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 Title: Damn this is good!
Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2017 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You've done it again. Another masterpiece. At least the Unkers won't be bothering anybody again. Ben is going to be fine. He has to be. I can't wait to read more.
 Title: Damn this is good!
Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2017 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You've done it again. Another masterpiece. At least the Unkers won't be bothering anybody again. Ben is going to be fine. He has to be. I can't wait to read more.
 Title: Damn this is good!
Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2017 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You've done it again. Another masterpiece. At least the Unkers won't be bothering anybody again. Ben is going to be fine. He has to be. I can't wait to read more.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2017 15:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness... is Ben okay?!
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 10, 2017 16:54 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wait, so Coral is a badass? How have you kept this a secret Sue? I've read all of the Purity series and yet I can't remember this being hinted at in the rest of the stories. You are a purposeful writer so I'm sure this little nugget of information will only be further illuminated at some point. I love how unwittingly, despite centuries apart, Ben and Kyouhei are building a brotherly bond, you've woven them together not only by the circumstances of their upbringing but them discovering each other through their interactions. As for Gunnar...I cannot wait to meet his mate until then I'll be carefully cataloguing his denials alongside his sisters. Thanks Sue
 Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2017 21:46 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol. You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the past characters all come together and both the men and women kick some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
 Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2017 21:46 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol. You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the past characters all come together and both the men and women kick some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
 Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2017 21:46 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol. You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the past characters all come together and both the men and women kick some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
 Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2017 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol. You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the past characters all come together and both the men and women kick some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
 Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2017 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol. You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the past characters all come together and both the men and women kick some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
 Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2017 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol. You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the past characters all come together and both the men and women kick some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
 Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2017 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol. You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the past characters all come together and both the men and women kick some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
 Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2017 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol. You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the past characters all come together and both the men and women kick some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
 Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2017 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol. You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the past characters all come together and both the men and women kick some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
 Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2017 21:44 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol. You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the past characters all come together and both the men and women kick some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
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