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 Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 19, 2017 10:43 PDT
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Well, craps getting real, and the troops are gathering. The bad guys want everything out in the open and humans along with hanyou eliminated or enslaved. Team Taisho is going to have to stomp a LOT of idiot ass in order to quell this thing. Ben is going to have to rescue his little brother, and stomp his father into the ground without killing him or his pregnant mother...then go home and mate Charity. Did I miss anything? Does this mean that we are going to get to see Sess in his true form? Gin is going to be hurt that her Oji-chan lied to her about being too old to shift anymore. LOL this is getting so exciting, I can't wait, Sue, so please put me on the more posts the better team. Think you, and love the way your mind works.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 19, 2017 09:22 PDT
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Eeeeekkkk two chapters! There's so much happening and I'm afraid for Kyouhei. His parents wouldn't kill him would they? But all we've seen so far suggests that they would. Thank goodness Charity specialises in plants maybe she can save Manami. I feel awful for Ben, no matter what these are his parents what an awful decision and blow he will have to make. Also, in all this where is Mikio? He wasn't at the move and neither was Madison and there was some mention of surgery. I do hope he is okay.
 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 19, 2017 04:10 PDT
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I've been loving the chapters!!! especially when Inuyasha came down just to talk to his great niece I thought it was super sweet. Are you doing like a purity subseries? what is the whole redux thing?? I'm really curious. I like it especially since knowing you planned to end the series with Gunnar's story and mikio's is #10, and I believe you said gunnar's was 11, its nice to be getting more stories from this beloved universe you've created. I hope you get back to Mikio's story, I caught a glimpse of what would happen when you mentioned Madison cancelling on babysitting her brother due to a surgery, which I took could only mean one thing. I won't ruin it for the others, but I think you know what I mean. I'm excited...can't wait to read more!!!
 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 19, 2017 04:10 PDT
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Hey Sue I'm not logged in but its me oblivion-bringr. I've been loving the chapters!!! especially when Inuyasha came down just to talk to his great niece I thought it was super sweet. Are you doing like a purity subseries? what is the whole redux thing?? I'm really curious. I like it especially since knowing you planned to end the series with Gunnar's story and mikio's is #10, and I believe you said gunnar's was 11, its nice to be getting more stories from this beloved universe you've created. I hope you get back to Mikio's story, I caught a glimpse of what would happen when you mentioned Madison cancelling on babysitting her brother due to a surgery, which I took could only mean one thing. I won't ruin it for the others, but I think you know what I mean. I'm excited...can't wait to read more!!!
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 18, 2017 14:20 PDT
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Unless mine eyes deceive me you treated us to an early chapter. Thanks Sue. Now please let Ben get back to Japan and save Manami because his father can only have ugly plans in store.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 17, 2017 18:34 PDT
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I've wondered if somehow Ben was the only youkai without crests and here there are placed where it suits him. I agree with Ben's gut feeling and I too am worried about Manami and Kyouhei. I really like how you've written Charity's process of dealing with the fight. Healing and acceptance are processes, others can encourage and guide you but ultimately if it doesn't come from you it won't work. I love how you managed to bring the American Purity contigent under one roof for the move, their interactions with each other make me smile and of course it ended with a spar. So... they have babies...they've moved in together...when is Ben going to propose/mate her. Does Inuyasha need to give Ben a talk on the dangers of a delayed mating? Thanks for the chapter Sue
 Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 17, 2017 05:00 PDT
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I have to admit I'm beginning to feel uneasy as well. That's how well you convey the emotions your characters feel. Always reading even though your moving too fast for me to review lol. Great Chap
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2017 16:21 PDT
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Fans herself. Re-reads and continues to fan herself. Do panthers purr Sue?
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 15, 2017 16:56 PDT
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And this is why Inuyasha is my favourite. I love how as we read through purity he continues to grow/mature but is still somehow the character we were introduced to so long ago and love. You write him wonderfully Sue. Hopefully his intervention as sensei, great uncle and fellow hanyou will finally release chsrity from her emotional prison. Oh and btw, weekend posts are A.W.E.S.O.M.E
 Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 15, 2017 12:02 PDT
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And then some
 Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 15, 2017 11:59 PDT
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I love, absolutely love, the way you write InuYasha. You have kept him in charactor as he gets older and the way you have had him mature is wonderful. How he handled Charity's guilt was perfect and the way he gave her permission to cry just this once made me cry.I love how you write these stories and this family. I will be a fangirl till the day I cant read any more.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 14, 2017 08:07 PDT
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Weekend updates?! Yay. Yay. Yay. And I hope that Inuyasha can help Charity. Does this mean they're going to Japan? Ben is going to run into his dad...
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2017 16:19 PDT
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Emotions are funny things and sometimes we forget how fierce they can be when it seems we may loose something or someone we love. I'm glad that Ben has been able to talk some sense into her and I hope our resident foxy panther gets better soon. I laughed at the scene between Toga, Cain and Ben, "house cats" indeed. Purity 2 seems so long ago, I'll have to revisit it once you've finished taking us through Friution. Though Sue...the best part of this entire chapter for me was "Kyou-chan". Thanks for that and for the update.
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2017 13:21 PDT
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I love that a few words from Ben comforts Charity when no one else could get through, including her youkai. I am feeling a little guilty I suspected Manami and Kyouhei of nefarious deeds earlier. I really hope Kyouhei makes it out ok and not too damaged by this mess with his parents. I hope Hect takes the news of his parents deaths ok too.
 Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2017 13:52 PDT
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I'm caught between elation at Charity's prowess in the defence of her family and the creeping worry of Ben's condition. I'm so glad Manami and Kyouhei were there/are there and Toga is on his way. But doesn't this put Kyouhei in a more dangerous position?? *sigh* Thanks for the update Sue.
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