| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 21:28 PDT
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This entire chapter made me laugh xD. I love jealous V! And that whole asshat thing, totally sent my imagination off into space xD. Looooved it! The tension is building...cant wait for it to pop! xD
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Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 20:23 PDT
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Yes, the tour finally started! And what a way to start...Val is fighting with a teenager for Evan's affection lol. You have no idea how much Val's little outbursts amuse me xD. A nice chapter, can't wait to see the next one. =D
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 17:50 PDT
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HAHA! I love V's anger towards Violca. The two lovers of Evan Zelig (Well, the two in the story at least ;] ) fighting over the man on a 6 week trip. That's fun. haha Can't wait to see how things go, and if V will start to fall for EVAN!!! *Fangirl squeal* I'm excited for that! This made my bad day a devil of a lot better. Thank you!! - MSMND
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 14:19 PDT
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Awesome! A very jealous V competing with another V... *ducks the flying book thrown at head* "what did you say?" A very perturbed V asks. "Nothing, nothing I mean... Violca, compet... Ahhhhh! Not the beer bottle I'm sorry there's no competition because V wins hands down!" That's better she replies downing the beer in one swallow. Sheesh how do you deal with V's crazy butt, Sue? "Crazy? I'll show you crazy!" Ok ok I'm soooooo goneeeee I pratically scream on my way out the door! Lol
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 13:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH Damn. It's the battles of the V's! LOL! Open your eyes Valerie honey, you're in love with Meezter Roka. LOL! Loved the little drama between Valerie and Violca. Thanks so much for the update!!!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 13:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hahah good chapter and I think V might have a hard fight with Violca (sp) not for Evan but for her sanity. hahah but it makes for great chapters. And after reading the preview on the forum I'm dieing to know who showed up now.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 19:03 PDT
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He ... goodness if there was ever another reason for V to love him that sure was. I mean how could you not love someone who thibks of others first, who takes in little orphaned girls, who tips more then the actual meal! I mean if Evan was real she would so have some competition! Lol Great chap hope everything is going much better for you :)
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Title: Chapter 66: Um...ulp!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan's Temper...whoo! Yeah, I remember it well. With all V's memories of being struck by her rocker lover, I'd guess she was a little gun-shy when Evan snapped. Woulda scared me if I was in her place, lemme tell ya. Gotta tell ya, Sue, reading the term "upper ass crack" is always an exercise in restraint! ROFLMAO!!! Sounds like some shifty shit's in the making with this Matthis character--I don't trust it... Then again, this entire case against Evan is full of secrets and twists and turns...well, the chapters to come shall reveal the truth to me (and all I have to do is be patient--Lord HELP me! LOL!) Loved the touchy feeliy moments, Sue--great touch!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2009 10:50 PDT
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yays, two chapters, woot. :) such a nice welcome. very cute, Evan Zelig is way cool... and way intimidating... lol yay they're getting closer and closer. it's like Mickey Mouse doesn't even exist! :D waiting patiently, your Purity♥er, ~FF7I
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2009 07:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww go on and kiss him V!! He's done good. Btw Sue I'm so happy your updating again! Hope things are working out for you and your family! Reading your updates is still my favorite part of the day!
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2009 02:41 PDT
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Awwww, blushing Evan! Now that made me smile and go "Awwww!" lol xD. I love it! I look forward to more moments like that! Though...Im thinking there wont be many will there, seeing as how Evan is and everything xDD. Ill try registering again, if the problem really is fixed!
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2009 01:56 PDT
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oh no i didn't review in the last chapter i feel bad anyway cant wait for the next one
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Title: "Sigh"
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2009 20:33 PDT
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As much as I LOVE the outragious, over the top, shock rocker, Zel Roka, the one who captured my heart is mama's boy, Even Zelig. AAAANNNNNDDD I think it is totally hysterical that he hasn't figured out why his mama is at Bas's house, his father is grumbling, and Violca was abruptly evicted. When he does, he's going to laugh hysterically or.......laugh hysterically. LOL I don't think anyone explained to Violca that the vacuuming wasn't to be done with her mouth, ROFLMAO, or at least that's what I think. That's the only thing I can think of that would chase Gin away from Cain, and I can't believe I said that before Zel. Maybe I'm wrong, but I hope not, it's too funny, and watching Even clean up the misunderstanding so his Mama can be happy again will be even funnier. I love you Sue, you make me smile, cry, laugh, lose my temper, fall in love, etc., faster than anyone. You've been making my world better one chapter at a time for a long time, and I hope, for a long time to come....Sigh
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Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2009 19:28 PDT
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Thank you for making me smile everyday! I really love this story and I know I'll be re-reading it over and over long after you've finished it!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2009 18:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute cute CUTE!!!!!! you are like a speed demon sueric! seriously, these babies just keeping popping out! thanks for your wonderful writing as always!!!
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