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 Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2009 12:17 PST
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That's so sweet, how Evan's telling Val how he feels about her, but... the guy's dead... that's... kind of sick... I mean, no retribution for Diet's death, no outlet... Evan's gonna be hurting for a LONG time...
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2009 11:24 PST
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I liked the ending to that chapter, it's just hard to know that Valerie doesn't know anything about his heritage, it'd probably be a lot more easy for her to understand things, but then again, be worse because of the possible outcome with Miss. About that...if Miss was that in tune with Diet mate wise, regardless of her not being marked, wouldn't she still have to really fight to stay alive? I'm thinking in the psychological sense of course! Just wondering because of Cain and Gin even though they weren't mates in any form besides psychological they were still were mates of the heart, so does that count?
 Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2009 10:37 PST
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i think there's more to this story than an accidental shotting. it was too accuarte for the guy to be aiming at Zel and D when there weren't even any docters outside. his story would've made since if Zel was still inside the building but he was outside so there was no reason for the guy to shot....i think its a coverup!! but that last scene bt zel and v was soooo sweet. more please : )
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2009 14:39 PST
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That is true, what about the kid. Though Miss is human... maybe, maybe she would survive... Keep up the good work, dark
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2009 12:30 PST
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This chapter kinda hit really close to home right now; we've had a lot of differences with my aunt that just passed so some of the things Evan was saying threw me in for a shock for a few! I'm glad that V was able to try to comfort him though!
 Reviewed By: 3427 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2009 09:50 PST
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Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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miss will die because her life span is tied to diet.. but I think she will come out and say that evan was protecting diet before she dies, and evan may adopt danny just as sam did tanny. additional angst will be if miss is pregant too... but maybe that can be an out of her dying? human and pregnant combo?
 Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2009 08:34 PST
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I always wondered if Miss was a youkai too - but she said Diet told her they don't die - so she's not one and won't die - why did Evan say Daniel will lose her too? Because he will out live her? A little confused there. Poor Evan. Maybe now he knows V cares for him he'll reveal his true status as a youkai... So sad..
 Title: Inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2009 00:38 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Damn, out of all the things going on, I did not see all that coming. Ah man...
 Reviewed By: raebeyy [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2009 19:50 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i've been reading ever since the first purities and metamorphosis and i have got to say as a teenage anime junkie your writing is amazing ! i get so enthralled and sucked in its hard ta escape. please keep it up! and this chapter ... the emotion in it is so raw you can feel it ! more please!
 Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2009 15:37 PST
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Poor Evan.... that has to be one of the most traumatizing things he's had to deal with. I mean Diet was his BEST friend. I sympathize with V though... I hate that feeling of helplessness. It eats at you and you end up feeling worthless because you can't console someone no matter how hard you try. I hope Miss is ok... and Daniel... and Evan. Keep up the great work! This is by far my FAVORITE out of the purity series. ~MSMND
 Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2009 14:54 PST
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aw. more please
 Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2009 14:02 PST
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Wow,I feel so bad for Evan. So this does mean that Miss is going to die? I wonder what will happen to Daniel
 Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2009 14:01 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter... "Valerie found herself at a loss when everything that she could say or do seemed so trite, so shallow, so meaningless..." I so understand... my brothers Girlfriend's father died of Cancer last year and that was exactly what was running threw my mind and my brothers... I wonder... does V REALISE that she LOVES HIM??? (better question, how can she not???)
 Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2009 12:54 PST
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I totally forgot that Miss will soon die too because her mate died ;___; asdfghjkl;'! this is getting so upsetting! ;__; when Evan finds the guy who shot them, buddy is TOAST! uvwaljhbflhjb (MOAR keyboard mashing)
 Title: Chapter 45
Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2009 12:27 PST
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omg sooo sad=( wahh dieter...so noble! and both miss and dieter will be dead cuz of the mate thing huh....awww poor daniel=( great chapterXD i cant wait for more stuff to happen between V and evan...or when V finds out evan is a youkai! update soon=D
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