| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 00:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! getting a new chapter from you is like going on a sugar high... you go up so quickly only to go down when you find out that you don't have any more...
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 22:13 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW! Evan is sooo cute! I wish I could find a guy like him in real life. He's a little dangerous but he's a big sweetie pie underneath! I love He and V's realtionship... and I think she likes it too. I know Evan likes it. I'm glad he didn't totally rip Bone a new one, But he really should have thought about what Evan would've wanted. I laughed when He locked up the house after breaking a glass door. It seemed ironic. But I can't wait for the Christmas Special! Oh and I cited you as an inspiration to my writing of fanfics! I hope you don't mind... But your stories are what got me to want to write a fanfic. I have a few chapters up but... I'm stuck again. My sister is supposed to help me over christmas break. but anyways... GREAT STORY! Keep up the amazing job! You never cease to amaze me! ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 21:51 PST
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Dr. Brown's Burn Ointment. Yeah, I know the stuff and love it for it's miracle-like properties. Though when we make it, it becomes more of a brownish color... though I did see a batch turn out brown-grey before... Evan's such a sweetie licking her scrape like that! Though Val would have likely killed him if she was awake for that! Heh, I predict them both being a little late tomorrow morning! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 17:21 PST
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Hmm....what is in that salve?? Now that Valerie asked that I can't remember if you've ever said what was in it before or not lol. I'm kinda glad that Bone fought back with Evan and that Evan didn't light into his head of security despite the fact that he probably wanted to. I'm looking forward to the Christmas one-shot; and so, until then :D.
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Title: Chapter 33: Awwwah! The fluff in the midst of frustration!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 14:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was cute and funny and go, V! You've got your own edit! Can we say bootleg? I kid, I Kid! I just LOVE reading how everyone's so curious about the dealing between V and Evan and how Dieter and Evan vibe together in recording. I can't get the word Fucker out of my head, Sue, and it's all Diet's fault! LOL! So, how many times has V sighed? Lost count. But I can't help but chuckle every time. Great chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 11:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Evan and V
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 11:35 PST
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Great Chapter as always. Its good to see V starting to enjoy Evans company even if it is just a bit. Thanks for the chap and ill be looking forward to the one shot you have in store. Happy Holidays!!
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 08:38 PST
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Yeah, I second that a new chapter is a good way to start my morning! Loved it! Guess Evan really is more like his grandfather than anyone else! Keh's and all! But how would Bone know that Evan was so bonded to her already? Evan was being a little unreasonable - (just like Inu!) Loved the chapter - a little sad there won't be more until after the holidays - but I'll deal *sniff* Hope your Thanksgiving was good, and your Christmas is great!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 04:44 PST
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eeeee!!! What a good way to start my morning of day 3 of getting probably less sleep than V is XD I'm curious though, just what is in that salve? ha ha ha god I love Evan and V together
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 01:24 PST
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This has nothing to do with the chapter but I'm just curious, what's the color of Evan's crests?
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Title: Ohhhh Crap!
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 11:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOH! Evan is MAD!! I wonder why Bone wasn't watching her? Does he not like Valerie too much? Hmm... Well all I know is that Bone is in for one HELL of a railing. I hope he isn't too hard on Bone though, and I hope that Valerie can calm him down a little. But We'll have to wait and see! Keep up the great work! I have to say I think this is one of your most vivid stories yet! ~MSMND
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Title: He's toast....
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 13:18 PST
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WIth that kind of reaction, Evan is definately toast - I'd bet his youkai has bonded to her more then he would care to admit.. and though she's falling for him.. V still thinks he's out of reach.. Evan better work on chaging her mind fast before she goes back to "pickle".. he's up to his neck now! :-) Thank you Sue for another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 03:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chappie! I love this story I wonder what Evan's going to do with that temper of his. so very much like his Granpa :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 01:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so he has a bit of a temper too...
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 22:59 PST
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So that's what happened at the beginning of the chapter. Valerie's been around so much lately, that it was likely that things happened and they forgot momentarily that she was only human. And, really, Bugs' bodyguards should at least try to be better at their job and not harass someone that's obviously with the party. Oh, well. Keep up the good work, dark
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