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 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2017 11:46 PDT
Yay! Yay! Yay! Unexpectedly, Manami in for the save. I can't wait to see what happens next with Ben and Charity (I'm choosing to ignore the impending danger for now).
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2017 07:49 PDT
Nice explanation from Manami to help clear the air. I loved the final thought from Charity. I hope everything works out quickly for them before Charity finds out Ben lied about needing to be in Mexico, then Ben will have a leg up to get her to forgive him.
 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2017 05:26 PDT
Hey sue if I have to sum my review up into a quick thing it would be that I loved the final thought for this chapter lmao! I'm glad charity can start to move forward now because she and Ben are so cute. Btw I got the stories! Thanks! Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter. I'm heading back out to see so hopefully the internet is up so I can read it.
 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2017 13:24 PDT
Hey sue this chapter was really sweet. I love the progress and the back story we are getting from Ben. On another note I just bought 7 of your original works. I didn't buy the kids story and I actually repurchased 4 of them that I already had because they were lost when my hard drive died. Only problem is I haven't received the stories yet. I bought them from your site suericfanfictions.com please let me know if you received my order. Thanks.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2017 01:11 PDT
I loved this chapter. The teasing between Ben and Kyouhei, between Ben, Steve and Kyouhei was great. I was laughing as I read. Aren't the girls lucky, two pretty uncle's on both sides of the family. And the end, oh the end, Ben has finally started to let his intentions be known. He has something to protect. No more kissing old girlfriends and perhaps we may get a mating. Great work Sue.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2017 15:18 PDT
My, oh my, I do wonder what Zelig sensei said to Ben to get him all wound up that he jumped Charity. Though she's his mate, I guess he's always ready to jump her and definitely different from his kiss with Manami. I am really loving the organic way that your revealing the nature of Ben's relationship with his parents and the fracture between him and Kyouhei. Using Charity as a way to explore all of the questions gives each revelation space to be itself and for us to see it. I'm dreading what will happen with this uprising. Sesshoumaru is strong, undoubtedly, so is Inuyasha and this is why they've made sure they've trained all of their children to protect themselves and their loved ones but just as Sammie was overwhelmed. I fear that an extended battle may overwhelm them. I guess only time will tell eh? Two great chapters, awesome writing. Keep them coming Sue.
 Title: Awesome, as always
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2017 14:24 PDT
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Just wanted to say thank you for sharing your beautiful gift of writing and the world you created for us. I am so busy and only have time to read a few things. I came across your original Purity story a few weeks ago and then all of a sudden my "favorite" author was doing another Story in the Purity universe. Thank you!! I've just finished the last chapter of Redux Fruition and I love Ben and Charity. (I'm also reading Toga's story again now, so I guess you could say I've started rereading them all.). Again, thank you. I look forward to more chapters. They make my day.
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2017 11:15 PDT
That intense kiss was unexpected but interesting. I was starting to think Ben would never jump her. I also liked hearing more about Ben's parents and get another view of their relationship. I feel sorry for the brother though, he is going to be caught in the middle. I hope he comes out ok.
 Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2017 15:09 PDT
I love that his youki spoke to her. It's a step in the right direction to really prove how much she means to him. And even better he's never slept with anyone so that'll help her already failing security in his life. I do think that the men should know by now protecting the women in their lives from knowing information is going to have their mates pissed lol. Lovely chap
 Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2017 11:02 PDT
Aww! I love the Christmas pictures! And it was such a sweet moment Ben and charity had on the beach. He all but said hey your my mate so let's hope she catches on soon lol and here's hoping inuyasha doesn't go and try and blow everyone up lol looking forward go more :)
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2017 10:59 PDT
I don't think you are holding updates for ransom. Just had to say that. I am loving these peeks at Ben and his youkai, I hope Charity listens to him/it and has fun. She was sounding so depressed for a while. I still suspect a traitor being planted within the group and am starting to doubt it is Ben's brother. It just seems too coincidental that there are two threats without them being connected too. I wonder if Unker realized he is being played to take some scrutiny off the threat to Sesshomaru.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2017 00:52 PDT
What a lovely end to chapter and a wonderful twist in involving Ben's youkai (clearly his smart side). Hopefully this will put them on the road to healing because Charity's despair in chapter 25 was all consuming, my heart broke. Now on to the two saddest days of my week (because there are no weekend posts). Thanks for updating Sue, you're doing a great job, have a great weekend.
 Title: I'm still here
Reviewed By: Moe  On: June 21, 2017 20:38 PDT
It never ceases to amaze me how easily you make me ache for each and every character. So unique in their self-doubt, some shaped by centuries of it, and others with such self-conceived flaws, that it must crush them to carry all of that burden. How beautiful the end of this chapter was!! I loved the whole thing, but that image of Charity, hugging her knees and sympathizing with a dying star, is so beautifully sad. You really bring such a beauty and depth to this universe. They are not lesser by being youkai, but richer from their experiences and longevity. Thank you for continuing. As always, I await more. :)
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 21, 2017 16:47 PDT
Oh Sue, don't be discouraged. You're doing an awesome job and the fact you are enjoying writing this story is coming through. I read each chapter twice just so I can pick up on all of the nuances. Plus Ben needs you, if there is anyone who can guide him out of this crap storm and into a successful mating, it's you and I can't wait to read it. Now it may seem that Charity will get her request, at least Mexico and Maine both start with M's.
 Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 21, 2017 15:34 PDT
Triplets!! What a nice surprise! I just love how Evan was there to throw in the milk man comment lol and it sounds like a war is coming to them sooner rather than later. Everyone better get on their toes!
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