| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 19:11 EDT
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i love this story and hope you get back to work on it soon. FL
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Reviewed By: Princess Kilari On: March 24, 2008 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! this has to be my favorite story! you are one of the greatest fanfiction writers i've ever read!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 08:14 EDT
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hello again, i read and reviewed The Syndrome yesterday (or the day before) and have now read She Who The Prophecy Foretold from start to finish and I love it. I read it straight through and as it's now 5:30 am I'll wait until later to read another of your stories. So far the two stories I've read not only have a good plot but good dialoge, characterization, and are nice and long. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 21:00 EDT
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This story rocks I just caught up with all the updates and so can't wait for another update.
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 18:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! Please update soon!!!! I just found this story and finished reading all the chapters so far, and can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 03:13 EDT
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Awwwwwwww that so sad I Hope you don't forget about finishing it though, because I've seen it happen befor great story that didn't get finished because the creative juices stoped their flow and the author could continue....it almost makes me want to cry.......any ways......hehe I can't be lieve you did that Naraku sooooooooooooooooo desurved that.....hehe that idiot.....hehe It makes me wander if Kagura will go to the panther for help.....hmmmmmmmmmmmm.....well Koga gots his pack back now.....when you do continue again you sould go more in to depth about training the childrens Miko energy....maybe even educating them in the Herb gathering and Potion makeing as well...............I hope you continue this story I would hate to see it stop after so many chapter because I think I can honestly say this is the longest story I have had the plesure of reading and I can tell its still got a ways to go................XD please update............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 22:31 EDT
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go kagura, go! wohoooooo! lol^^ story is soooo awesome! good job!!!! *hug*
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: March 10, 2008 06:52 EDT
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HEY chickie! I hope you find your muse again. Take as much time as you need... All of your loyal fans will know and understand... the others...oh well. too bad for them. Its not like you are jumping off the face of the map or anything right? you are still writing other stuff.. therefore... we all still feel connected.. I hope your mind gets its relaxing vacation... and besides... ;) The Syndrome is looking very interesting right now... hhehe... I am kinda happy about your decision... I get more Syndrome!!! YAY!!!! Chao Chickie! InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: March 09, 2008 23:07 EDT
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Thanks for the notice. I'll be sad not to see your story, but at least I know why. I hope things go well!
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 21:31 EDT
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I do hope you come back to this story some day, I do like it so. Until then, enjoy your siesta and thanks so much for sharing your imagination with us.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What Kagura did was fantastic! finally she gets free!!!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, I'm gonna miss the updates. But I think you're doing the right thing. To keep up the quality, if a break is required, then have one. Wouldn't want it to be rushed after we've gotten this far. ;) By the way, the first part with Naraku in this chapter... It was kind of hard to understand if it actually did happened, or if he was just fantasizing. As you wrote "He'd" instead of just "He" at some places. I hope you understand what I mean. :)
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Reviewed By: Moon_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 03:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, as much as i luv luv luv your story i'm just gunna say take your break. if your not happy with the story, we're not gunna be happy with the story so honestly take as much time as needed just come back to us please!
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Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: Tatika [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 01:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think your using the lemons to fill space, I think its perfectly natural, especially for newer couples, wanting to be close and all. Overall I really enjoy this story and happyily await the next bit.
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Reviewed By: Bethany On: March 08, 2008 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the flow of your words, the way you explain things and the interesting story line. I absolutly love this story. Take your time getting your flow back I know how it is when you get blocked. I write myself. Great job with the fanfic so far, Im lovin it though you probably already guessed that. LOL!!
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