| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 11:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor sessh, i bet the car kinda freaked him out a little huh. i wonder if those two will suffer some discomfort with all the noise. yay soon phase 1 of annoying and humiliating kouga will soon go into effect. can't wait for that one can't you tell XD.
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Title: 68 review
Reviewed By: Arry On: January 06, 2008 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHE very happy destiny loves the gift tried to find you something but it became quite hard to find just what I wanted to get that I thought you'd like. Ahhh the little lovers spat finally came was too cute I just love the dynamics between the two. And YAY! the plan get kouga is starting finally. Can't wait for more love UWUC(update when you can) Loves Arry
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 21:00 EST
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he heee heeeeeeee ^,~ it's so cute seeing them together... =) good job so far!
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 19:41 EST
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I love what you're doing with Rin. I have been feeling a little bit sorry for Inuyasha for being the oddball out. Giving him Rin to protect plot wise, he will be a happier hanyou. (to other readers, I am NOT suggesting romance here. He's no pedophile.)The "big dog" shirt was priceless. I got a giggle out of that. Thanks!
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 19:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great chapter. cant wait til next one. sorry cant really type 2 much, got a bd party 2 go 2. anyway later, syoze
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 11:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are most positively a god.
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: January 04, 2008 12:20 EST
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Thank you for updating on my birthday. :)
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 05:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wipes away drool* Aw, come ooooon! Can't they do the real thing soon? :) These sexual frustrations they have are starting to transfer! XD *looks around for her husband* Heeeere boy! ;)
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 00:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have been going nuts waiting for this chapter! Cant wait for the next one! Im getting really curious about Rin again, hopefully you'll reveal her secret soon. Like i said before, this story keeps getting better & better. you are doing a wonderful job!! TTYL....^_^
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Reviewed By: myangelamy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 23:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't normally get into the sess/kag pairing but i have to say that your story has been very intriguing. although it is painful waiting for the first lemon, the limes are written so well that i'm sure it is worth the wait. keep up the wonderful work, i look forward to the torturing of kouga.
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 03, 2008 22:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, you make me laugh. thank you. The part about Kags looking at a wang for the first time cracked me up. "it moved!" HAHAHAHA!!! *cough...cough* You nailed the innocent, never seen a wang before type attitude. It brought back my first experience with a wang. HAHAHAHA. I had forgotten what it was like the first time. You always make me laugh... hehehe... Innocence is so funny when it is their first time. How did you think of that> Do you remember yours? I thought the wang had a mind of its own...hehehe. I freaked out when it moved. ...*stops to ponder with finger on chin* kinda like the way kags did...lol *grin*.... ^.^ HEHEHE my favourite chapter so far...hehe... It kept away the winter blues... Here in East Coast Canada, we had 4 huge storms in a week and have accumulated about 2 meters of snow (2 yards roughly) and it is -2O'Cs or -15'F/-19'F. Very cold... Your humor made me forget the 10 foot high snow banks.... THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU... *hands over homemade cappachino* WITH SPRINKLES...hehe *wink* Happy writings InuPriestess (from atlantic canada)
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Title: She Who the Prophecy Foretold
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 22:22 EST
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Of course Momoko doesn't know. She's a whore and whores don't keep track of anything, they just remember if they had sex or not and that's it. She's an idiot. But I'm actually surprise that she's thinking about it and not about sex. Bravo for her!! This is awesome!! :D:D
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Title: 67 review
Reviewed By: Arry On: January 03, 2008 21:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! finally she touches sesshy's wonderous cock yummy lol. Can't wait till she gives him head you did say she wouldn't stop in her words next time and that she wants to make him feel amazing like he does her hope you keep to it. But simply amazing hon great job this time around once again can't wait for more! Loves Arry
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Title: Awwwwww
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 21:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww... Inuyasha has a daddy moment with Rin. That was so unbelievably sweet we all run the risk of becoming diabetic just reading it. The panther demon really knew how to slip one over on Naraku. He's such and unbelievable deviant! There's a special place in the seven layers of hell for his kind of pervert. I hope the panther tribe keeps the upper hand. I can't help giggle a little bit when I think of anyone going after Inuyasha not knowing about the additional pack members beyond the traditional group. They're now up to 18 members, counting the kids and AhUn and Kirrara. (Uh... have a missed anyone?) Anyway, approaching that group would take a little different strategy than if they had never merged, don't you think? Glad Naraku busted that mirror earlier. Momoko... well, I almost feel sorry for her, too, as one of the other reviewers pointed out. I don't necessarily feel sorry for her pregnancy so much as I feel sorry for her baby. She invited the consequences with her actions; the baby is innocent. Wonder if the child is Hojo's? (Just kidding! We all know he only wants Kagome.) Maybe Hojo's just stalker-psychotic enough to have done her while imagining Kagome? I must be sick to find that possible scenario funny. Saving the best for last... Kagome and Sesshomaru. It's about damn time Sesshomaru got some satisfaction! I like how you can take an intimate setting and make it real with the details. This isn't some Fabio sex scene. This is reality with Kagome noting that Sesshomaru's size is bigger than the anatomy books suggest of humans. This is reality that they would have to change the bedsheets. This is reality that Kagome is not easy with describing in great detail just exactly where she wants his hands. What is fairy-tale is Sesshomaru's undying control and commitment to his value systems by not mounting her and screwing her senseless because he wants to do it right. It's both painful and touching to see that over and over and over. Painful in that each time you know the poor guy's getting blue balls, but touching in that he's willing to do it all for the love of Kagome. Yet, even if painful, I know that when the deed is done to completion, the build up itself will make it just that much more meaningful in the story. *sigh* Every girl wants to be on a pedestal to some degree. Kagome must be the luckiest miko alive. I hope that when the deed is done she doesn't blow the roof off of wherever they are, though. Is anyone else worried about the discharge of pure miko powers when they finally mate? Will he have an enormous power surge of his own? Dang, when you think on it that way, they might burn down the house or forest if they're not careful. I just hope she doesn't purify him into a higher voice. (grin) Again, great chapter. Well worth the wait.
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Title: Poor Momoko
Reviewed By: inuyashasgirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 18:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe Momoko is pregnant. I feel bad for her even though she tried to steal Sesshomaru away.
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