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Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2008 13:56 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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All I can say is, out of all the great things I learned about the castle de Zel, undie collection and all, the main thing, nay, I say the foremost thing un my mind id this: Evan said the M word! Okay, I coulda just melted into a puddle of pudding right there! Well, hell, I coulda swooned and expired at all the considerate things he did and the telltale unconscious leanings toward the mate band from bothe V and Evan. And whe she cuddled up to him and all but snuffled the guy in her sleep…okay, anyone? Got a Kleenex? This was surely one of my favorite chapters that remind me that I'm still a chic and I've got the discarded tissues-proverbial and real-to prove it. Well, okay, just one tissue--I'm not wuss! O-okay, dodging lightning her--4 tissues! Ihad a sniffle an--oh, shit **darts out of lightning path. Okay, I'm friggin' oxymoron: a mushy--sometimes--tomboy. Can't help it when i read the chapter like 3 times back to back with a vengence. it was really sweet is all.
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Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2008 13:35 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Dear God in Heaven, you know how to choke up a sister. Phew! V's just like her persona-the one she show's most of the world in general, is-a crab: hard on the outside to effectively shelter the tender innards. And it's showing up more and more in ever chapter; this one, especially. The fact that, even in her anger, outrage and hurt, she still felt obligated to not only meet Evan on his terms but then, after the fact, when the deed wasn't done, to let the guilt fester till she's convinced she's just a, a…thing to be used for the greater good, no matter the cost for Marvin. The conversation with Madison and later with Evan, not to mention the inner dialogue…makes my forehead wrinkle and my chest tighten ever so slightly in thought. Okay, I said no more rambling. On I go. I, Damn near. CHOKED reading the "how we met" convo between Evan and V. His Granpa Zedekiah, 82 years and strong "…and'll still take a youngin' over my knee if they sass me" comment he made was just friggin awesome-read it like 4 times in a row! I laughed till I bit my tongue! I loved the meeting with the parents, though I knew something was gonaa hit the fan when Cain saw her and I was right. And, OMG, Sue, I've been craving nonexistent Evan sausage for, well, what's today's date? I think I read this chapter a few days after it was posted. Okay, I'll quit. **snort** I loved this chapter because of how many emotions and discoveries and bits of humor and occasional potential fluff you squeezed into it.
 Title: What a BUTT
Reviewed By: Restlessloner [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2008 15:49 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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A lot of reviews are all like "we love you Evan! Valerie's wrong!" It seems like Valerie used to be just like Evan and Madison too at one point but she changed because there was OBVIOUSLY something wrong with the way she was living her life. Evan's just being a BUTT about it. Even though I like him anyway. It all reminds me of how Ryomaru was with Nezumi. lol Neither one of them is wrong really. Thier both just being kinda dumb, though Evan often steps over the line. My favorite is Bone out of the whole story. He is the least Butt-ish out of the whole story. :3 (sighs) I would so be the Mary Sue to Bone's OC. Lidia
 Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2008 12:03 PST
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I loved the "there will be NO chi opening!!" lol it made me laugh I have a feeling that during this tour(cause V is definitely gonna cave in and go) V is going to realize, or at least start to realize that she does have feelings for Evan, she probably does now, but she is just in denial. From what I gather she must of had a bad experience with a past man, whom she thought to be similar to Evan, so shes just scared. either way she really has to get rid of that tweeb Marvin. Like... what kind of relationship is that? hes ALWAYS gone and always puts off their wedding(for which im glad cause V has to marry Evan ;-;) gyah! DX
 Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2008 11:43 PST
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Interesting form of meditation... I ahve to say i agree with Evan, mind. Val doesn't "get" Evan and Maddy's unique relationship, but that doesn't make it wrong.
 Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2008 09:57 PST
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V is a really jealous girl lol she shouldnt try to make evan feel bad about everything and make him always seem like the bad guy. if i was evan that would just upset me. but i still want them to get together!!! lol update soon!
 Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2008 06:09 PST
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I just wanted to take the time to tell you how wonderful of a writer you are. I'm kind of one of those girls who is a closet anime/fanfiction freak. My friends are those girls that everyone wanted to be in highschool and I've never let them see this side of me. In fact the only person who knows my secret obsession is my sister Erin. (who I cosplay with ^^) I guess the point of this obnoxiously long rambling is that ever since I found your stories, I actually read about them in PUBLIC and brag about you to my friends. They sometimes make fun of me but I don't care your stories make me giddy :D! (I used to bring my laptop to work just to check for your latest updates!) Anywho I'm re reading one of your non purity stories and your ability to come up with original plot, non OC characters, and phenomenal dialog just blows my mind. I wish I had the drive to finish my ideas out and keep my readers guessing. this last chapter about Evan made me love him even more. I just love how he can outsmart the super intelligent Vallerie
 Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2008 02:15 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
another great chapter...
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 04, 2008 23:17 PST
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It really is Valerie refusing to look beyond her initial thoughts that's not letting things work out. And what plans does she have anyway? Afraid Marvin might pop in unexpectedly since he scedule was cleared of anything not pertaining to Evan in the first place. Or is she afraid that she might actually let herself feel what she already knows she feels. Keep up the good work, dark
 Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 04, 2008 22:55 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Oh wow! Four whole weeks of being on a US tour with the sexy Evan...What is wrong with V!? I would have jumped right on that! I wonder how Martin...um...Marvin will take the news. lol. Well crap. Now my chi is blocked. Excuse me while I get naked and try to find someone to unblock it. lol!!!
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 04, 2008 22:41 PST
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Wow, I really hope V changes her mind about the tour, that would be really bad if Evan had to cancel it; not to mention how pissed Mike would be, but I'm sure that Evan would probably be just as mad, considering he loves what he does! I love Bitches and her chi, she's freaking awesome! I hope we get to see lots more of her in the future chapters, I'm sure we will though :D! That aside, how are you and your family doing, Sue? Hope everything is settling down!!
 Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 04, 2008 09:46 PST
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Ah! I never got the email notification for a new chapter! Good thing I check MM every other day just in case!! Anywho.. I love Val's jealousy. And, awe.. she cares about Evan getting hurt.. how sweet!!
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 04, 2008 05:38 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome I loved this chappie - lot's of reflections :)
 Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 03, 2008 13:06 PST
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it is as it should be. The stalkee pays for the stalker's drinks/foods 8DDD I LOVE how he Always brings up the bushes thing on her lol, she always gets so flustered lol gah! If I haven't said it already I'll say it now.. I think Evan and V are my favorite Purity pairing so far lol
 Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 03, 2008 10:25 PST
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Ah-ha, Val's falling for Evan! Well, it's easy to understand, isn't it? I can't wait to see what she gets up to tonight... *mutters "free the fishies" with a stupid grin*
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