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"Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ]
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 Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 21, 2017 11:59 PDT
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this story is coming together wonderfully, but with all the changes that MediaMiner has gone thru, not that many people are reading at or posting on it anymore. that may be why the reader count is so low. It almost shut down a couple of times. One of the long time Authors took over as moderator and really turned the site around. hopefully the reader count will continue to rise now that you are posting here again. Many of the excellent and prolific authors stopped posting here because it got too difficult and went to AO3. I am hoping that they will come back too.
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 21, 2017 10:06 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't been reviewing even though I have been reading. *blush* I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Charity is going to be so upset with Ben when she finds out she isn't getting snow and that he and her father were keeping such important secrets from her. I am also suspicious of the brother and old friend showing up so conveniently. I am just not sure which one is the traitor against Ben.
 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 21, 2017 04:52 PDT
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HEY! I'm sure a lot of people are reading this story. Some just don't take the time to review, or are like myself and can only get time to review sometimes. Never doubt that you have a huge following. I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES INCLUDING YOUR ORIGINAL WORKS!!!! I was just on your website and wondered when you were going to convert Purity 9 into PDF for download like the others. I told you I reread them all the time. Anyways I love this story so far. Ben and Charity are so sweet together, I've been wondering about them from a few stories back. You don't usually spend too much time introducing characters and going back to them if you don't have plans for them. Kinda like Aiko who's always been a bit illusive to me. I was wondering is fruition going to be like Morio's story where its kind of a shorter independent story or will it be a full on purity journey like the numbered stories? Just wondering. Anyways I'm enjoying my read, I dread the weekends because I know there are no chapters then. Aww well. Keep posting!
 Title: You're awesome
Reviewed By: Riker  On: June 20, 2017 22:00 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have been reading your stories for years. I was thrilled to see that you had come out with another story. I check every night to see if there is a new chapter. Thank you so much for writing these stories, and know that I will continue to read these for as long as they are available. Keep up the good work, Sueric.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 20, 2017 10:39 PDT
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And just when I thought that Benjiro couldn't get anymore stupid, he goes and says the phrase that no one should ever say and now fate is going to accept his challenge. I'm preparing myself for a cliffie. Thanks for the update Sue.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 19, 2017 14:21 PDT
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Kyouhei, Kyouhei, Kyouhei... aren't you astute. Far more so than your big brother who is lacking brain cells and fumbling around while danger is creeping all the more closer! *sigh*. Let's hope Eddie's words helped and speaking about Eddie, I can't wait to see more of her beau. Thanks Sue
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 17, 2017 04:09 PDT
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What a packed chapter. Kyouhei may not be a foxy panther but by your description he is definitely foxy. I really like how we're slowly getting into Ben's back story and now with impending coup (while Kagura is pregnant) involving Grandpa Ben plus baby snatchers I'm sure more things wilk come out of the woodwork. Great work Sue. I'm still waiting for Ben to make amends though...can't Inuyasha rough him up just a little.
 Reviewed By: Evloner  On: June 16, 2017 08:22 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great work as always. I just spent the last 2 days bing reading and what a pleasurable experience. I love how you integrated elements from past stories which serves as an added treat to those of us who are avid readers of the purity series.
 Title: What!?
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 15, 2017 13:50 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So glad to see your posting again Sue I read on your website that things are still kind of rocky at home I hope they improve I've been really wanting to read the story I'm so happy that you're writing it hope you are well
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 15, 2017 01:59 PDT
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So despite being so old Ben is proving that even with age men are stupid. I really do hope that it is someone friendly at the door. I've lived this week on the cliffs you've left me on, it's bad for my heart Sue :p. Though there is some reprieve from the angst...foxy panther has a name!
 Reviewed By: Rae  On: June 15, 2017 00:57 PDT
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Ughhhhh my heart is breaking for Charity....Ben needs to do something QUICK.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2017 22:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sigh...just sigh...my heart breaks for Charity and I'm now sure that despite Sesshoumaru's opinion, Toga has not spent enough time with Inuyasha. If he had, that conversation would have turned out very differently.
 Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2017 18:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
All I gotta say is Ben better start practicing his speech on how he's gonna fix this shit storm he started. Ugh poor Charity...i would be sobbing my heart out.
 Title: You got me
Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2017 16:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
I was expecting much more angst but the next chapter hasn't erupted yet. Charity needs to pull out that infamous temper of her Great Uncle and put it to good use. She may have kissed him but he didn't stop her and in front the ENTIRE FAMILY! I'm mad for her, he needs a swift kick in the heinie *in nun Gin voice*. What's interesting is he knows that she is his mate, I wasn't so sure at first. But I need him to stop the snails pace before my girl Charity combusts from lack of lovin. lol great chap
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2017 03:38 PDT
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I just want to hug Charity and I want Inuyasha to throttle Ben...repeatedly. I really don't know what in the world that Ben could say to make amends. Charity just started hoping again *sigh*. Great writing as per and another cliffie (why so mean Sue :p)
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