| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 06:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They are such a pair - definitly Tweedledee and tweedledum! I loved the fact they broke in to return it too. :)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 06:46 PST
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Diet makes me laugh lol. "She already hates you I don't want her to hate me too!!" XD I love the random adventures they have, even funnier that V insists on a third go at the morgue XD bah ha Evan is rubbing off on her.
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 06:28 PST
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Oh Dieter... lol Proffesional help may be required for that one. STUPID MARVIN!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 22:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EVAN is a retard....he ruined it with V. she actually wanted to hang with him then he says....its just a BJ.....WOW....stupid man
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 20:29 PST
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I like Dieter, He's a very interesting character. :) I hate how V is feeling about Evan's...decisions... He's being sincere too... I hope he can make things better... Can't wait fot the next chapter!
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Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 18:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I simply wanted to take the time to say thank you for taking the time to continue to write these stories. I am absolutely enthralled with your Purity series, I can not tell you how much I have read and reread the stories and I always manage to find something new. Your writing style is amazing, very detailed and I have never once had to wonder what one of the characters looked like. Sometimes I find myself reading the chapters and knowing how one of the characters would react before I even read the next sentence! I really appreciate your continued dedication to the series and I am very thankful for the fact that you continue to write each characters story with the same passion. Once again thank you very much, indigorrain
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 16:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Dieter has a little too much time on his hands... I guess he is very young (not knowing what death smells like)... the painting would be very creepy... though if it was a sculpture and out right in front of his door V might just have a heart attack...
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 15:47 PST
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So it's been a while. I've been reading (mostly between classes) just no time or energy to review. This chapter did touch on something that I've been wondering this whole time, and it stems from the experience that I have with people I know, not personal experience, so I could be way off base. From what I've seen and how I think I'd feel, doesn't all the promiscuity make Evan feel a little empty inside? Always being with someone but never having anyone. It seems like it would make loneliness worse, not alleviate it. PS Wouldn't getting off on a blow job mate him to someone, or does it have to be intercourse, or did he use a condom/some other means of disposal?
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 15:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so awsome keep up the good writing I finished metamorphis however u spelled it.Awsome I loved it.I wish you would write a sequal or somthing.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 14:17 PST
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That was really sweet, in a morbid way. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 13:06 PST
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Another painting by Dieter? Can't wait to see what Valerie thinks of this next one. I can't believe he tried to open the body bag lol. I liked the beginning of this chapter...I'd be in Valerie's shoes too, wouldn't be able to help myself of laughing!
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 11:49 PST
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Oh God he's BORED...Can't wait to see what that's going to entail...
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 11:08 PST
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Wierd situation for Dieter, definately... wiat... did Evan say he was boreD? Not good...
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 09:54 PST
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dieter is hilarious. he's so strange lol. uh oh evans bored. good chapter
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 08:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh...Evan's getting bored. I really hope he doesn't do anything stupid.And Diet is waaaaay morbid. I actually know people like that. "Rubberneckers" we call um. I wonder if Evan will get V something while he's out.
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