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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 › » ] | Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 13:57 PDT
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so if v liked her dad then it must have been her mom that she had the problem with...anyway loved it, glad you updated, it always makes me so happy!! can't wait for the next one
| Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 10:58 PDT
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I definetly loved the part where Evan took the brush out of Valerie's hand and started combing her hair for her. Very simple and still sexy. Thank you for this chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one!
| Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 10:14 PDT
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This was the best chapter ever! I love that they're friends now. I love that they're communicating on a deeper level than before, it makes me smile. Aaaahhhh! This is so the best Purity ever, I love the different aspects of each of the characters, even the ones who aren't the main characters. Just...brilliant!
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 06:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A lovely chappie. a touching moment between V and Evan but i wonder what is haunting her?
| Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 06:39 PDT
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yay... i'm a little tired, so i apologize in advance for the short review... did that green font thing work the other day, by the way? it'll seem like a waste if it doesn't... good chapter! more of Valerie's past and stuff... very cute.. and i always like it when the guy plays with the girl's hair..Patiently waiting, your Purity♥er, ~FF7I
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 15:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chappie darlin' - what a nasty inconsiderate women! I really loved the jog they took together though!
| Title: OOPSIE! My bad! Eheh...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 12:36 PDT
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The last review should've said Chapter 72, Sue.
| Title: Chapter 73: Jealous much, V? **satisfied chuckle**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 12:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gin...what did you SAY? Oh, the suspense is KILLING me! Wonder what Violca did. Oh, shit! V's got some catty ways--gonna rip out some hair, huh? Oh, the big green monster lurks... V's just not handling the intrustion of other females well, is she? Possessive little thing, ain'tcha, V? Okay, so if I walked in on the scene V saw with Jennifer and Evan, I'd have a hard time making an automatic assumption, too. And, as his official babysitter--a rather jealous one--she HAD to do her duty and get that skank--ahem--FEMALE off her man, urm, client...yeah, client, that's what she meant. But, honestly, I can feel Evan's pain on the whole somewaht belated withdrawal of Jennifer's hands on his unmentionables--homeboy's gotta be feeling the lack. Still, he did resist and I give him points for that. V, you're gonna be in for it... **mutters enviously to self**
| Title: Chapter 71: OMG, Evan...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 12:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahahahaha! **wheeze** kukukukukukuku! **pantt** Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! **whimper...lightheaded swoon** I...I can't stop laughing. Evan is too much! Damn, V, that one about the best 2 minutes of your life...wow. But then we touch on the mysterious female of the infamous one night stand...WAS she The One--better yet, as my mind keeps making me believe, was she V? Oh, I LOVED this chappie!! I love their deep converstaions that start off lightweight and teasing and the next thing you know, someone's enlightened, surprised or stunned silent by their own confession or the other's. Poor V...never had the Big O. You POOR baby! Evan's got your back! **lascivious giggle**
| Title: Chapter 70: She kissed Evan!!!!!!! And got in Mike's STUFF!!!!!! That's it, girl--stand by your man!!!! Wh00t!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 11:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wondered, reading the part where V was led into the VIP room if she was having flashbacks or if she's kinda unkowingly claustrophobic like Ryomaru. Eh, well...random thoughts. LOVED the T-shirts, Sue! GAWD, to be a fly on the wall when she read them the firts time--I wonder if she freaked more on the `The Crew Did V with Zel Roka' or the shirt where Evan was on her stomach grinning. **wipes a tear** Ah, good times... But, I absolutely loved the fact that Evan was so in tuned with her discomfort with the hand holding and making her laugh to get her mind off whatever unnerved her. His sound check was hilarious! But, oh, when she kissed him, I melted a little. **fangirl sigh** And when V took up for Evan, I nearly jumped up and shouted "That's right, girl! You tell Mike! Don't you TOUCH my baby!!!" Okay, I've had no sugar today so I have no excuse except to say that I haven't had so much fun with Purity Characters since 'P5' and 'The Fairy Tale'--can I just have another fangirl moment? Me can? Okies! She KISSED Evan! I don't care if it was his cheek--that was HUGE! I'm grinning like an idiot right now. Good chappie--AWESOME!
| Title: Chapter 69: Um...where ya going, Violca?
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 11:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...didn't see THAT coming. Loved the little quasi-love-interest triangle thingie with the Vs and Zel. But, as I figured, Violca would eventually find her way (though, oddly, I kept imagining her with Marvin--ask my why and I can't tell ya...I blame in on my Sugar Free General Foods International Coffee--it's those chemical rotting my gourd, I tel ya! LOL!). I love reading V's thoughts about Evan's past when a little info makes way to her ears. The fact that she was slipping on his real name vs rock label was telling--getting rather familiar, ain'tcha, honey. Yoy know he's your Baby Daddy...okay, for now, you don't...but you're intrigued, V, and it's written all over your face. Meanwhile, thanks for quoting one of my favorite Purity phrases EVER: ". . . why you were in my bushes . . ."
| Title: Chapter 68: Dear Heavens, I missed that bunny!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 10:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bugs is back! I SWEAR to ya, Sue, I was just THINKING about him and here he is! GAWD, I couldn't have been happier or laughed harder--the cuddling was just too much and I could just SEE V rolling her eyes. And the mini feud between V and Violca was just too funny--poor jealous V (do we have another Sydnie on our hands?). I LMAO reading this (which, luckilly, took my mind off my, erm, pains for a while).
| Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 09:14 PDT
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thanks for the small acknowledgment. :) much appreciated. of course Valerie's situation was like that.. i had just hoped it wasn't... hmm i wonder who that girl was. that girl Evan thought was the right one. hmm. i believe that was a reference to the girl in the first chapter, the girl that i think tricked us all into thinking it might have been Valerie, but... well it'll be exciting to find out. :) i probably comment on this every time but i am a total fan of the Evan/Diet angst-fest relationship thing. i love their friendship. so every time it's brought up i'll probably comment. :P sho shorry. and whenever i think of Dieter and Missy i'm always so sad because they made the cutest couple... or that's what it always sounded like. x* lol. i'm guessing Evan let ms. ecco (the only part of her name that i remember cuz it stands out so much ;p) do that just so she would stop interviewing him. just a guess. o i kind of just noticed these html taggy things they put at the bottom.. hmm.. curious.. let's test them out. :D patiently waiting, your Purity♥er, ~FF7I
| Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 08:16 PDT
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you update to fast for me to review :P. anyway love the chapter it was awesome, can't wait for the next one, hope it comes soon.
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 04:43 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter. It starts with showing Val working hard on her figure and ends with her comment about how natural it is. As someone else who works hard to be in a shape besides round I appreciated that comment. Why do I suspect that the interview that appears from this interview is going to have a very unflattering view of Val and they are going to try to dig into the "deal" that she mentioned. I was glad to see Evan get rid of the reporter and what he told Mike. I also suspect that Val is the only one that is going to be able to get Evan to accept anyone as bassist besides Dieter. I also have to say I am glad to see Evan starting to grow up, but I think he will get a huge jolt after he finds out what happened to Val when she was younger if I am reading your clues correctly. I am also getting very curious as to what exactly happened in the Zelig house with Cain, Gin and Violca.
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