| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 12:57 PST
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Wow, never expected Dieter to die! Really puts that perspective of taking a bullet for a friend!
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Title: chapter-wasted time
Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 12:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg dieter!! noooo! please update soon! i love your storiesXD
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 12:38 PST
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omg!!! he died!!!! i want more! update soon
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 11:54 PST
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What? Diet's... no... now ay... he can't be... Dieter... No! NO! NononononononononoNONONONONOOOOOOO...... Excuse me. *sobs into the keyboard*
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 11:31 PST
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I think this took most of us by surprise. Dieter's gone. It's so sad... but I'm not surprised he sacrificed himself for Evan.. Poor Miss and Daniel. I don't have anything else to say - I think I'm still in shock.
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 11:27 PST
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I dont like the fact that Evan left Miss all by herself. There's no telling what shes going to do to to herself or allow what we all know migh and could happen. I just hope that someone is there with her so she wont be alone. God this is extremely sad. I dont have anything more to say. Fantastic chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out.
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Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 11:24 PST
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Wow! Again! This is the second time in two chapters I've said wow in a review. Dieter? I am going to miss his twisted mind. And I feel so sorry for Miss, isn't there something that we can do to fix it?
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 11:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness... this was an amazing chapter but you had me crying for Dieter and Miss. What will she do and little Daniel. I'm glad Evans alright but Dieter was such a sweety - even though he was a morbid guy LOL I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: *sobbing*
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 10:55 PST
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Well since I read this chapter in public at my school on my blackberry I was attempting not to cry the whole time!! WHY?????? This is so upsetting because I really liked Diet and well yeah *tear* (on the inside- I'm still in a public place after all). I feel so badly for Miss and Daniel I just think it stinks that he had to die... I mean I have an uncanny ability to guess what is going to happen in a story long before it actually happens... although I didn't actually think that Dieter would die or I suppose I should say that I hoped he wouldn't... Although I must say it... I had a REALLY bad feeling last chapter, especially when those girls were standing there crying their eyes out! I guess all can say now is at least Evan has Valerie to help him through the pain and the self recrimination. Since it happened though, can Valerie at least go after the S.O.B through the legal system given that he/she is human after all? Speaking in terms of the writing in this chapter... I'd say you out did yourself and have a new personal best. Update soon we're all on the edges of our seats... or keyboards...
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Reviewed By: harmony_echo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 10:53 PST
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T_T Poor Miss... I really love how you wrote this, and personally... I think Diet would be happy to die... as morbid as that statement is... -shrugs- as always I love your work. And I'm looking forward to more. Harm
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 10:26 PST
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Omg no! I was really crying. That's so sad. I never expected that to happen. But if miss was diet's mate, doesn't that mean that she's gonna pass away soon too? Will evan take care of daniel? That would be sweet. This chapter caught me by surprise at a bad time because a friend of mine was shot dead a few days ago and his funeral is coming up. Someone who never bothered anyone. You amaze me everytime with the emotions you arouse in you're readers. If you ever wrote and published a series of novels I would buy and read every one. I hope there's another chapter tomorrow.
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 10:14 PST
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...Dieter...
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 09:46 PST
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Oh no... not Diet... that's so sad. Poor Miss...
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 09:05 PST
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I see Meru is yelling that Sess needs to bring back Dieter. Don't think that is possible without a body. Dieter is ashes in the back of the car... So two shots, Dieter fatally, Evan in the shoulder? Which should be healed in a day or two.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 08:56 PST
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asdfghjkl;'!!!!qwertyuiop[[] DEIT~~~~~!!!!! HOMFG! I totally did NOT see that coming!!!!!! you are EVIL! GET SESSHY OVER THAR RIGHT. NOW.! ;________; sesshy! tenseiga .;______;!!!!! awzexrdctfvygbhunijomnosfudvhabvblaefobhjvawolfdbhv!!!! Evan just lost his like, BEST friend ;___; he should tell sesshy to revive him! AND AND AND! then he can give Miss back her hubby blah im crying
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