| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 18:32 PDT
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First, THANK YOU FOR ACTIVATING MY ACCOUNT!!! I'm SUPER excited to talk with other lovers of your AMAZING stories! Now, this chapter... I love it. She's slowly breaking down barriers she has with Evan as he reveals more of Evan to her. It's precious. I love how even though she's a little, stereotypically girly she acts tough and strong. And Evan... the death of Diet... hit him really hard. AW! I so want to jump into the story and hug him! I sense an attraction slowly forming, and I LIKE IT! haha Keep up the Fantastic work!! -MSMND
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Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 18:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Sue. Thank you for posting chapters again. I've missed your awesome writing. It always makes my day to see a "New chapter posted" email in my inbox.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 17:43 PDT
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Well there goes Violca! LOL I wonder though if V sees the change in the way she views Evan, not to mention if Evan sees the change in the way she views him. I was sooo waiting for a cat fight I thought V was going to deck Violca in the last chapter! LOL But of course the ever proper Valerie Denning stopped that from occurring. Great chap I can't wait to see whats going to happen now that Evan and V are all ALONE!
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Reviewed By: Gin_Hayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 12:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I mentioned lately just how awesome you are? Your imagination never ceases to amaze me. Evan is such a fun character yet youve added so much depth and do so with every character, its just incredible. It looks like this story is going to be bigger then Bertha lol. Im a little shocked by that but only because the last time you did bigger then that was P4. And that was because it had two couples. It leaves me waiting anxiously for how this can still pan out. ^.^
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 09:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure how I feel about Violca leaving, but this was an amusing chapter. And was it just me or is V not the only acting a little jealous. ahahah
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 04:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She's softening and it's lovely. I love seeing them together in these quieter moments. I also really loved Gage what an intriguing guy!
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 02:58 PDT
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I hate to say it, but Im glad Violca's gone. I just dont like characters that get in the way of the main couple, even if Evan never returned her feelings! Its just vexing, know what I mean? XD Man! I really cant wait for the chapter where Valerie will admit she wants to be Mrs. Zel Roka...lol, I bet itll be something.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 01:13 PDT
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Hmm... maybe third time's a charm with getting rid of the groupie... even if it is with a perv. Then again, he is still a gentleman and doesn't seem the type to openly force, but to let the girls decide. That's the interesting thing about American laws and modern sensibilities. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 00:14 PDT
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Oh so, I'm wondering if Violca is gone for good or not. I liked the ending of the chapter though, it ended on a nice note, more or less.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 22:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a hilariously calming chapter. Wow! I didn't Violca would leave like that. And silly V. Evan makes her all giggly. It's a sign of deep affection. A.K.A Valerie Denning is going to be the future "Mrs. Zel Roka" That was probably the highlight of the chapter for me, besides Violca now out of the picture, but I love Violca's character! Thanks for the lovely update!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 21:34 PDT
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AWWW!! This makes me think of that one Luther Vandross Song... The Closer I Get To You!! I'm excited. I'm glad Violca gets to be with others that she can realte too, AND that Evan and V can be together so she can learn all that the reporters don't know about Evan Zelig. I can't wait until they get closer. haha LOOOVE IT. - MSMND
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Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 20:40 PDT
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Thanks for another new chapter. I think Vicola's going to run in trouble again, but that's just me...
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 10:25 PDT
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Okay absolutley love the almost violent interactions between Valerie and Violca. I wonder what it will take (from Evan) to make those two stop? I guess we wont know until we read another chapter. Thank you for this chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 06:14 PDT
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Ok, so I would love to join the forum, but I have no idea where I even start. Please help, so that I can join the other Sueric fanatics in discussing your excellent work.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 06:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like the competition is heatuing up LOL Poor Vshe's trying so hard to deny it but she just can't help it
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