| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 171 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 16:55 EDT
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Duuuuuuude!!! ^___^ That chapter was way too short, but it still kicked ass! DAMN Trunks is a spoiled little brat!! O_o;;
Lol...but anywho...
I'm still working on that artwork for your story, so don't worry!!! I didn't forget about it!!! ^_^
Ja 4 Now!
~*Hisaki*~ |
Reviewed By: Kittykat88 On: October 13, 2002 19:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV THIS STORY PLZ CONTINUE, I can't wait for the P/T momments please hurry |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: October 13, 2002 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I glad to find you are continuing this fic here. I was reading it on ff.net and had checked your website, but didn't see an update. The boys really are having a hard time, aren't they? Can't wait to see how you continue this. I have to feel a little sorry for Trunks. At least Goten has a something to look forward to and it's not that long of a wait. |
Reviewed By: FloralBlackMoon On: October 12, 2002 22:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I am completely dazzled by your way of writing and you intense scenes. You're wonderfully wet lemons and marvoulous plot. I would love it if you e-mailed me when you update. mm.org or ff.net, if you post there.
my e-mail address is "spicywhitestar@hotmail.com" |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 21:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
Woo hoo! Good to see your fic on MM, Gokusgirl! Even though I get early reading rights, I'm so glad you're posting it here so others get to read it.
Y'all just wait - it gets even better!!!
Meliza |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 16:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good fic....i just dont like marron :|
w/e
good job ne ways |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo!!! This is now DEFINATELY one of my most favorite stories EVER!!!
G/B and T/P Forever!!! =D
I don't hate Marron really...I DESPISE her!!! Well, I shouldn't say that. I think Marron is a really cool character and everything, I just totally hate and despise her when she's paired up with Goten or Trunks!!! Ubuu and Marron, dammit!!! They're both minor characters, really...plus, I think they look cute together!
o.O;
But I understand that this whole thing was done for a reason and for a point in your story, so I'm NOT flaming, kay? Just stating a certain fact...I actually had to pair up Goten and Marron in my story "Saiyajin Training" to make a point about something, but there weren't any sex scenes. Whatever!!! ^_^
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Please E-mail me and let me know when you update and if you would like me to draw pictures for you to go along with this story!!! I know a lot of my artwork is computer art and it's not really the best, but I'm going to be able to get my hand artwork on the computer by using the scanner at my school in Art class, so just e-mail me when you can!!!
Wow this review is WAAY too big!! O_o;; Lmao...
Ja 4 Now!!!
~*Hisaki/Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 16:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude...you are such a great writer!!! I love this!!! Do you need anybody to do any artwork for you and this story? I could do it if you want!!! ^_^ I love this...and I'm gonna shut up right now so I can read more!!
~*Hisaki/Rizu-chan~* |
Reviewed By: Keeren_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 00:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, I really liked that ^_^ |
Reviewed By: gofffff On: September 20, 2002 11:15 EDT
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cool |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 13:04 EST
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I need more, this is one of my fav. stories!!!
More!
Pwease..? |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura On: September 19, 2002 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty damn good...i dont like the threesome idea, ive never liked that idea, but everything else is good |
Reviewed By: Digibitch (not signed in) On: September 19, 2002 23:06 EDT
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That was really a twist from what I'm used to, but please write more!!! |
Reviewed By: kittykat88 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 17:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool I can't wait till the next chapter please continue |
Reviewed By: Pia Bartolini On: December 04, 2002 21:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has been pretty good so far...I'm not totally down with some of the concepts but you've pulled them off really well, all things considered. Keep up the good work and I WANT MORE CHAPPIES!!!!! |
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