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 Title: awww Charity
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2017 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy guacamole...Poor Charity. I feel like with this chapter you really gave us a slight insight on Charity and I can't wait til you fully give us more on her and on Ben especially Ben. I have all these crazy theories in my head on how Ben came to be and what his backstory is! I'm just so giddy with excitement that you posted this story. Keep up posted and keep up the tremendous work you do with the Purity Series. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how Charity reacts with the twins!!!
 Title: Part 2
Reviewed By: Heaven-Lee NSI  On: May 24, 2017 04:55 PDT
Comment/Review:
(continued, I'm sorry) but it's there. All I can do is sigh happily and think, 'there it is. There's that moment.' Every one of your stories is made up of these. I cannot wait to see how you close the divide between Ben and Charity. Even though the pairing has been hinted about over and over, I can understand why she took a step back, and Ben with babies? Babies? Now, I admit, this concept never occurred to me (but then, that's not surprising, either, I don't think), and yet, it seems so perfect, too. After all, Ben's old, right? Well, old in terms of humans, at least. I don't know how old, but given that he was well into adulthood during Revolution, then it stands to reason that he's been around the block a number of times. Ben and babies means ridiculously happy sigh on this side of the monitor! I cannot WAIT to see how this one unfolds! In the words of Kagome, don't let me down! With much love forever, Kariann
 Title: I had to say ...
Reviewed By: Heaven-Lee NSI  On: May 24, 2017 04:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
As much as I adore your works (and make no mistake, I ENJOY your works like none other!) I'll admit, I've been a silent reader for years. I think that I just always felt, somewhere in my head, that you would just "know" how we all felt. That was probably a pretty stupid thing to assume, and I'm sorry. I started reading your work at the beginning of Purity (no joke! I think I read your first chapter the day you posted it. I have no idea how I managed to stumble across it, but I did). But, being a kid at the time (I was around 16, I think?) and a really crappy kid at that, I'll admit that I waited-WAITED-for you to screw up. I waited with baited breath for you to do something that I could jump on, so I could flame you. I wanted to because, to be honest (and I'm ashamed to admit it) I was ridiculously jealous of you and of the power you hold over words. Where I and so many others falter, I watched as you used WORDS to bend and to mold this universe, and I kept asking myself from chapter to chapter and story to story as I wiped tears from misery or laughter over and over again, as I sighed that dreamy little sigh because I was so HAPPY with those words and the magic they held. So I kept asking myself over and over just how you did it? I mean, they're just words, aren't they? How could you use these words to say exactly what would tug on our hearts? I read a quote you posted once, I don't know if it was your own or someone else's, but you'd said: WRITING IS PAINTING A PICTURE WITH WORDS, or something to that effect, and that, my dear, is what you do. Over time, I've started to understand what it is about the words you use, and I think it's just the ones that you choose that evoke such emotion, and I've long since decided that I cannot do what you do, so what I do instead is wait. I wait for you, Sueric. I wait for you to paint those pictures for me, and even if you only write for yourself, the countless paintings left in my head never leave me. THANK YOU for this. If you never understand how vast an impact you've left and continue to keep leaving on the fanfiction community on a whole, that's okay. Just understand the impact you've left on ME. But enough of that! I wanted to leave this comment about this story in particular (and I'm running out of character count, so please forgive me if I end up having to do two reviews, please)... Back in Purity 4 when Ben was introduced as a character, I thought he was interesting in a passing kind of way since he was a background character, kind of like the gray wash undertone of a painting that is there to do a job and he did. You did that well, which is another thing you do that fascinates me. You don't write a character 'just to write them'. There's always a reason, but I digress. Throughout the body of your work, my fascination for Ben grew, story by story and moment to moment, and when you threw these little bits of Charity into the mix? Well, I've anticipated this story like no other, and it killed me that you gave no indication that we'd ever actually 'see' how they come together, so imagine my ridiculously giddy squeal of joy when I clicked the link and read... Ben! But it's more than just Ben, it's Charity, too. She's a woman we can identify with. I think that, if we're honest, we can all admit to having that seed of insecurity deep within, kind of like Nezumi. But the thing that captured my attention the most in this chapter? It was the interaction with Sesshomaru that did it for me. We've seen him act wise and wonderful in Purity. We've seen him in all his stubborn glory in P2. We've seen his fierce desire to protect, even if it's not as on-the-sleeve as his half-brother, in P3. We've seen many different facets of his character in the stories, but we've never seen the special relationship that a grandfather always seems to have with his grandchildren until now. I cannot pinpoint it, but it'
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 23, 2017 16:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
Lady...if you keep this up I just may keel over with happiness. I cannot wait to see how this date kicks off and how it all comes together. You're great at weaving and developing characters and their relationships. I'm sure Ben will straighten out Charity's depreciating thoughts and the babies will help too. Thank you for the update Sue, keep 'em coming.
 Title: YAASSS
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 23, 2017 12:10 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy jeebus cheese and crackers!!! You have noooooooo idea how long I've been waiting for Ben to have his own story!!!God I don't know how many years its been since I first read the Purity story but holy guacamole!!!! So I see in the possible future that Ben will possibly get to adopt the twins and also finally after sooooooooooooooooo long get Chairty. Because I mean come one you've been playing with out feelings on these two since forever! lol But hot damn I'm glad you're back and I can't wait to see more of Ben and *whispers* charity as well...Can't wait for the next chapter and I most certainly can't wait for the next chapter of Purity 10! YAAAAAAAYYY!!!!!! You're back Sueric and hopefully back for good!! To give us more Purity goodness.
 Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 23, 2017 11:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
Its a good thing there is enough of Ben to go around, he now has 2 sets of fingers to wrap around. LOL babies are deadly adorable and Ben is a gonner!
 Title: I squealed...
Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 22, 2017 17:13 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
and promptly dug out my login details just to express how happy I am that (a) you're back and (b) despite Anolamy being on hiatus (which I'm crossing everything in the hopes that the hiatus ends soon) you've managed to give me something I've been hoping for...Ben. He has been such a great constant in the Purity universe and each encounter that we've had with him has endeared him to me. Finally him and Charity (you've been teasing us just so) and some twins. I do wonder if the Zelig twins are sorted for mates now with these two coming along. Please do not stop writing. You have made my day and I look forward to seeing what happens. Welcome back Sue!
 Reviewed By: Oh-Emm-Gee!!!  On: May 21, 2017 18:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sue!!! OMG, Sue!!! BEN!! NAKED (then only towel wearing) BEN!!! Wait, I think that I need a moment... Okay! Now that I've had my mo', let me tell you something. Way, way back when, years ago when you first posted Purity 4: Justification, I had this secret longing to meet this man known as Ben. I really cannot tell you just why I wanted to see more of this character (did I mention he was NAKED???) but c'mon! Now I know why! Though it interests me because he really does come across differently than he has through the various mentions in the other fics, but DAYUM! Now, my guess is that Ben is going to end up adopting these twins just because there's so much central talk regarding them, and can I say? OHEMGEE! So, if Ben adopts these precious babies, does that mean that he will also (FINALLY) get Charity, too? I mean, they're a canon pairing, right? (Is there such a thing as a canon pairing in a fanfic continuation series?) Well, if there is, they're definitely one, and is this why you never really moved them out of the cute-datey-phase? I'm not sure what sparked your muse, but I, for one, am eagerly awaiting this story. I love, love, love the way he seems to be a little more on the less-reserved side, but I wonder, is that because he's at home in his own domain, so to speak? If so, then it makes sense. There is just something ridiculously hot about that particular youkai, and I cannot wait to see what you've got in store for him-and for us! Welcome back, Sueric. You've truly, truly been missed!
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