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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 02, 2004 20:14 EST
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 02, 2004 20:12 EST Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm so sorry it has taken me so long to review everyone's stories!!! You see my Dad has been in the hospital and I had to stay with him..So needless to say when I went to read my mail today I had more than 21 updated stories..and some of them where from the same Author and some from author's I haven't herd from in a while witch was a wonderful surprise!!Sooo all this means I have to do a mass update and I'm sorry for that ..You see I'm so tired I only go two hours sleep last night so don't ask me what is keeping me going..Now this is my review..I have read everyone's stories yes I sat here and read them all ..And I really enjoyed them..And to all of you,You did a great job ,good writing,great story line ,good imagination...Please update again soon...I think on one of the stories I've read some one wanted a challenge uhmm ok I would like to see an 1x2x5 3x4 with Duo leaving for a year at the end of the 2nd war and showing up at the end of that year with a child about 3 mounts old. The child would be Duo's and it's mother died in child birth so now the pilots will live together and raise the child... While 1x2x5 get together ..Well it was just a thought for a challenge...I have to go and get some sleep ..I will leave you with this if you keep writing I'll |
Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 02:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only got to read this now because of work work work. I was not a happy chappy either because I couldn't read this when I knew it was here. Anyway lovely chapter with humour, sap, tears many emotions, Trowa being cornered for being insensitive, heh. Great read and the emotions are all over the place which is to be expected when one is pregnant. Quatre and Duo were so cute together that I felt a little sorry for Trowa. Excellent chapter and I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 12:27 EST
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This was a very strange chapter, especially at the end. *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 28, 2004 10:55 EST
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Cute chapter! Update soon and keep up the awesome job!
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 11:32 EST
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well that was an interesting chapter...*shifty eyes* HA! Trowa has a fascination with big ear *starts rolling on the ground laughing her head off* that's just too good...but crying over that movie....talk about horomones!! *shakes her head* meh, whatever... I can't wait until Heero comes home though.. I want to see what happens next with the carseat of doom!! lol ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: yukiko123 On: November 27, 2004 10:14 EST
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Mmmm .... this is .... kinda strange ... I like when you exolain fir the hirmone and strangeoccasion like crying for who know why but ... the discussion with Noddy ..... you just scared me ...
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Reviewed By: a On: November 24, 2004 13:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that Heero and Wufei will have the same problem with the seat so that Quartre, Trowa, and Duo will laugh at them. Come on, Quartre, you at least should know how it goes in. You do have 29 sisters and one of the should have a baby that you had to babysit at the last moment.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 19:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, heh, alright I better stop there but this is one hell of a hilarious chappie. That carseat, I can't wait for Heero to get home and shame the other laddies, heh. Quatre sweet Quatre and his potty mouth, heh, heh, okay I loved this chappie and I am starting to like the carseat, heh...
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 09:39 EST
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it happened again!! the carseat really is the spawn of satan...*snickers* i still can't believe that three gundam pilots have been defeated by the likes of a carseat... *snickers* can't wait to see the next chappie ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 20:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, So that's why Duo can't accept the car. At least he has it on loan. I think that the Devil himself made that baby seat. Great chapter! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 21, 2004 17:48 EST
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This chapter was very cute and funny!
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 14:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder why Duo can't accept the car? Great and funny chapter! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 18, 2004 20:24 EST
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Update soon and keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 13:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this is one of the funniest chapters to this story, and I love the way poor Quatre learned his lesson...Don't touch the ice cream while Duo is attached to it, heh. Excellent chapter love the last bit...Looking forward to the next chappie...
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Reviewed By: kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 09:37 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL trowa got attacked by the babysit...hahahahaha....that's hi-larious! i can't believe that Trowa actually got attacked by a babysit and it hit him that bad! oh and Heero owns a pink apron! hahahahahahhaa And I still say that it would be funny if when Wufei came home, he was able to put the babyseat in, in like three seconds flat, *snickers at the thought* after Trowa has injuries to his face and the whole thing... OMG!!! Quatre bought them a car! dude i want to be friends with Quatre now....lolol That is sooooo cool, maybe they can now go out and buy a babysit that's easier to install *Snickers* I can't believe the babyseat has gotten the best of three pilots...man, that's sad *nods* ~KIM~
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