| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 11:19 PST
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I loved this chapter! It absoltely had me howling with laughter especially the part where Evan grabbed his oney using his ass cheeks! LOL!!!! Thank you for this chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one!
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 22:13 PST
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This made my day, this chapter was really hilarious! It's late right now and I'm "sleeping" so I trying SO hard to stifle my laughter and not wake everyone, it's hard. Everytime I read it start laughing again, almost cried xD. My fave chapter to date! Thanks for writing and I hope you write more
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 19:08 PST
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I have to wonder if Valerie actually got sick from laughing... Though, Evan stripping, I wonder how he explained that to Mama. That he 'danced' professionally? Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 17:16 PST
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Rofl! Oh man, that made me lauuuugh xDD. I really hope someone draws Evan in that stripper outfit. That was just priceless. I would do it, but Ive been in one heck of a slump >
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 16:55 PST
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Only Evan could be a stripper and only V could laugh herself sick. Haha. I loved it. V's finally opening up! a little. Keep p the great work! -MSMND
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 13:46 PST
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can you laugh yourself sick? i've never heard of it. loved i cant wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 11:36 PST
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I don't even have to sturggle hard to picture Evan as a stripper. I'd pay for that! LOL! Great chapter
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 10:11 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not surprised that Evan strips. Nor am I surprised that he has been banned from arenas for flashing fans. But I am surprised that he didn't get more upset at Val's reaction to his stripping in front of her. I thought he would be more hurt. I thought that Maddy's ruminations were very aware showing her as being deeper then she has been appearing on the surface. I am starting to really like her as an independent character and not as Evan's shadow. I look forward to seeing what comes next.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 09:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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laughing yourself sick while 'the hEvan' does a strip dance in front of you... isn't that some kind of sin. hahahah Can't wait to read more Sue.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 05:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
evan used to be a stripper? ahahhha! how am i not surprised! loved the chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 05:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Silly V to much alcohol plus laughter equals - ick! I really want to know what she was going to say before the musice started!
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 02:43 PST
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That's absolutely funnny! Can't wait for Evan to perform for V. Aaah... its been so long since I last popped in. Hey, off-topic I kinda forgot both my password and name for the forums and I can't login.
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2009 11:52 PDT
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Wow Sue! You really out did yourself this time around. That chapterhad me rolling on the floor with tears streaming down my eyes. I cant wait for the next chapter to come out! Thank you for this one!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2009 00:25 PDT
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Pfft. Wow, I'm amazed how close quarters can warp people... like Valerie going off the deep end where Evan, sorry, Zel, is swimming, where she would have cut off her right hand before even thinking of doing some of these things beforehand. Heh, its late. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2009 20:33 PDT
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OMG v's becomeing a girl evan!!i like it, can't wait for the next one!!
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