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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short and also neat in that we FINALLY hear what we've gotten hints on all through the story. I'm just wondering who's next with Kei and when will we know Haruka's preggers! Oh ... Where is thwe weirdo "EX" teacher?
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Reviewed By: DKGafgar On: April 19, 2008 09:12 EDT
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*sound of screeching tires* ...Wait, what? How did those two suddenly become hostile to Keitaro - oh, anime. Geez, were the two versions THAT different?
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Reviewed By: DKGafgar On: April 19, 2008 08:53 EDT
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It took me a while to figure out a few minor things I'd noticed popping up here and there, like Tsuruko not knowing about Motoko's little novellas. The difference in Kanako's introduction to the Hinata cast was what finally made me get the picture that this is based on the anime (which I've never seen) as opposed to the manga. No wonder I kept doing double-takes. Carry on then.
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Reviewed By: DKGafgar On: April 19, 2008 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*BLINK* Is Haruka dressed like REVY in this chapter?! INSTANT WIN.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: April 17, 2008 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since I've been on Fanfiction there is only one harem story that's complete but it's soo short and not as good as this story here. Your story is an example of how a harem story should be written. Great work.
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Reviewed By: Derbisol On: April 07, 2008 22:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read all of this over the last few days and its amazing, you have to write anotherchapter, i cant ger enough of this story!
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Title: 23 & 24
Reviewed By: zerothehero On: April 07, 2008 17:16 EDT
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Ah man the cat's out the bag now.Now this is going to get really interesting. nice chapters keep up good work
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: April 07, 2008 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow looks like Keitaro has his hands full. Looking forward to the next update. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!
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Title: didnt expect that so early
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: April 07, 2008 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i didnt expect a fight to break out THAT soon. but good cliff, at least hes finally back and from this point on i guess everything will move at breakneck speed to the conclusion eh. thanks for the good updates. cant wait till next time.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the fact that you update 2 chapters each time. Also I knew Kanako would be the one to fight first. I worry about the two idiots down the road and what they do will affect the new clan. Finally I oove you leaving us with that last line! Excellent!
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Reviewed By: Havoc80 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story. I hope that you update this ASAP. Don't make your loyal readers wait to long. Havoc.
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: April 01, 2008 10:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story so far can't wait for keitaro return!! I can't wait to see what the girls have in store for Keitaro! All in all it's been a long journey. PLEASE keep up the great work!!! Oh and Vilkath if you had read the chapter selection you would have seen, (being a media miner member and all) that the story was updated on march 24 2008 and it has been continuously updated.
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 01:14 EDT
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Hmm hard to say how I feel about this story. First off it is written rather well, combining a plot and lemon scenes rather well. Something most fics just can't do, they either have a plot with badly written sex scenes, or good sex scenes with no plot. That being said I think the pace of this story is a little slow. Keitaro went from a virgin wimp to almost constant sex with a blood realative and a nearly mute girl he has no long term plans with. Then it goes on chapter after chapter about the problems at home, and the sex between Haruka and Keitaro. At some point we would liked to see something between the other characters. Then the readers find out just about all the girls in Hinata are lesbians out of no where and going farther with their relationship with each other then they did with Keitaro durring the years. Worst of all I suppose is the fact this story is marked completed, despite the fact it has barely ahd Keitaro comming home after a dozen or more chapters of delaying his return. I really hope this fic wasn't discontinued and was just marked complete for no reason, it would be said to leave it here after countless chapters of drama.
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Reviewed By: Dom2 On: March 30, 2008 02:04 EDT
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Sorry, i dont want to flame, but when something will really happens? I want to see more sex for the other girls, and you dont need to use just Keitaro. There is other guys like Seta or even Kentaro. If you dont wanna have they have sex with the girls make at least they dream.
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Title: Great Chapter
Reviewed By: zerothehero On: March 27, 2008 13:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Nice forshadowing andf whatnot is this chapter. I would of loved to have heard that conversation that took place but now it seems like the girls have come to a agreement of some sorts of how this is going to work out. Also I like that Shinobu reads Motoko's books. Heck it would be funny if everyone in the house does without realizing it.
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