting laid on a regular basis.
Oh well, it's not like I'll ever have him. (Damnit all to Hell! Life's just not fair!!!) Since he's with Videl, who I do not care too much for if you didn't catch that in THE SISER SAGA, he can suffer forever for all I care!!! If he wanted to get laid that bad...Okay, so maybe it's just me...Moving on...
I hate to see this story end, but you're right. You have a bunch of stories which need your attention (When You Least Expect and Relationships) and I'm hoping for faster updates. I can't wait! I'll be reviewing! Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: Susan On: July 25, 2002 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Poor Gohan and Videl, they were just about to...and you...oh man you're cruel. Bad, bad author! At least B/V had a great time in the GR. That lemon was hot. Fantastic chapter JB. Can't wait for the grand finale ^_^. TTYL | Reviewed By: autumn On: July 25, 2002 11:28 CDT
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Darn that earthquake! Well I see everything is tying up nicely. Great chapter as expected. (Steamy too!) Yay Videl! I'm glad she won :) | Reviewed By: Faded Lush [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 01:30 CDT
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Man, I can't wait to see who caves next! Please update soon! | Reviewed By: firaga On: July 21, 2002 07:28 CDT
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haha ohh noo i think i sympathize with videl the most! bulma is so catty in this fic! hehe i like the part when gohan told his dad he wasnt a team player! i could just SEE that being said! good job as usual! | Reviewed By: Hosi-chan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 23:23 CDT
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Oh, JB! U finally put up chapter 13! I'm so happy! The real question is, when are u gonna put up the next?
Anyhoo, loved the chapter! It was shorter than expected, but it was still great! Keep it up! | Reviewed By: Ki Ki On: July 19, 2002 08:39 CDT
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Pleze put up another chapter this one was so good want to know how it ends !!! | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 04:06 CDT
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Wow!!! And here I thought the only equation Goku knew was Goku+ChiChi=Sons...
Anywho, I really liked that latest chapter and I think it's cute how Goku's own son sided against him! He opted for Vegeta rather than his own father!!! That was just classic! I so love all your stories...This is one of my faves though...
Okay, note to self: Never R&R a fanfic after 3:30 a.m. because you're really hyper and type things which make absol*fucking*lutely no sense...I think I may remember that now, well, nevermind, I won't remember that I even wrote a review by...well, I can't say morning because it already is morning...
Damn do I ever need to go to bed...I just hope Nurse Bertha doesn't catch me on the computer. You know, sometimes she reminds me of my mother...At least the way my mother is when I go home from time to time using my get out of the asylum free pass. Bet you didn't know those were in Monopoly!!! Well, they do on the one here at the asylum ne way....
Am I making any sense? Probably not anymore...Oh, I'm just so friggin' excited!!! You know how it is when you're filled with story ideas? Well, that's me right now...Now if I could only find sometime to write them...
Chemistry sucks...Siblings and parents who want the computer so they can play friggin' game suck...Friends who won't let you alone so you can write suck (I have two of them as we speak at 3:45 am...weird people)...Author's who update even less often than me suck (you don't fall in this category)...I think that's enough...Let's just say that everything sucks!
Okay, this is the end of my review, well, I plan for it to be the end, which means absolutely nothing. Most of my stories are just ramblings, kinda like this review. I sure hope you enjoy reading stupidity...Well, Teasha's little thingy on the computer is flashing. I think she sent me another message. Till next time, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Videl's going to win, isn't she? Heck, I loved where they just let them fight. I'm sure that was quite the turn-on for our Saiyan boy (not boys, i don't like Gohan...dork). Anyways, I'm glad Goku and ChiChi don't have to--(clears throat) I mean, I hate reading anything other than V/B limes.... (knocks self on head) I think you're ch 6 has contaminated me.... Hey! Tell you what! I'm holding out much longer than those two! Give me the money! I mean, I bet neither Videl nor Bulma waited for 21 years.... Definitely not Bulma, eh? She was always such a tease. I wonder why Bulma thinks that after this is all over she'll be off the hook. After all the times she puts Vegeta through HFIL and doesn't let him forget it, I think it's time to put the shoe on the other foot. BTW, MORE VEGGIE! I need my carotene! heehee
Hmmm, when's it end? ^_^ | Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 06:56 CDT
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I'm so glad you updated...I was starting to have withdrawl aymptoms! | Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw man, poor gohan! He really deserves a treat, ya'know? (i feel bad for the poor guy, although I'm all haha! eat that wimpy guys!^.^) I think Videl needs to pay a little trip to victoria's secret or something,(or wear bulma's old bunny costume from master roshi, XD!! lol) b/c it really sucks to be gohan right now. And vegeta- eh, I have sympathy for him too, but much less so. ^.^ I like Gohan more. ^.^ Anyways, awesome chapter! I guess sex gives your attitude a whole 180 in this fic. ^.^ Wonderful work, I can't wait until the next update! | Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 20:01 CDT
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Here's my review...
*waits five minutes*
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So where the hell is my update?!?! | Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 18:49 CDT
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Goku's now friendless huh?! aw...poor baby. i KINDA feel sorry for him...and what's the deal with Bulma and Videl. I thought they both agreed to throw in the towel before ChiChi came, but then, now they're agreeing...i'm soooo lost. seriously, i have black hair, but my friends insist that there's some blonde underneath it...ridiculous. but i'm going to go read it again and who knows? maybe the lightbulb will go off...ne wayz keep up the aweseome work...have fun!!! and keep updating!!! | | Pages (21): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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