| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 07, 2004 17:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! The last part was so hilarious! Update soon and keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 11:57 EST
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i have to agree that i hope nothing happens to heero, i don't even wanna think about what that would do to poor Duo especially with a baby *sighs* plus I think that Heero would be likely to ignore his own injuries if he found out that duo was upset and in hospital again or something because of it... *nods* update again soon ^-^
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 03:06 EDT
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That was so sad yet happy all at the same time.I hope that nothing happens to Heero at all.I really like the whole part with Tro and being able to cook and all.I hope to see more of this fic really soon so that mean UPDATE SOON....ja ne
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 25, 2004 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awh taht was so sad.. I hope nothing goe rong with Heero and Wufei. I can just see a pregnet Duo Running to the rescue...lol Update again soon...
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 21:46 EDT
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and it erased the rest of my review...as I was saying..I love Heero and this fanfic is just reenforcing that so much *huggles shenlong* I hope that you update soon ^-^ have a great vacation ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 21:45 EDT
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awww i loved {"Heero pulled away from Duo's neck and brought his thumb up to rub away the spilling liquid. "Don't cry, I'll be back before you know I'm gone."}
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 24, 2004 16:48 EDT
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Simply excellent.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 19, 2004 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS CHAPTER WAS AWSOM PLEASE UPDATE.. NOW I can't get enough of this story..
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Title: Re Dusty Z
Reviewed By: GW_ShenLong [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 08:30 EDT
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I'm sorry that you feel that way. I did state in my authors note that this was not intended as a swipe at any religious group as I believe in everyone to their own belief. As for the Mormons, my housemate is one and she happened to suggest that I use the Mormon religion for that part of the fic. Again as per the note, I'm sorry if anyone was offended it wasn't my intent.
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(2lazy2login) On: October 18, 2004 20:53 EDT
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I loved this chapter! 39 chapters and Duo is only half way through pregnancy *groans* man this could take a long time but meh, that means that we're going to have more lovely Heero and Duo-ness to live with and that is never a bad thing ^-^...I didn't know that Heero wanted to leave sometimes but then again i can't blame him...trust me, if someone was that moody with me, I would think about leaving a couple of times too but it's cool that Heero is still there ^-^ Go speech-giving Trowa btw *huggles Trowa* oh and I can't wait to see Heero come back and find Trowa, Quatre and Duo on the floor pigging out on ice cream *snickers* Hope you have a good trip and I hope to see the next chapter soon ^-^
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Title: ch69
Reviewed By: priscel *appears in a wisp of smoke* On: October 18, 2004 20:06 EDT
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WAAAA he proposed!!!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: October 18, 2004 15:50 EDT
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that's gotta be the first time i've ever heard heero even mentioning of leaving duo, even though he says that he wants to marry him. it's good that he brought his fear out in the open, but it was still a surprise. trowa really helped out here, and i can't wait to see wufei come in. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dusty Z. On: October 18, 2004 12:13 EDT
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I was disappointed in reading your snipe about Mormorns in this chapter. Maybe your only exposure to one was at the door, but if you've ever had one as a best friend or neighbor, as I have, then you know that they are some of the best people you can know. They and the JWs go to your door as part of their religion, all you have to do is say your not interested and they respect that. Why do people think so badly of people who are just trying to live a good life? why not turn Duo's surly attitude towards someone who truly deserves it.
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Reviewed By: rw On: October 18, 2004 11:17 EDT
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Don't forget to mention the spectacular hair and nail growth associated w/ the vitamins. That could be a bitch to deal w/.
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 09:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fanfic!! Sure it took a while to read all 68 chapters but eh, I was bored! LoL ... awesome fanfic and you really made it believable about Duo having a kid and Heero's protectiveness and all that! But man, boy is Duo moody lol (stupid pregnancy hormones)! Poor Heero doesn't seem to know what to do most of this fic...I can't wait to see the baby when it's born ^-^ it's going to be soooo cute (come on, if you had Heero and Duo for parents you would be a good looking baby too lol) So Can't wait to see what's going to happen next (poor Duo being stuck with the mother hen for the next week) so hope you update soon...not to mention Duo's going to get married to Heero ^-^ Go Heero!!!!!!!!!! ~KIM~
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