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 Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2009 03:37 PST
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Are we finslly going to delve into THE MYSTERIOUS PAST OF VAL? Oh, but I guess we were right about the ritual... so funny, but so sad...
 Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2009 00:28 PST
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bah ha! the panties thing was funny drunk V is a funny V
 Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2009 23:24 PST
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That was really engaging. Lol, loved the mooning and the revelation at the end. Can't wait for the next installment.
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2009 23:04 PST
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Oh that was a good chapter! I hope that tribute helped Evan say goodbye! That's really sad at the end though with Valerie...I wonder if she'll dig in deeper about that anytime soon!
 Reviewed By: Diem [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2009 22:30 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Your stories never fail to captivate me. I was literally so excited when I discovered that you had posted a new chapter that I screeched (out of happiness, of course). I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for sharing your creativity and amazing talent with the world. (The world appreciates it. :))
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2009 22:44 PST
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Oh, wow, they're gonna moon of Liberty's torch, right? Or was that another story... Either way, I can't wait to see a proper send-off! Keep up the good work, dark
 Title: Chapter 47: Still sad, of course, but...fucking cats? Ohigawd, I LOVE you, Sue! ROFLMFAO!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2009 08:28 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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And, dang I miss Dieter. **flicks a Bic and waves a flame while chanting "Hey, fucker"** Oh my...is V gonna get plastered? And, yes, I'm so glad to see Maddie's still on the scene. Her personality is just right at a time like this in Evan's life--just enough compassion, just enough deviant-ness, just enough hari products (I kid...)--Maddie's, well, Maddie and it's always groovy to see her checking out V and Evan. And, big DUH moment here but...Evan's not a major Cain fan, huh?
 Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2009 19:40 PST
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I think this will be good for all of them. A way for the three to bond deeper, a way to express their grief and celebrate the life of the one they knew and loved, and a way for V to get to know Evan just a little bit better than before. My prediction - with Evan and V's first kiss, first real kiss, she'll realize just what Evan is to her, and just what MArvin can never measure up to.
 Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2009 19:39 PST
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I REALLY can't wait for THIS update... Valerie drunk with "the annual tradition" yeah... hmmm this should be REALLY good!!!!!
 Title: Chapter 47
Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2009 19:33 PST
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i love V's new idk..how she opens up more with her personality...i compared it to before and it was like wow! what a diffXD lol great chapterXD and i hope V finds out about youkai soon=D lol hey you know what i just remembered...V's past we still have to look forward toXP lol i cant wait=D
 Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2009 18:28 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Now what are they going to do??? great line: "It's only illegal if you get caught," Valerie scoffed airily-something she probably wouldn't have said if she weren't just a little tipsy already.
 Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2009 16:26 PST
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:( im ready for happy evan again! i still think that suicide was a coverup for something bigger!!
 Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2009 16:16 PST
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An illegal annual ritual? Hmmmmmmmm...I can't even imagine, and considering my 'predictions' on the last few chappies, I wouldn't even dare venture a guess. I have been putting off my Dad's final wishes for 2 years because I can't say bye, and the ritual he wants is a truely final bye. Sucks, but I know it has to be done & it will ease the depression. It's just the first step that's the worse, or will be. Looking forward to the next chappie!
 Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2009 15:38 PST
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Aw... Evan seems to be getting better little by little. And I know Valerie's a definite factor as to why. I hope Miss is ok. I know I say that every review but I do hope so. It's not easy to lose someone. When I read these chapters I have to listen to "How to save a life" by The Fray...it seems to fit the mood. I can't wait to see what this little ritual of theirs is! I bet with those two it's SUPER fun! Keep up the good work~ ~~ MSMND
 Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2009 13:32 PST
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Oooo, I can't wait to find out what this "ritual" is... I hope it gives Evan the closure he needs.
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