| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2017 11:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Yay! Yay! Unexpectedly, Manami in for the save. I can't wait
to see what happens next with Ben and Charity (I'm choosing to
ignore the impending danger for now).
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2017 07:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nice explanation from Manami to help clear the air. I loved the
final thought from Charity. I hope everything works out quickly for
them before Charity finds out Ben lied about needing to be in
Mexico, then Ben will have a leg up to get her to forgive him.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2017 05:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey sue if I have to sum my review up into a quick thing it would
be that I loved the final thought for this chapter lmao! I'm glad
charity can start to move forward now because she and Ben are so
cute. Btw I got the stories! Thanks! Can't wait for tomorrow's
chapter. I'm heading back out to see so hopefully the internet is
up so I can read it.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2017 13:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey sue this chapter was really sweet. I love the progress and the
back story we are getting from Ben. On another note I just bought 7
of your original works. I didn't buy the kids story and I actually
repurchased 4 of them that I already had because they were lost
when my hard drive died. Only problem is I haven't received the
stories yet. I bought them from your site suericfanfictions.com
please let me know if you received my order. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2017 01:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. The teasing between Ben and Kyouhei, between
Ben, Steve and Kyouhei was great. I was laughing as I read. Aren't
the girls lucky, two pretty uncle's on both sides of the family.
And the end, oh the end, Ben has finally started to let his
intentions be known. He has something to protect. No more kissing
old girlfriends and perhaps we may get a mating. Great work Sue.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2017 15:18 PDT
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My, oh my, I do wonder what Zelig sensei said to Ben to get him all
wound up that he jumped Charity. Though she's his mate, I guess
he's always ready to jump her and definitely different from his
kiss with Manami. I am really loving the organic way that your
revealing the nature of Ben's relationship with his parents and the
fracture between him and Kyouhei. Using Charity as a way to explore
all of the questions gives each revelation space to be itself and
for us to see it. I'm dreading what will happen with this uprising.
Sesshoumaru is strong, undoubtedly, so is Inuyasha and this is why
they've made sure they've trained all of their children to protect
themselves and their loved ones but just as Sammie was overwhelmed.
I fear that an extended battle may overwhelm them. I guess only
time will tell eh? Two great chapters, awesome writing. Keep them
coming Sue.
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Title: Awesome, as always
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2017 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say thank you for sharing your beautiful gift of
writing and the world you created for us. I am so busy and only
have time to read a few things. I came across your original Purity
story a few weeks ago and then all of a sudden my "favorite" author
was doing another Story in the Purity universe. Thank you!! I've
just finished the last chapter of Redux Fruition and I love Ben and
Charity. (I'm also reading Toga's story again now, so I guess you
could say I've started rereading them all.). Again, thank you. I
look forward to more chapters. They make my day.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2017 11:15 PDT
Comment/Review:
That intense kiss was unexpected but interesting. I was starting to
think Ben would never jump her. I also liked hearing more about
Ben's parents and get another view of their relationship. I feel
sorry for the brother though, he is going to be caught in the
middle. I hope he comes out ok.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2017 15:09 PDT
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I love that his youki spoke to her. It's a step in the right
direction to really prove how much she means to him. And even
better he's never slept with anyone so that'll help her already
failing security in his life. I do think that the men should know
by now protecting the women in their lives from knowing information
is going to have their mates pissed lol. Lovely chap
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2017 11:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
Aww! I love the Christmas pictures! And it was such a sweet moment
Ben and charity had on the beach. He all but said hey your my mate
so let's hope she catches on soon lol and here's hoping inuyasha
doesn't go and try and blow everyone up lol looking forward go more
:)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2017 10:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
I don't think you are holding updates for ransom. Just had to say
that. I am loving these peeks at Ben and his youkai, I hope Charity
listens to him/it and has fun. She was sounding so depressed for a
while. I still suspect a traitor being planted within the group and
am starting to doubt it is Ben's brother. It just seems too
coincidental that there are two threats without them being
connected too. I wonder if Unker realized he is being played to
take some scrutiny off the threat to Sesshomaru.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2017 00:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
What a lovely end to chapter and a wonderful twist in involving
Ben's youkai (clearly his smart side). Hopefully this will put them
on the road to healing because Charity's despair in chapter 25 was
all consuming, my heart broke. Now on to the two saddest days of my
week (because there are no weekend posts). Thanks for updating Sue,
you're doing a great job, have a great weekend.
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Title: I'm still here
Reviewed By: Moe On: June 21, 2017 20:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
It never ceases to amaze me how easily you make me ache for each
and every character. So unique in their self-doubt, some shaped by
centuries of it, and others with such self-conceived flaws, that it
must crush them to carry all of that burden. How beautiful the end
of this chapter was!! I loved the whole thing, but that image of
Charity, hugging her knees and sympathizing with a dying star, is
so beautifully sad. You really bring such a beauty and depth to
this universe. They are not lesser by being youkai, but richer from
their experiences and longevity. Thank you for continuing. As
always, I await more. :)
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2017 16:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh Sue, don't be discouraged. You're doing an awesome job and the
fact you are enjoying writing this story is coming through. I read
each chapter twice just so I can pick up on all of the nuances.
Plus Ben needs you, if there is anyone who can guide him out of
this crap storm and into a successful mating, it's you and I can't
wait to read it. Now it may seem that Charity will get her request,
at least Mexico and Maine both start with M's.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2017 15:34 PDT
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Triplets!! What a nice surprise! I just love how Evan was there to
throw in the milk man comment lol and it sounds like a war is
coming to them sooner rather than later. Everyone better get on
their toes!
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