| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 21:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't remember ever leaving a review for you, and i don't know why. I can honestly say that you are one of the best authors/writers that i have ever come across. I love your stories so much! And Purity 9 is my favorite of the Purity series, along with Purities 3 and 6...well, i really like all of them. lol. but anyway, you are so great, and i just wanted to thank you for your regular updates and for gracing us with your creativity. I also would like to thank you for giving me somthing good to read. Really. You're great! That's all i wanted to say...Thanks again! :)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 20:02 PST
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whooo!!!! update!! great chapter sue! hopefully now people are not gonna go after V cause shes always with him x: and what was up with Bone? D8
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 18:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! Can't wait to read the next chapter! That's one very evil cliffy... and I bet that the legendary "inuyoukai temper" is just about to blow. I love the way you described the feeling of being able to perform in a crowd. Is that from experience or something else? I rarely perform in public myself, but still I can relate to that kind of elation, the feeling of being able to stir the crowd. Great job. And about the fanart, I'm glad that you liked it. I actually noticed the ears when I checked out Duckie's references but by then, I've already inked and colored the fanart. Sorry! Anyway, I'll probably get it right next time. LOL.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 16:49 PST
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Ah, so the others were slightly right about how she got the bruise. It was cool to see him as he is at a concert; I'm glad that Valerie seemed to like it as well :D Have a good Thanksgiving, Sue!!!!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 15:08 PST
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I really liked this chapter. I could feel everything that was going on. The performance although written was a palpable thing. And I wanted to say thanx for posting my fanart for morio (gmonique89). Hope you liked it. Update soon
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 14:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, there it is. I just knew something happened at a show. I hope he's not too hard on Bone, but this is his mate we're talking about here. No Purity man has ever been able to keep his cool when it came to they're other half. The next chapter should be very good. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 13:25 PST
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im so ready for the next chappy!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 20:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW! V's trying SO hard to keep up with Evan and Evan is enjoying every minute of it! I think this one and the chapter before have been some of the cutest chapters!! Keep up the good work! I LOVE this story the most out of the Purity series so far. My second favorite is Purtiy 8: Vendetta. Can't wait for the next chapter, Oh, and if I don't get to review before Thanksgiving I just want to wish you and your family a Happy Thanksgiving! :D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 01:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter... (reading this while setting up my new laptop that I just got today... updating every thing...) sound like V is having fun.. at least she has some thing to do...
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 21:23 PST
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Yay for granting my wish for V/Evan fluffiness!!!! All I can say is MORE! WE WANT MORE! Aaaa... the things love can do even to miscreants... kidding! And I finished the fanart and sent it to suericfanfictions@gmail.com (I hope I got the address right).
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 14:36 PST
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CandyEars- Marvin is a tweeb who is ALWAYS away. THAT is why Evan always gets to jump in her bed with her =333 This chapter made my heart happy, your V/Evan moments are getting cuter and cuter, and makes me love them more and more every chapter. I was thinking Evan would have used V's mix on his CD xD or maybe he will, just not tell her XD I look forward to your next update Sue!!~
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 13:46 PST
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Yeah!! 2 updates this week?! You're spoiling us! They are sooo cute.. V is so falling for him (Evan was already gone).. so where is Marvin during all this time? I thought they lived together, but Evan is sneaking in to sleep with her... when she left did she get a new place for herself? Little confused.. Another fun chapter, thanks for the update! LOVE the fake tatts!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 13:25 PST
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Ah, so Valerie is actually starting to see that there's more to Evan's job then it seems, and is actually having fun, that's good! :D Thanks for the second chapter this week, Sue!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 11:47 PST
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Fake tattoos? And really good ones at that, nice! I bet the ones that are covered with the fake ones are actually pretty decent. I bet before this bet started, Valerie wouldn't have even thought about helping Evan with them. It's amazing what lack of sleep does! But I hope that she doesn't get sick from this too. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 09:45 PST
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YAAAAY! I was away for ages... stuffs happening... and when I get back, there's TWO chapters! Man, but this week's gonna kill Val... But I like that she's loosening up around him. It's kinda sweet.
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