| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Title: Another Chapter!!
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2017 22:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are too good to us Sue to give us another chapter, not that I
am complaining, I love it!! Chelsea is going to get into so much
trouble from Charity when she finds out that Chelsea told Ben about
her interest. But I understand why Chelsea did it, she is trying to
protect her twin. It will be interesting to see what Ben does with
the information.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2017 21:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Charity, she starts to fall in love with the twins and then
finds out that they may be adopted. I was surprised that Ben didn't
push more for the twins keeping their names but I think some part
of him realizes he isn't giving those girls up. I hope he is ready
to face an enraged Eddie when she finds out they may go. Looking
forward to more here and in Purity 10
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Xx-eww_noo-xX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2017 10:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I read the original purity when it first appeared so long ago.
Maybe last month I had this horrible itch to find it and read it
again. But I couldn't remember the name but I'm so glad I found it
because I felt like I already read all the good inuyasha and kagome
fanfics to death so many years ago. I knew there were sequels to
purity but I was hard headed and figured I wouldn't care for them
because they weren't based on inuyasha and kagome. But last month I
was like what the heck and started reading purity 2 and now I'm
here I have read ALL the purity stories and I love and enjoyed them
so much. Every second I get I would read them, I would stay up my
eyes burning with sleepiness in the early mornings just telling
myself "one more chapter and then I'll go sleep." I fell in love
with all the characters and I would think to myself that there is
no way the next story would be as good, but each time you would
prove me wrong. Haha, I just want to thank you for giving my a nice
escape and to see the world of your stories. I loved every second
of them. Hopefully you keep it up :)
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2017 02:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
I want to hold a parade for Chelsea. I found myself mentally egging
her on and clapping as soon as she levelled the question at him.
Now let's hope Ben is more panther than kitten in his response. I'm
loving the frequency of the updates and enjoying how thks is all
unfolding. Thanks Sue
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2017 14:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh goodness... I'm sad. He really loves them doesn't he? They both
do. Can you send Eddie in to do something about this please? A
couple of well placed words then I'm sure there will be order. I
love how they're getting to know each other after all this time, so
naturally. And yes, foxy panther. I'm sure Charity thinks Ben is a
foxy panther.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2017 04:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I go away for a few days and return to several chapters of goodness
waiting for me. You are right,shirtless Ben was a wonderful
distraction. Can you arrange for him to come for a visit? I will
return him to Charity undamaged in a few days. When I read about
shirtless Ben I wondered how Charity would react to towel-clad Ben
and then there he was! I agree with Eddie, I wish Myrna would have
shown up to see Ben and Charity together at breakfast. I look
forward to seeing how they get together and you work out all the
kinks in their relationship that you put into it ;-) I know
everything will work out the best for both of them and the twins.
Maybe Caine will have to have a word to Ben about not missing out
on love and happiness?
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2017 05:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
If probably choke on my coffee too if Ben walked in with just a
towel on lol now he just has to tell charity that the twins may
have a possible other home... and convince himself that he'll let
them go.
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2017 05:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for another great story. I've missed the purity universe An
am glad we get another look inside it.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2017 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait, wait, wait Ben has a brother?? Meaning there's another foxy
panther out there in the purity universe. Oh the possibilities.
Though more importantly, they're acting like parents but don't
realise it yet and an impromptu sleepover, yay. Though the morning
will bring Myrna...
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2017 07:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah those babies aren't going anywhere lol Ben is in love just
can't admit it yet!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2017 16:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh Sue...because of you and Ben I'm no longer living up to my name.
'Not so Silent Reader' doesn't have an ounce of mystery to it. But
on the brightside, the babies love her and Eddie loves her so
hopefully our resident panther will take the hint. Looking forward
to the next one.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2017 19:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
I forgot how much I loves your stories till o got the new chapter
email today. Just what i needed:) keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2017 16:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And we're off! Fantastic description of a shirtless Ben, I had such
a vivid flash (I'm still smiling) and I find it incredibly funny
that he is using one of Cain's excuses from when he was trying his
damndest not to pursue Gin. Well it's time to pay the piper
Benjiro, Charity is not 19 anymore. Thanks for the update Sue.
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Title: Yayy
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2017 14:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayy you are back!!! I am glad to see Ben and Charity's story
getting told. I can't wait to see Charity's reaction to the twins,
it could cause great misunderstanding or provide a platform for
clearing the air. Knowing you a bit of both will probably ensue. I
look forward to seeing more and more of Purity 10
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Title: Yayy
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2017 14:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayy you are back!!! I am glad to see Ben and Charity's story
getting told. I can't wait to see Charity's reaction to the twins,
it could cause great misunderstanding or provide a platform for
clearing the air. Knowing you a bit of both will probably ensue. I
look forward to seeing more and more of Purity 10
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