| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 18:56 PST
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cliffy : ( update soon!!! i wanna know what happened
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Title: Oh, hell...it didn't go through? Okay, Chapter 38:
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, just the awe and sense of wonder V went through in this chapter alone had me all fluffed out. I love how she's so comfy in his space and unconsciously leans into Evan and how he occasionally let's it slide without mentioning it. Have I told you, lately, Sue, how much his Yoikai Voice tickles me? Sometimes I can't figure out if he's a voice of reason or a bad influence. Either way, laugh-nation! Oh, the bagpipe part? "'O 'o hell, okah"...forever will tickle me when I think of it. And, of course it turns him on. **rolls eyes** And V's jealousy is so cute and telling--mad about the kitty that never was, hon? Well, don't. Zelicious is all yours, honey bunch! Great read! Sorry the review didn't go through, Sue. It was much longer than this but stayed on the same vein. God bless you in your endeavors and I hope things clear up soon! **bear hug**
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Title: Chapter 39: The chapter that made me go
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 12:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, can I just say, Olive is just glomp-worthy! Oh, I want me an Olive squishy with purr and cuddle action, Sue! Bailey's adorable in his little boy ways, trying to hog all the attention. See the cheesy grin? But, man, V's got some issues with children, obviously and I'm more than curious about the origin(s). I can't BE-LIEVE she lost her top (though, to think of the story...well, I guess it was a long time in coming)--oh, I giggled like a nerd! And the melting heart feeling of Evan and Olive...gotta tell ya, Sue, made me reminiscent of when my neice was a little one--too precious indeed! Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 11:58 PST
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OMG! A terribly beautiful cliffhanger we've been left with. I have a feeling that either Marvin's plane crashed, or something happened to Evan OR something happened to one of her family members. I'm leaning more towards the first two though. I hope it's nothing serious... OOH!!! This is going to kill me! BUT, I hope that everything with you works out well. I can't wait for your next chapter! ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 11:56 PST
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AAAHHHHHH!! You are evil cliffhanger queen today! Hope your things work out for you, but did you have to leave it like that!?!? OMG! Hope Evan didn't do something stupid after playing for the kids. My heart is even racing! *sigh* - Now to distract myself with "real" work... ick... To the reviewer about a plane crash - kinda ironic since it happened yesterday - but at least everyone survived! Yeah! Poor V though.. she just never gets a break does she? Can't wait to read what happens next! Thank you for your wonderful writing as always Sue!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 07:27 PST
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NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Oh wait was that Marvin's plane that crashed in the Hudson?
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 06:01 PST
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You write that evil cliffy AND THEN SAY THAT YOU WON'T BE BACK FOR A COUPLE OF WEEKS?!?!?!?!?!? EVIL WRITING QUEEN! So who's dead/maimed? Crap, if Evan gets into any more trouble... or if it's Marvin... I odn't like him, but hell, BLOOD...
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 05:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope whatever it is works out for you darlin' you've left us on an awesome cliffhanger!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 04:34 PST
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GAH!!!!! this is gonna drive me nuts until you update next XD I hope everything is alright D8 real life comes before internet and us not real life people eh? XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 23:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!! Loved the last part... Evan is just a naughty puppy... lol (aww isn't he adorable???)
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Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 22:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! what happened?!?! What did she see on the teli?! i dont like cliff hangers....T-T next chapter please? =3
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 21:21 PST
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that is one hell of a cliffhanger. what happened???? was evan on t.v.? did marvins plane crash and go boom (no surviviors)? gaaahhhh now im positively agonizing over the wait for the next chapter. hope everything works out at home. update when u can. my best wishes for u ~OB
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Reviewed By: angelyami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 20:53 PST
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OMG! What happened!? Evil, EVILLLL, cliff-hanger!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 19:14 PST
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this might sound harsh...but I really don't like Marvin I get the feeling he's cheating on her so uhhhh I hope something horrid happened to him and not to Evan
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 19:12 PST
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EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!! *horrified face*
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